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2025-2026学年八年级英语上册单元复习考点培优沪教版(2024)Unit 4 Inventions
专题15 书面表达
学校:___________姓名:___________班级:___________考号:___________
1.在建设海南自贸港的背景下,英语的重要性逐渐显现并不断增强。假如你是李华,某软件公司准备开发一款适合当地居民在业余时间学习英语的APP,邀请你一起参与设计。请根据下文提示用英语向该公司介绍你的构想。
The name of the APP Happy English Learning
Contents English news, movies, songs , games
The advantages of the APP 1.make it easy to study; 2.improve listening and speaking; 3. ...
注意事项:
(1)必须包含提示内容,可适当发挥;
(2)意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
(3)词数90左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
(4)请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。
Here is my design for the new APP.
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2.世界上有很多发明,它们正在渐渐地改变我们的生活。在英语课上,同学们正在准备以“The invention that influences my life most”为主题的演讲活动。请你以李华的名义写一篇演讲稿,向同学们介绍一项对你影响最大的发明。
提示内容:
1. What is the invention that influences your life most
2. How does it influence your life
3. What’s your feeling about it
写作要求:
1. 演讲稿须包括所有提示内容,可适当发挥;
2. 词数80左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone! I am Li Hua and I’m very happy to stand here to talk about an invention that influences my life most.
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Thanks for your attention!
3.亲爱的同学们,假如你是一名机器人发明家,你会设计具有什么特殊功能的机器人呢?又会让它来解决人们日常生活中的什么难题呢?请设计你梦想中的机器人,并参考以下问题进行描述:
1.它有哪些特殊功能(至少两个)?2.这些功能能如何帮助人们?3.你如何评价它?
参考表达方式:1. It will... 2. It can... 3. I think it is... because...
(50词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数)
My Dream Robot
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4.假定你是李华,你的美国笔友Justin对中国的新四大发明(the high-speed railway,mobile payment,shared bikes,online shopping)很感兴趣,请你给他写一封邮件,对其中的“共享单车”做简单介绍,内容包括:
(1)使用方法;(2)优势;(3)你的看法。
要求:(1)80词左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
(2)文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名;
(3)可适当增加细节,以使文章条理清晰、行文连贯;
(4)标点正确,书面整洁。
Dear Justin,
As we all know, China is developing at high speed and many kinds of new inventions have appeared. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
5.假设你是李华,你校英文报社新增了关于项目式学习的专栏,你所在小组刚完成的项目是“设计校园智能机器人”,请你代表小组向专栏投稿,介绍你们设计的机器人,项目进行中遇到的困难及解决办法,并分享你的收获。
注意:
(1)词数80~100,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3)文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Hello everyone. I am Li Hua, and I am delighted to share our group’s project on designing a campus smart robot.
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6.科技改变了我们的生活,相信每个人都深有体会。请你以“Technology Changes Our Lives”为题,根据要求用英语写一篇短文,讲述科技是如何改变我们的生活的。
内容包括:
1. 科技使日常生活更便捷:可以在网上学习,可以随时随地跟远方的朋友聊天,机器人送餐;
2. 使生活更丰富多彩(如电视或短视频等);
3. 我们应该合理利用科技,但不能过多依赖它。
注意:1. 词数80左右;2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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7.假如你们学校要开展一个科技节活动,你针对现在学生坐姿不正确和玩电脑、看电视时间过长等情况,发明了一把特殊的椅子。请根据以下提示写一篇发言稿,给同学们介绍一下你的发明。
发明 一把特殊的椅子
材料 由木材制成
功能 1. 椅座和椅背都有传感器。当学生没有坐直时,椅子会发出提醒; 2. 坐在椅子上超过一小时,椅子就会发出声音,提醒学生起来活动一下。
优点 ……
词数:100左右。
提示词语:sensor 传感器; the back of the chair 椅背; sit up straight 坐直。
Dear classmates,
I am glad to introduce my invention to you.
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Thanks for your listening!
8.如今,越来越多的家庭拥有了智能设备,如智能音箱、智能手表等。请你根据自己的生活体验,以“My Smart Device”为题,写一篇英语短文,介绍你家中的一款智能设备。内容包括:
1. 设备的名称和外观;
2. 它的主要功能;
3. 你对它的评价。
要求:
1. 包含所有要点,可适当发挥;
2. 词数150左右;
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
9.电脑在我们的工作、生活中作用越来越大,你知道它的起源与发展吗?请根据下列提示谈谈它的发展变化,并说明我们应如何正确地运用电脑。
要求:1.短文应包括图表中的全部信息,条理清楚,行文连贯;
2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名;
3.不少于80词,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Product computer Advantages (优点) 1. Be used to count (计算),now.…
When 1946 2. Open our eyes...,know about...
Who John and J. Eckert 3. Listen to...
Be made of ... Disadvantages (缺点) 1. play computer games
Size Used to be big, now... 2. ...
Computers are becoming more and more important in our daily life. Do you know the history and the changes of computers
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10.科技赋能“智能杭州亚运”,做到了“相知无远近,万里尚为邻”,可谓科技改变生活,根据写作要求,请以“Science and Technology Changes Life”为题,用英语写一篇短文,盘点高科技如何改变我们的生活。
内容包括:
1.科技使日常生活更便捷;
2.使生活更丰富多彩;
3.合理利用,不能过多依赖。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不得出现反映考生信息的真实人名、地名等内容。
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11.如果你将来有一个机器人,你想用它来干什么呢?为此,你们班在英语课上进行了激烈的讨论,50%的学生想让机器人帮忙做家务或照顾老人;30%的学生需要它来帮助他们学习或者和他们聊天、娱乐;剩下的20%的人有各种各样的不同的想法。请用英语写一篇短文,总结讨论的情况。
要求:
(1)文中不能出现真实的校名和姓名等;
(2)语言要通顺,表达要正确;
(3)要求包含题干中的讨论结果,为了行文需要,可适当增加要点;
(4)词数不少于80,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
If we have a robot, what shall we ask it to do We have a heated discussion in our English class. Here are the results.
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12.近年来,电脑成了我们生活的一个重要部分,甚至和我们的学习生活息息相关,某校英文杂志社开辟中学生专栏,请你以“The greatest invention—the computer”为题写篇短文,为该杂志社投稿。
内容包括:
1. 电脑的用途(包括:可以学习、上网查资料;可以听音乐、看电影使自己放松;可以发送邮件与别人保持联系);
2. 倡议中学生正确使用电脑。
要求:
1. 词数不少于80(文章开头已给出;不计入总词数);
2. 短文必须包括所给的内容, 可以适当增加细节,使行文连贯;
3. 文中不许出现真实的班级和姓名。
The greatest invention—the computer
In modern society, we can not imagine living in a world without computers.
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13.AI (人工智能) 的发展催生出了许多智能产品,陪护机器人 (companion robot) 就是其中之一。如果你的父母不在家,你是否会选择和陪护机器人待在一起呢?请你根据写作要求,结合自身实际,从以下观点中任选其一,用英语写一篇短文,陈述你对陪护机器人的观点。
YES NO
☆ wise and knows a lot ☆ can talk with me ☆ will never get tired ☆ expensive ☆ can’t look after me like a real person ☆ needs to be charged (充电)
写作要求:
1.文中须包含所选观点的要点提示,可适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称;
3.词数100左右 (开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Will you choose to stay with a companion robot if your parents are not at home
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14.假定你是李华,你设计的机器人在徐州校园科技节中获奖,并受邀在“魅力徐州,科技领航”城市交流中展示你的机器人。请根据以下内容,用英语向来自世界各地的嘉宾介绍你的设计。
1. What does your robot look like
2. What can it do
3. What advantages does it have
注意:
1. 词数90词左右。
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名地名和校名。
Ladies and Gentlemen,
My name is Li Hua. I’m from Xuzhou. I am glad to tell you something about my robot here. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
15.2025年春晚机器人跳舞的节目引起了很大的轰动。机器人时代似乎离我们越来越近。你们班就此话题展开了讨论,请根据以下表格信息写一篇作文,并发表一下你的观点。
优点 缺点
1. 机器人能帮忙做家务:扫地,做饭…… 2. 机器人能在危险或很脏的地方代替人类工作 3. 工厂里的机器人能造车,能反复做简单的工作而不疲惫 1. 机器人做了太多工作之后,会导致一些人失去工作 2. 制造和维修机器人会很昂贵 3. 太依赖机器人,人类会变得懒惰
要求:
1.包含提示中的内容,可适当发挥;
2.不要出现真实校名和姓名;
3.词数:不少于70词。
提示词汇:
优点:advantage 缺点:disadvantage 人类:human
修理:repair 依赖:depend on 有害的:harmful
Robots: Helpful or Harmful
Nowadays, robots are becoming more and more popular. They have both advantages and disadvantages. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
16.2025 年中国蛇年春晚的《秧 BOT》节目吸引了全世界的目光,让中华优秀的传统文化焕发了全新生命力。DeepSeek的横空出世更是让世界看到了中国科技的发展与进步。人工智能自诞生起,已经极大地改变了我们的生活。最近学校英语杂志发起了“What does AI Bring to Us ”为主题的征文,假如你是李华,请你按照下面的提示,并适当拓展,写一篇英语短文投稿。
What does AI (Artificial Intelligence) bring to Us AI is widely used in many fields and brings a lot of benefits. For example, 1.....allows us to find information... 2. learning apps uses AI to help....
What does AI Bring to Us AI also brings worries and challenges 1. ...lose jobs... 2. ...depend too much on...
I think... I hope AI will...in the future.
要求:
1. 90词左右(标题和开头都已给出,不计入总词数);
2 .文中不得出现真实人名和校名。
可参考词汇:
AI-driven chatbot 聊天机器人; personalized study 个性化的学习; smart devices 智能设备。
What does AI Bring to Us
Whether we like it or not, AI has become a more and more important part of our daily lives, changing the way we live and work.
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17.由杭州宇树科技研发的机器人参演了2025年春晚的舞蹈节目《秧BOT》,给观众带来了欢乐。随着科技的飞速发展,机器人在我们的日常生活中扮演着越来越重要的角色。假设你所在的社区最近引入了一批新型机器人,它们可以帮助居民完成各种任务,如打扫卫生、照顾老人、甚至辅导孩子学习。请你根据以下关键词,写一篇短文。
要点:
1.描述这些机器人在社区中的应用;
2.谈谈现阶段你能为我国机器人发展做些什么;
3.你对机器人未来发展的看法。
提示词:便利 (convenient),取代 (replace)
要求:
1.短文应包括给出的提示要点并适当发挥;
2.短文中不得出现真实校名和姓名;
3.词数:90词左右。
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18.人工智能AI(Artificial Intelligence)技术的快速发展和DeepSeek的问世,给人们的学习和生活带来了巨大的变化。假如你是李华,受邀参加某英语报“Teenager Says”栏目,请你给编辑写一封信说说你对人工智能的看法。
advantages disadvantages
1. chat with people 1. make people lazy in mind
2. help solve people’s problems 2. reduce people’s job opportunities
3. design pictures in a short time
Dear Editor,
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Yours,
Li Hua
19.随着科技的快速发展,人工智能(AI)正逐渐融入我们的日常生活。你所在的学校最近举办了一场“AI与我”的主题活动。请你根据以下提示,用英语写一篇短文,分享你在活动中的体验和感受。
提示:
1. 你参加了什么活动 (例如:AI绘画体验、智能机器人互动、AI编程入门等)。
2. 你在活动中做了什么,有什么新发现或学到了什么。
3. 你对AI在未来的发展有什么期待或想法。
4. 参考词汇:fantastic (很棒的);eye-opening (大开眼界的);intelligent (智能的);versatile (多功能的);accuracy (准确性);potential (潜力);convenience (便利);efficiency (效率);sustainable (可持续的)
要求:
1. 内容充实,条理清晰,语句通顺。
2. 词数80-100左右。
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名、地名等个人信息。
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20.春节申遗成功后,2025 年中国蛇年春晚的《秧BOT》节目吸引了全世界的目光,传统艺术与现代科技的巧妙结合,让中华优秀传统文化焕发了全新生命力。DeepSeek的横空出世更是让世界看到了中国科技的发展和进步。假定你是李华,受邀参加学校校报 “Teenager Says” 栏目的访谈,请谈谈你对人工智能AI(Artificial Intelligence)的看法。
(1)介绍人工智能的优点以及带给我们的便利;
(2)谈谈人工智能带给我们的一些担忧。
Advantages Disadvantages
help solve people's problems make people lazy in mind
save time and effort reduce people's job opportunities
… …
注意:
(1)文中不得出现人名和校名等真实信息;
(2)写作词数为80左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone. I’m Li Hua from Class Nine. I’m glad to share my views on AI.
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That’s all. Thank you.
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参考答案及试题解析
1.参考范文:
Here is my design for the new APP. It is named Happy English Learning. There are many interesting things in this APP, such as English news, movies, songs and games in English and so on. Next, let me introduce the advantages of the APP. It can make it easy for local people to learn English together. Their English listening and speaking skills can be improved as well. When they are tired, they can enjoy themselves by singing English songs or watching some English movies.
I believe all of the learners can have fun learning English by using this APP.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己要设计的APP名称;
第二步,具体阐述这个APP包含的内容及优点;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①such as例如
②and so on等等
③as well也
[高分句型]
①There are many interesting things in this APP, such as English news, movies, songs and games in English and so on. (there be句型)
②When they are tired, they can enjoy themselves by singing English songs or watching some English movies. (when引导的时间状语从句)
2.例文
Hello, everyone! I am Li Hua and I’m very happy to stand here to talk about an invention that influences my life most.
Many inventions change our lives. Among them, I think the Internet is a useful invention and it influences my life most. Every day I surf the Internet and get information from it. I can keep in touch with my friends and family. Besides, I can buy things from all over the world. More importantly, I can know more through the Internet, and it opens my mind. It can not only help me with my study, but also help me relax. All in all, thanks to the Internet, my life becomes more colourful and convenient.
Thanks for your attention!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
②时态:主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏信息,可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步,承接上文,指明对生活影响最大的发明是什么;
第二步,介绍这个发明如何影响生活;
第三步,总结对这个发明的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①surf the Internet网上冲浪
②keep in touch with与……保持联系
③not only…but also…不仅……而且……
④thanks to幸亏,由于
[高分句型]
I think the Internet is a useful invention and it influences my life most.(宾语从句)
3.例文
My Dream Robot
My dream robot is a home helper. It will clean the house by itself. It can also chat with people and play simple games. These functions can save people time and help them feel less lonely. I think it is very helpful because it makes life easier and happier.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”;
③提示:根据题干问题提示,从它的功能、如何帮助他人以及对它的评价三个角度介绍。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开门见山,引出梦想中的机器人;
第二步,介绍机器人的特殊功能以及如何帮助人们;
第三步,评价这个机器人。
[亮点词汇]
①clean the house打扫房子
②chat with sb与某人聊天
[高分句型]
①I think it is very helpful because it makes life easier and happier.(省略that的宾语从句;because引导的原因状语从句)
4.参考范文:
Dear Justin,
As we all know, China is developing at high speed and many kinds of new inventions have appeared.
I’m writing to tell you something about the shared bikes. It’s very convenient to use the shared bike if you have a smartphone. What you need to do is to find the nearest shared bike through the APP, scan the QR code on the bike and ride pared with other vehicles, the shared bike has more advantages. You can find a bike easily. Besides, it can reduce the traffic pressure and do good to the environment as well.
I think it is a wonderful invention in China. Hope to ride a shared bike with you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:按要求写作,无语法错误,语句连贯,注意字母大小写和标点符号使用。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表达目的——介绍共享单车;
第二步,具体介绍共享单车的使用方法、优势;
第三步,表达自己的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①reduce the traffic pressure减少交通压力
②do good to对……有好处
③as well也
[高分句型]
①What you need to do is to find the nearest shared bike through the APP, scan the QR code on the bike and ride it.(主语从句)
②I think it is a wonderful invention in China.(宾语从句)
5.
例文
Hello everyone. I am Li Hua, and I am delighted to share our group’s project on designing a campus smart robot. Our robot is designed to help with tasks like cleaning, guiding visitors, and delivering small items. It has sensors to avoid obstacles and a friendly voice to interact with people.
During the project, we faced several challenges. First, programming the robot to navigate smoothly was difficult. We solved this by testing different algorithms and improving the code step by step. Second, the robot sometimes got stuck in tight spaces. We redesigned its wheels to make it more flexible.
Through this project, I learned the importance of teamwork and persistence. We also gained valuable skills in robotics and problem-solving. It was a rewarding experience, and we are proud of our final product.
Thank you for listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇发言稿;
②时态:时态主要为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已明确,包括介绍设计的机器人、项目中遇到的困难及解决办法,以及个人的收获。考生应确保这些要点都得到充分阐述,并适当添加细节以增强文章的可读性和连贯性。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。通过“I am delighted to share our group’s project on designing a campus smart robot.”直接引出要介绍的项目主题;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。首先,介绍设计的机器人。可以描述机器人的外观、功能等特点,如它能够执行哪些任务,如何为校园生活带来便利;接着,讲述项目进行中遇到的困难及解决办法。可以提及在设计、编程或测试过程中遇到的问题,以及小组是如何通过合作、查阅资料或寻求帮助来克服这些困难的;最后,分享个人的收获。可以谈谈参与这个项目对自己在技能、团队合作或问题解决能力方面的提升;
第三步,书写结语。通过分享个人的积极体验和收获,隐含地鼓励读者参与类似的项目式学习活动。
[亮点词汇]
①designed to旨在,设计用于
②avoid obstacles避开障碍物
③interact with与……互动
④faced challenges面临挑战
⑤step by step一步一步地
[高分句型]
①Our robot is designed to help with tasks like cleaning, guiding visitors, and delivering small items. (被动语态的运用,以及“like+动名词短语”作举例说明)
②We solved this by testing different algorithms and improving the code step by step. (介词短语“by+动名词短语”作方式状语)
③It was a rewarding experience, and we are proud of our final product. (并列句的运用,以及“be proud of”短语的使用)
6.基础版范文
Technology Changes Our Lives
Technology has greatly changed our lives. It makes our lives more convenient and colourful.
Firstly, technology has made our daily lives easier. With the help of technology, we can study online, chat with far-away friends anytime. Some robots can deliver food to our tables. Secondly, technology has made our lives more colourful. We can watch TV, listen to music and watch short videos. We can get a lot of fun from these activities.
In a word, as a middle school student, we should learn to use technology wisely, and not depend on it too much. 进阶版范文
Technology Changes Our Lives
As we know, technology has greatly changed our lives. It makes our lives more convenient and colourful.
Firstly, technology is playing an important role in our lives. It has made our daily lives easier. With the help of technology, we can study online, chat with friends who live far away from us. There are some robots that can deliver food to our tables. Secondly, technology has made our lives more colourful. We can get a lot of pleasure by watching TV, listening to music and watching short videos.
We are middle school students. We can use technology, but we can’t rely on it too much. For example, if we spend too much time watching short videos, we might waste a lot of time. So we should learn to use technology wisely.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇说明文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节并完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步,用“科学技术极大地改变了我们的生活”引出主题;
第二步,具体介绍高科技对我们的影响有哪些;
第三步,建议合理利用,不能过多依赖。
[亮点词汇]
①with the help of在……的帮助下
②chat with和……聊天
③in a word总之
④depend on依赖
[高分句型]
①It makes our lives more convenient and colourful.(形容词作宾语补足语)
7.
One possible version:
Dear classmates,
I am glad to introduce my invention to you. As we all know, many great inventions have brought great changes to our lives. I think we students can also invent something.
Today, I’m glad to be here to introduce a chair that’s good for students’ health. This kind of chair looks like an ordinary chair. It is made of wood. There are two sensors in it, one in the seat and the other in the back of the chair. When the student doesn’t sit up straight, the chair will remind him or her. If he or she sits on the chair for over one hour, it will make a noise. It won’t stop until the student stands up and leaves. The chair can help students develop a good sitting posture. At the same time, it also reminds students not to sit for too long and to exercise properly.
Thanks for your listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇发言稿;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”表中对于椅子名称,材质,功能和优点的介绍要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。借用“发明改变生活”引出自己的发明;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“材质,功能和优点等”几个方面重点介绍所发明椅子的具体情况;
第三步,书写结语。表达“对大家认真倾听介绍”的感谢。
[亮点词汇]
①introduce my invention to...向……介绍我的发明
②be good for 对……有好处
③be made of 由……制成
[高分句型]
①There are two sensors in it, one in the seat and the other in the back of the chair. (There be句式)
②If he or she sits on the chair for over one hour, it will make a noise. (if引导的条件状语从句)
8.例文:
My Smart Device
Nowadays, there are more and more smart devices in our daily lives. In my family, we have a smart speaker named Xiaodu. It is really cool and useful.
Xiaodu is small and round like a cute drum. It is mainly white, with a touch-sensitive panel on the top and a speaker at the bottom. Its simple design makes it easy to fit in any corner of our living room.
Xiaodu has many amazing functions. First, it can play various kinds of music. Whenever I feel tired or want to relax, I just say “Xiaodu, play my favorite music”, and then beautiful melodies will fill the room. Besides, it is a great helper for my study. I can ask it questions about my homework, like grammar points or math problems. It can give clear explanations right away. Also, it can tell interesting stories. At bedtime, I often let it tell me some fairy tales to help me fall asleep.
In my opinion, Xiaodu is more than just a device. It brings much convenience and joy to our family. It makes our lives more colorful and easier. I really love my smart speaker!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
②时态:主要采用“一般现在时”;
③提示:从三个方面进行写作,每方面需要具体展开。注意条理清晰、语法正确。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍家中智能设备的名称和外观;
第二步,介绍此智能设备的主要功能;
第三步,对此智能设备进行评价。
[亮点词汇]
①amazing functions令人惊叹的功能
②various kinds of各种各样的
③more than just不只是
④much convenience and joy许多便利和欢乐
[高分句型]
Its simple design makes it easy to fit in any corner of our living room. (it作形式宾语)
9.Possible Version One:
Computers are becoming more and more important in our daily life. Do you know the history and the changes of computers The computer was invented by John W. Mauchly and J. Presper Eckert in 1946. And it was made of different kinds of materials, such as plastic, metal and so on. At that time, the computer used to be very huge and it was as large as a big room. But now, it is much smaller, just like a book.
The computer is a very useful tool in our life. It was only used to count in the past, but now it can be used to help us work and study. It has many other functions. For example, it can broaden our horizons and let us know more. Besides, we can also listen to music or play games on it. That makes us relax. However, some young people spend too much time in playing games. It is very bad for eyes and study.
Every coin has two sides. In my opinion, we should use computers correctly. And I believe the computer is going to change our life completely in the near future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中电脑的发展变化及正确运用方式的要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“历史、变化、优点、缺点”等几个方面重点介绍电脑的发展变化及正确运用方式;
第三步,书写结语。总结电脑的重要性,并提出正确运用电脑的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①more and more important 越来越重要
②different kinds of 不同种类的
③be used to do被用来做……
④in the near future 在不久的将来
[高分句型]
①The computer was made of different kinds of materials, such as plastic, metal and so on. (such as 举例说明)
②And I believe the computer is going to change our life completely in the near future.(宾语从句)
10.参考范文:
Science and Technology Changes Life
Science and technology has greatly changed our lives. They make our lives more convenient and colorful.
Firstly, technology has made our daily lives easier. With the help of technology, we can study online, chat with friends around the world and so on. And robots can send food to our tables. Secondly, technology has added color to our lives. We can watch TV and listen to music. Machines like washing machines have freed us from doing housework.
However, we should use technology in a reasonable way. We should also be aware of its risks and use it in a responsible way.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文为材料作文;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:要点内容已给出,注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节,完善表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍高科技如何改变我们的生活;
第二步,强调对科技的态度:合理利用,不能过多依赖。
[亮点词汇]
①With the help of...在……的帮助下
②around the world全世界
③in a reasonable way以合理的方式
[高分句型]
We should also be aware of its risks and use it in a responsible way.(使用“be aware of”和“in a responsible way”短语,清晰地表明对待科技的态度)
11.参考范文:
If we have a robot, what shall we ask it to do We have a heated discussion in our English class. Here are the results.
50% of the students say they will need the robot to help with housework or help to look after old people. Thirty percent of the students say they will need the robot to help with their study. When they’re tired, they will use the robot to chat and play with them. Twenty percent of the students will ask the robot to do more interesting things. Some of them say they will use the robot to pick up the litter on the ground to protect the environment.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为一般现在时;
③提示:写作要点已给出,涵盖了不同比例学生对机器人用途的想法,注意准确呈现各比例对应的内容,可适当补充学生想法的具体场景,突出不同群体的需求差异。
[写作步骤]
第一步,先引出话题,说明在英语课上就 “有机器人后让它做什么” 展开了热烈讨论;
第二步,再按照比例依次阐述不同学生群体对机器人用途的想法,包括帮忙做家务、照顾老人,辅助学习、陪伴聊天玩耍,以及做环保等有趣的事。
[亮点词汇]
①heated discussion 热烈的讨论
②look after 照顾
③pick up 捡起
④protect the environment 保护环境
[高分句型]
①50% of the students say they will need the robot to help with housework or help to look after old people. (or 连接两个并列的动词短语)
②Some of them say they will use the robot to pick up the litter on the ground to protect the environment. (动词不定式短语作目的状语)
12.例文
The greatest invention—the computer
In modern society, we can not imagine living in a world without computers. The computer is one of the greatest inventions and is becoming more and more important in our daily life.
It is widely used to search for information and gain more new knowledge. The computer can help us study and look for information. Listening to music or watching movies on the computer is also good for relaxing. We can also make friends from all over the world and keep in touch with others through emails. But we should not use it for too long every day. Remember not to spend too much time playing computer games.
I think that using a computer is helpful. But we should use computers correctly, or it will influence our study.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文为材料作文,围绕电脑进行写作;
②时态:主要使用一般现在时;
③提示:围绕“电脑的用途”和“正确使用电脑”的建议展开,语言简洁,条理清晰。
[写作步骤]
第一步:引入电脑的重要性,作为伟大发明;
第二步:介绍电脑的用途,如学习、放松、沟通等;
第三步:提出正确使用电脑的建议;
第四步:总结表达观点或倡议。
[亮点词汇]
① more and more 越来越
② look for 寻找
③ keep in touch with 与……保持联系
④ be good for 对……有好处
⑤ make friends 交朋友
[高分句型]
① Listening to music or watching movies on the computer is also good for relaxing.(动名词作主语)
② I think that using a computer is helpful. (宾语从句)
13.例文1
Will you choose to stay with a companion robot if your parents are not at home As for me, I agree to have a companion robot at home. Here are my ideas about the robot.
Firstly, the companion robot seems very wise and it knows a lot about all my subjects. When I have problems with my schoolwork, it will help me to solve the problems. Secondly, it can talk with me and then I won’t feel lonely when I stay at home alone. Thirdly, the robot will never get tired and it can keep playing with me until I get tired.
In a word, it will be a great idea for me to stay with a companion robot if my parents are not at home.
例文2
Will you choose to stay with a companion robot if your parents are not at home As for me, I refuse to have a companion robot at home. Here are my ideas about the robot.
Firstly, the companion robot might be very expensive. I think my parents can’t afford to buy one. Secondly, the robot can’t look after me like a real person. If I fall ill, the robot can’t take care of me like my mother. Thirdly, the robot can’t work all the time. Sometimes it needs to be charged. It will lose its value if it has no power or battery.
In all, I prefer to stay alone rather than stay with a companion robot if my parents are not at home.
【详解】以例文1为例
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:“一般将来时”为主;
③提示:选择一个观点,根据提示内容进行写作,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明自己的选择——和陪护机器人待在一起;
第二步,从陪护机器人的优点出发,阐述自己这种选择的理由;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①agree to do 同意做某事
②have problems with 某方面有困难
③keep doing 坚持做某事
[高分句型]
①When I have problems with my schoolwork, it will help me to solve the problems. (when引导时间状语从句)
②In a word, it will be a great idea for me to stay with a companion robot if my parents are not at home. (if引导条件状语从句,“主将从现”原则)
14.例文
Ladies and Gentlemen,
My name is Li Hua. I’m from Xuzhou. I am glad to tell you something about my robot here.
My robot looks like a friendly humanoid with big, round eyes and a smiling face. It has flexible arms and legs, making it easy to move around.
This robot can do many things. It can clean the floor, pick up objects, and even tell interesting stories. It can also answer simple questions and help with homework.
The advantages of my robot are clear. It is energy-efficient and can work for a long time without a break. It’s also very safe to use, which makes it perfect for families. I hope you like it!
Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“机器人外观、功能和优势”三个介绍要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。通过“向嘉宾介绍我的机器人”来引出重点介绍的内容;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“机器人外观、功能和优势”几个方面重点介绍机器人的具体情况;
第三步,书写结语。表达“感谢大家聆听”的意愿。
[亮点词汇]
①friendly humanoid友好的类人机器人
②flexible arms and legs灵活的手臂和腿
③energy-efficient节能的
④without a break不间断地
[高分句型]
①It can also answer simple questions and help with homework.(并列谓语结构)
15.例文:
Robots: Helpful or Harmful
Nowadays, robots are becoming more and more popular. They have both advantages and disadvantages.
Robots can be really helpful at home. They can do a lot of housework, like sweeping the floor and cooking meals. And robots can work in dangerous or dirty places instead of humans without getting hurt. In factories, robots are very useful, too. They can make cars. And they can do simple jobs over and over again without getting tired.
However, robots also have some disadvantages. If robots do too many jobs, humans may lose their jobs. Besides, making and repairing robots can be very panies need to spend a lot of money on technology. What’s more, if humans depend too much on robots, they may become lazy.
In my opinion, robots are great inventions, but we should use them properly.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。根据文章已给出的开头,引出话题;
第二步,分两方面具体阐述机器人的优点和缺点;
第三步,书写结语,表达自己的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①instead of代替
②a lot of很多
③what’s more更重要的是
[高分句型]
If robots do too many jobs, humans may lose their jobs. (If引导的条件状语从句)
16.例文:
What does AI Bring to Us
Whether we like it or not, AI has become a more and more important part of our daily lives, changing the way we live and work.
AI is widely used in many fields and brings a lot of benefits. For example, smart devices allow us to find information about all kinds of topics. What’s more, learning apps uses AI to help students achieve personalized study. However, AI also brings worries and challenges. More and more people lose jobs because of AI. Besides, we depend too much on smart devices.
I think as long as we use AI in a right way, we will get benefits from it. I hope AI will be more helpful in the future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应根据提示要点进行书面表达,不要遗漏要点,可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图,引出话题;
第二步,具体阐述AI带来的好处和挑战;
第三步,表达自己的观点以及愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①for example例如
②allow sb to do sth允许某人做某事
③depend on依赖……
④all kinds of各种各样的……
[高分句型]
①I think as long as we use AI in a right way, we will get benefits from it. (as long as引导的条件状语从句)
②I hope AI will be more helpful in the future. (宾语从句)
17.例文
With the development of science and technology, robots are playing a more important role in our daily life. It’s reported that some new types of robots have been on duty in some communities. They can help deal with some daily affairs, such as delivering packages, taking temperatures and looking after the old people. Some of them can even tutor the kids. How convenient they are!
In my opinion, the more advanced robots will be, the more helpful they will be. Although they can’t completely replace humans, they can help us do lots of things. As for me, I’m really interested in science and technology. I want to be a scientist in the future and I’ll try my best to realize my dream.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作提示已给出,考生应注意不要漏写你的看法,适当发挥,使上下文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍机器人在社区的应用;
第二步,表达自己对机器人未来发展的看法;
第三步,陈述自己能为机器人的发展做出什么努力。
[亮点词汇]
①with the development of随着……的发展
②play a more important role in在……中起到重要作用
③on duty执勤
④be interested in对……感兴趣
[高分句型]
①It’s reported that some new types of robots have been on duty in some communities. (it作形式主语)
②Although they can’t completely replace humans, they can help us do lots of things. (although引导让步状语从句)
18.例文
Dear Editor,
I’m glad to be invited to join this program. With the rapid development of science and technology, Artificial Intelligence is becoming more and more popular in our daily life.
Artificial Intelligence can chat with people, and it can help solve people’s problems. For example, it can help students do homework correctly and solve the subject problems. Besides, it can design pictures in a short time. However, it also has many disadvantages. If we always depend on it, it will make us lazy in mind. Its appearance will reduce people’s job opportunities.
I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为信件;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏信息,可适当补充细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,感谢邀请,并通过“人工智能变得流行”来引入话题;
第二步,根据要点介绍人工智能的优缺点,可做适当补充;
第三步,期待对方的回信。
[亮点词汇]
①be invited to do sth.被邀请做某事
②for example例如
③depend on依靠,依赖
④look forward to doing sth.期待做某事
[高分句型]
If we always depend on it, it will make us lazy in mind.(if引导的条件状语从句)
19.范文:
AI and Me
Recently, our school held a fantastic “AI and Me” activity. I chose to participate in the smart robot interaction session, which was truly eye-opening.
During the session, I got to interact with a robot that could answer questions and even play simple games. I discovered how intelligent and versatile AI robots are becoming. They can learn from our input and perform tasks with surprising accuracy. It was amazing to see how quickly the robot processed information and responded. This experience showed me the great potential of AI to assist us in daily life.
Looking ahead, I believe AI will continue to develop rapidly, bringing more convenience and efficiency to our world. I hope AI can be used to solve complex problems like climate change and disease, making our lives better and more sustainable. It’s an exciting future to imagine!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。引出“AI人工智能与我”的话题;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。讲述参加该活动的经历;
第三步,书写结语。表达对AI在未来的发展及期待或想法。
[亮点词汇]
①participate in sth. 参加(某项活动)
②get to interact with 有机会与某人互动
③learn from 向……学习
④show sb. sth. 向某人展示某物
⑤be used to do sth. 被用于做某事
[高分句型]
①I chose to participate in the smart robot interaction session, which was truly eye-opening. (定语从句)
②It was amazing to see how quickly the robot processed information and responded. (it作形式主语;不定式作真正的主语)
③Looking ahead, I believe AI will continue to develop rapidly, bringing more convenience and efficiency to our world. (现在分词“looking”及“bringing”分别作伴随状语和结果状语;believe后接省略that的宾语从句)
20.例文:
Hello, everyone. I’m Li Hua from Class Nine. I’m glad to share my views on AI.
AI offers numerous benefits. It can handle complex tasks that would take humans a long time to finish, like diagnosing diseases based on medical images, which shows its high-efficiency. This not only saves time but also helps people get quick solutions.
Yet, there are worries. As AI becomes more capable, it may replace human workers in many fields, causing job losses. Also, over-reliance on AI might weaken our problem-solving skills as we get used to having it provide answers.
That’s all. Thank you.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇讲稿。
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”。
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意要点齐全,可适当补充。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。用“很高兴能分享一下我对人工智能的看法”引出下文。
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。介绍人工智能的优点以及带给我们的便利和带给我们的一些担忧。
第三步,书写结语。表达“这就是我的全部观点”,表面演讲结束。
[亮点词汇]
①share分享
②benefits好处
③worries忧虑
[高分句型]
①As AI becomes more capable, it may replace human workers in many fields, causing job losses. (as引导的原因状语从句)
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