备考2023年高考英语二轮专题：书面表达（应用文·推荐信）
一、书面表达
1．（2023高三下·平顶山开学考）假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Emily来信说她非常喜欢中国的民族舞，并打算最近来中国学习民族舞，想请你帮她推荐一位舞蹈老师。请你根据以下要点给她写一封信，推荐一位老师。
要点：
1）介绍你所推荐的老师；
2）推荐该老师的原因；
3）祝愿她拜师成功。
注意：
1）词数100 左右；
2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3）信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
提示词：民族舞folk dance；推荐recommend
Dear Emily,
Yours,
Li Hua
2．（2022高二下·杭州期中）假定你是李华，你班交换生Mark周末想去远足，他发来邮件请你推荐一条适合的路线。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1）你推荐的路线；
2）推荐的理由。
注意：1）词数80左右；
2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3．（2022·眉山模拟）假定你叫李华，你的英国笔友Peter想要你给他推荐一门你校开设的中国文化线上课 程。请你给他写封邮件，内容包括：
1）推荐一门传统文化课程；
2）你的推荐理由；
3）你的祝愿。
注意：1）词数100左右；
2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
4．（2022·乐山模拟）假定你是李华。你的英国朋友Ryan对中国文化很感兴趣，希望你推荐一种传统艺术技能，以便他学习。请你给他写封邮件，内容包括：
1）你推荐的艺术技能；
2）推荐理由；
3）预祝他掌握该技能。
注意：
1）词数100左右；
2）开头和结尾已写好。
Dear Ryan,
Yours,
Li Hua
5．（2022高二下·青岛期中）假定你是李华，你校外教 Peter对中国文学感兴趣。请你写一封电子邮件，向他推荐一部中国文学作品，内容包括：
1）作品简介；
2）推荐理由。
注意：
1）词数 80左右；
2）请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
6．（2021·湖州模拟）假定你是李华。你的外国朋友George打算学习中国传统乐器二胡(erhu，请给他写一封邮件，推荐你校王老师。内容包括:
1）写信目的;
2）推荐理由;
3）表达祝愿。
注意;
1）词数80左右;
2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
答案解析部分
1．【答案】Dear Emily,
Glad to hear that you are going to learn Chinese folk dance in China.
I'm more than happy to recommend an excellent teacher, Miss Chen, to you.
Miss Chen is the best dance teacher in our school. You know, I love folk dance. I used to watch Miss Chen's performances of Chinese folk dance, which really impressed me. And I have seen almost all of her performances in our school. Her peacock dance is wonderful. She has helped many students who want to learn folk dance, including me. Besides this, Miss Chen is patient and enthusiastic about teaching. I believe you will achieve a lot with her help.
I sincerely wish you good luck to be Miss Chen's student.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇英文信件，要求考生以李华的身份写一封信，推荐一位老师 。写作背景： 你的英国朋友Emily来信说她非常喜欢中国的民族舞，并打算最近来中国学习民族舞，想请你帮她推荐一位舞蹈老师。 写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）介绍你所推荐的老师；2）推荐该老师的原因；3）祝愿她拜师成功。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：Glad to hear that you are going to learn Chinese folk dance in China.运用了不定式作原因状语，宾语从句；I'm more than happy to recommend an excellent teacher, Miss Chen, to you.运用了不定式作原因状语； I used to watch Miss Chen's performances of Chinese folk dance, which really impressed me. 运用了非限制性定语从句；She has helped many students who want to learn folk dance, including me. Besides this, Miss Chen is patient and enthusiastic about teaching. 运用了限制性定语从句；I believe you will achieve a lot with her help.运用了宾语从句。
2．【答案】One possible version:
Dear Mark,
It's my honor to suggest a hiking route in response to your last letter.
As you can see, a beautiful river runs across our city. Why not walk against the current and climb the mountain where it originates The mountain is known for great hiking trails, beautiful views and clean air. Along the route, both the water and the mountain will provide you with nothing but breathtaking scenery.
I hope my suggestion will be of some help. May you have a happy experience!
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇英文信件，要求考生以李华的身份 写一封邮件 。写作背景： 你班交换生Mark周末想去远足，他发来邮件请你推荐一条适合的路线。 写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）你推荐的路线；2）推荐的理由。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：It's my honor to suggest a hiking route in response to your last letter.运用了it作形式主语；As you can see, a beautiful river runs across our city. 运用了非限制性定语从句； The mountain is known for great hiking trails, beautiful views and clean air. 运用了被动语态；I hope my suggestion will be of some help.运用了宾语从句。
3．【答案】One Possible Version:
Dear Peter,
How's it going
I'm glad you want to take one of online Chinese culture courses developed by our school. I suggest you choose Chinese classical music.
First, you're interested in Chinese music, which will give you motivation to learn it. Secondly, you once studied Chinese classical music in China, which has laid a solid foundation for you. Thirdly, the classical music teacher is good at English. When you have problems, you can communicate with him in English so that your problems can be solved better and faster, although you also know some Chinese.
I sincerely hope you can finish this course soon and come to China to hold your Chinese classical concert.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇英文信件，要求考生以李华的身份 写封邮件 。写作背景： 你的英国笔友Peter想要你给他推荐一门你校开设的中国文化线上课 程。 写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）推荐一门传统文化课程；2）你的推荐理由；3）你的祝愿。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：I'm glad you want to take one of online Chinese culture courses developed by our school.运用了名词性从句； I suggest you choose Chinese classical music.运用了宾语从句，虚拟语气；First, you're interested in Chinese music, which will give you motivation to learn it. 运用了非限制性定语从句；Secondly, you once studied Chinese classical music in China, which has laid a solid foundation for you.运用了非限制性定语从句； When you have problems, you can communicate with him in English so that your problems can be solved better and faster, although you also know some Chinese.运用了时间状语从句，目的状语从句，让步状语从句；I sincerely hope you can finish this course soon and come to China to hold your Chinese classical concert.运用了宾语从句。
4．【答案】 Knowing that you are willing to learn Chinese traditional art skills, I would like to recommend paper cutting to you.
First of all, paper cutting is the most popular folk traditional art in China. It has a history of more than 1500 years. During the Spring Festival, people use paper cutting to decorate doors, windows and rooms, which can enhance the festive atmosphere. What's more, there are many kinds of paper-cut, such as character paper-cut, picture paper-cut, Chinese character paper-cut and so on. You can learn paper-cut Chinese characters so that you can learn more about Chinese.
I hope you will learn and master this skill soon.
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇英文信件，要求考生以李华的身份 写封邮件 。写作背景： 你的英国朋友Ryan对中国文化很感兴趣，希望你推荐一种传统艺术技能，以便他学习。 写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）你推荐的艺术技能；2）推荐理由；3）预祝他掌握该技能。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如： Knowing that you are willing to learn Chinese traditional art skills, I would like to recommend paper cutting to you.运用了现在分词作状语，宾语从句； During the Spring Festival, people use paper cutting to decorate doors, windows and rooms, which can enhance the festive atmosphere.运用了非限制性定语从句； What's more, there are many kinds of paper-cut, such as character paper-cut, picture paper-cut, Chinese character paper-cut and so on.运用了there be句式； You can learn paper-cut Chinese characters so that you can learn more about Chinese.运用了目的状语从句；I hope you will learn and master this skill soon.运用了宾语从句。
5．【答案】略
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇英文信件，要求考生以李华的身份写一封电子邮件，向你校外教 Peter推荐一部中国文学作品。写作背景：你校外教 Peter对中国文学感兴趣。 写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）作品简介；2）推荐理由。要求考生根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）并进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。最后连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点评】本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
6．【答案】 Dear George,
Knowing that you intend to learn erhu, I'm more than delighted to recommend Mr. Wang to you.
Mr. Wang has been teaching music in my school since he graduated from Central Conservatory of Music. As an experienced and patient teacher, he is popular with his students, many of whom have been awarded top prizes in the City Erhu Competition. More importantly, he has a good command of English, making it easy for you to communicate.
I hope you'll find his guidance rewarding.
Yours
Li Hua
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇英文信件，要求考生以李华的身份写一封邮件，推荐你校王老师。写作背景：你的外国朋友George打算学习中国传统乐器二胡(erhu）。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）写信目的;2）推荐理由;3）表达祝愿。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：Knowing that you intend to learn erhu, I'm more than delighted to recommend Mr. Wang to you.运用了现在分词作状语，宾语从句，不定式作原因状语；Mr. Wang has been teaching music in my school since he graduated from Central Conservatory of Music.运用了时间状语从句； As an experienced and patient teacher, he is popular with his students, many of whom have been awarded top prizes in the City Erhu Competition. 运用了非限制性定语从句；I hope you'll find his guidance rewarding.运用了宾语从句。
备考2023年高考英语二轮专题：书面表达（应用文·推荐信）
一、书面表达
1．（2023高三下·平顶山开学考）假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Emily来信说她非常喜欢中国的民族舞，并打算最近来中国学习民族舞，想请你帮她推荐一位舞蹈老师。请你根据以下要点给她写一封信，推荐一位老师。
要点：
1）介绍你所推荐的老师；
2）推荐该老师的原因；
3）祝愿她拜师成功。
注意：
1）词数100 左右；
2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3）信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
提示词：民族舞folk dance；推荐recommend
Dear Emily,
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Emily,
Glad to hear that you are going to learn Chinese folk dance in China.
I'm more than happy to recommend an excellent teacher, Miss Chen, to you.
Miss Chen is the best dance teacher in our school. You know, I love folk dance. I used to watch Miss Chen's performances of Chinese folk dance, which really impressed me. And I have seen almost all of her performances in our school. Her peacock dance is wonderful. She has helped many students who want to learn folk dance, including me. Besides this, Miss Chen is patient and enthusiastic about teaching. I believe you will achieve a lot with her help.
I sincerely wish you good luck to be Miss Chen's student.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇英文信件，要求考生以李华的身份写一封信，推荐一位老师 。写作背景： 你的英国朋友Emily来信说她非常喜欢中国的民族舞，并打算最近来中国学习民族舞，想请你帮她推荐一位舞蹈老师。 写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）介绍你所推荐的老师；2）推荐该老师的原因；3）祝愿她拜师成功。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：Glad to hear that you are going to learn Chinese folk dance in China.运用了不定式作原因状语，宾语从句；I'm more than happy to recommend an excellent teacher, Miss Chen, to you.运用了不定式作原因状语； I used to watch Miss Chen's performances of Chinese folk dance, which really impressed me. 运用了非限制性定语从句；She has helped many students who want to learn folk dance, including me. Besides this, Miss Chen is patient and enthusiastic about teaching. 运用了限制性定语从句；I believe you will achieve a lot with her help.运用了宾语从句。
2．（2022高二下·杭州期中）假定你是李华，你班交换生Mark周末想去远足，他发来邮件请你推荐一条适合的路线。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1）你推荐的路线；
2）推荐的理由。
注意：1）词数80左右；
2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Mark,
It's my honor to suggest a hiking route in response to your last letter.
As you can see, a beautiful river runs across our city. Why not walk against the current and climb the mountain where it originates The mountain is known for great hiking trails, beautiful views and clean air. Along the route, both the water and the mountain will provide you with nothing but breathtaking scenery.
I hope my suggestion will be of some help. May you have a happy experience!
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇英文信件，要求考生以李华的身份 写一封邮件 。写作背景： 你班交换生Mark周末想去远足，他发来邮件请你推荐一条适合的路线。 写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）你推荐的路线；2）推荐的理由。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：It's my honor to suggest a hiking route in response to your last letter.运用了it作形式主语；As you can see, a beautiful river runs across our city. 运用了非限制性定语从句； The mountain is known for great hiking trails, beautiful views and clean air. 运用了被动语态；I hope my suggestion will be of some help.运用了宾语从句。
3．（2022·眉山模拟）假定你叫李华，你的英国笔友Peter想要你给他推荐一门你校开设的中国文化线上课 程。请你给他写封邮件，内容包括：
1）推荐一门传统文化课程；
2）你的推荐理由；
3）你的祝愿。
注意：1）词数100左右；
2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【答案】One Possible Version:
Dear Peter,
How's it going
I'm glad you want to take one of online Chinese culture courses developed by our school. I suggest you choose Chinese classical music.
First, you're interested in Chinese music, which will give you motivation to learn it. Secondly, you once studied Chinese classical music in China, which has laid a solid foundation for you. Thirdly, the classical music teacher is good at English. When you have problems, you can communicate with him in English so that your problems can be solved better and faster, although you also know some Chinese.
I sincerely hope you can finish this course soon and come to China to hold your Chinese classical concert.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇英文信件，要求考生以李华的身份 写封邮件 。写作背景： 你的英国笔友Peter想要你给他推荐一门你校开设的中国文化线上课 程。 写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）推荐一门传统文化课程；2）你的推荐理由；3）你的祝愿。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：I'm glad you want to take one of online Chinese culture courses developed by our school.运用了名词性从句； I suggest you choose Chinese classical music.运用了宾语从句，虚拟语气；First, you're interested in Chinese music, which will give you motivation to learn it. 运用了非限制性定语从句；Secondly, you once studied Chinese classical music in China, which has laid a solid foundation for you.运用了非限制性定语从句； When you have problems, you can communicate with him in English so that your problems can be solved better and faster, although you also know some Chinese.运用了时间状语从句，目的状语从句，让步状语从句；I sincerely hope you can finish this course soon and come to China to hold your Chinese classical concert.运用了宾语从句。
4．（2022·乐山模拟）假定你是李华。你的英国朋友Ryan对中国文化很感兴趣，希望你推荐一种传统艺术技能，以便他学习。请你给他写封邮件，内容包括：
1）你推荐的艺术技能；
2）推荐理由；
3）预祝他掌握该技能。
注意：
1）词数100左右；
2）开头和结尾已写好。
Dear Ryan,
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】 Knowing that you are willing to learn Chinese traditional art skills, I would like to recommend paper cutting to you.
First of all, paper cutting is the most popular folk traditional art in China. It has a history of more than 1500 years. During the Spring Festival, people use paper cutting to decorate doors, windows and rooms, which can enhance the festive atmosphere. What's more, there are many kinds of paper-cut, such as character paper-cut, picture paper-cut, Chinese character paper-cut and so on. You can learn paper-cut Chinese characters so that you can learn more about Chinese.
I hope you will learn and master this skill soon.
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇英文信件，要求考生以李华的身份 写封邮件 。写作背景： 你的英国朋友Ryan对中国文化很感兴趣，希望你推荐一种传统艺术技能，以便他学习。 写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）你推荐的艺术技能；2）推荐理由；3）预祝他掌握该技能。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如： Knowing that you are willing to learn Chinese traditional art skills, I would like to recommend paper cutting to you.运用了现在分词作状语，宾语从句； During the Spring Festival, people use paper cutting to decorate doors, windows and rooms, which can enhance the festive atmosphere.运用了非限制性定语从句； What's more, there are many kinds of paper-cut, such as character paper-cut, picture paper-cut, Chinese character paper-cut and so on.运用了there be句式； You can learn paper-cut Chinese characters so that you can learn more about Chinese.运用了目的状语从句；I hope you will learn and master this skill soon.运用了宾语从句。
5．（2022高二下·青岛期中）假定你是李华，你校外教 Peter对中国文学感兴趣。请你写一封电子邮件，向他推荐一部中国文学作品，内容包括：
1）作品简介；
2）推荐理由。
注意：
1）词数 80左右；
2）请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
【答案】略
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇英文信件，要求考生以李华的身份写一封电子邮件，向你校外教 Peter推荐一部中国文学作品。写作背景：你校外教 Peter对中国文学感兴趣。 写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）作品简介；2）推荐理由。要求考生根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）并进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。最后连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点评】本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
6．（2021·湖州模拟）假定你是李华。你的外国朋友George打算学习中国传统乐器二胡(erhu，请给他写一封邮件，推荐你校王老师。内容包括:
1）写信目的;
2）推荐理由;
3）表达祝愿。
注意;
1）词数80左右;
2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【答案】 Dear George,
Knowing that you intend to learn erhu, I'm more than delighted to recommend Mr. Wang to you.
Mr. Wang has been teaching music in my school since he graduated from Central Conservatory of Music. As an experienced and patient teacher, he is popular with his students, many of whom have been awarded top prizes in the City Erhu Competition. More importantly, he has a good command of English, making it easy for you to communicate.
I hope you'll find his guidance rewarding.
Yours
Li Hua
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇英文信件，要求考生以李华的身份写一封邮件，推荐你校王老师。写作背景：你的外国朋友George打算学习中国传统乐器二胡(erhu）。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）写信目的;2）推荐理由;3）表达祝愿。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：Knowing that you intend to learn erhu, I'm more than delighted to recommend Mr. Wang to you.运用了现在分词作状语，宾语从句，不定式作原因状语；Mr. Wang has been teaching music in my school since he graduated from Central Conservatory of Music.运用了时间状语从句； As an experienced and patient teacher, he is popular with his students, many of whom have been awarded top prizes in the City Erhu Competition. 运用了非限制性定语从句；I hope you'll find his guidance rewarding.运用了宾语从句。

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