备考2023年高考英语二轮专题：书面表达（命题作文）
一、书面表达
1．（）为迎接2022年北京冬奥会，你校英语俱乐部发起了“我的奥运”5分钟短视频征集活动，请写一份活动启事，要点包括:
1）活动目的;
2）内容：展示你的健身生活
3）截止时间:2022年1月。
注意:
1）词数100左右;
2）题目已给出，不计人总词数;
3）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Wanted! Short Videos
for Winter Olympics
2．（2022高三上·礼泉月考）今年10月16日是第41个世界粮食日，请你以"光盘行动(Clear Your Plate Campaign)"为题写一封倡议书，号召同学们树立节约意识，内容包括：
1）倡议理由；2）具体做法。
注意：1）词数120左右；2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Clear Your Plate Campaign
3．（2022高三上·山西开学考）你校英语社团准备举行以"Small
Actions Can Make a Difference"为主题的英语演讲比赛，请你写一篇演讲稿参加比赛，内容包括：
1）介绍校园不良现象；
2）提出合理的建议和措施。
注意：
1）写作词数应为80左右；
2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Small
Actions Can Make a Difference
4．（2022高二下·周至期中）在日常生活中，因特网起着越来越重要的作用。请根据下表所给提示为某英文报写一篇题为On the Internet的征文稿，介绍一下因特网的主要用途。
1）看国内外新闻、获取其他信息
2）发e-mail、打电话
3）上网上学校、阅读各种书籍、自学外语
4）欣赏音乐、观看体育比赛、玩棋牌游戏
5）网上购物
注意：1）征文稿内容要包含上述要点, 可参考下面写作提纲完成。
2）词数100-120左右
写作提纲：第一段：互联网的重要作用。
第二段：互联网的主要用途。
第三段：我们要学会正确使用互联网。
5．（2022·浙江模拟）你校英文报正在征稿。请你结合下面的名人名言(famous quote)，写一篇题为"My Understanding of Failure"的征文。
"A
man can fail many times, but he isn't a failure until he begins to blame
somebody else."
— J.
Burroughs
内容包括：
1）你对该名言的理解；
2）生活中的例子；
3）你的感悟。
注意：
1）词数80 左右；
2）请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
6．（2022·白山模拟）假定你是李华，今年你就要步入大学了。你的英语老师让你们写一篇关于大学生活的作文。请你以”How to Spend My University Life”为题写一篇作文，内容包括：
1）你想要什么样的大学生活；
2）具体的计划。
注意：
1）词数100左右；
2）题目已为你写好。
（2022·宿州模拟）2021年10月12日，我国式宜布设三江源、大熊猫、东北虎豹、海南热带雨林和武夷山等第批国家公园。请你以National parks matter为题写一篇短文参加校英语报举办的征文活动，内容包括:
1）对此举措的认识;
2）自己的打算。
注意:
1）词数100左右;
2）短文题目和首已为你写好。
National parks matter
China has officially
announced to set up its first group of national parks.
7．（2021高三上·吉林期末）上周你所在的城市遭受了一场大雪，你们班参加了校园清雪劳动。请你以Snow Clearing为题，为班级英语角写一篇短文，记述本次劳动，内容包括:
1）校园雪况;
⒉）清雪过程;
3）你的感受。
注意：词数100左右；可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：铁锹spade
Snow Clearing
8．（2021·佳木斯模拟）你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以"我是如何爱上一项体育运动的 HOW I FELL IN LOVE WITH _________"为题，写一篇短文参赛。内容包括：
1）体育运动的名称;
2）爱上这项运动的原因。
注意：1）词数100 左右；2）适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
……
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
9．（2021高三下·九江模拟）你校正在组织一场响应市里“创建文明城市”活动的英语作文比赛。请以“To
be a civilized Student” 为题写一篇短文参赛。
内容包括：1）创建文明城市简介；2）你的行动。
注意：1）词数100左右；2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
答案解析部分
1．【答案】Wanted! Short Videos for Winter Olympics
Are you passionate about Olympics Do you like to share your enthusiasm for sports Here's a chance. An activity themed with My Olympics, hosted by our school English club, is calling for short videos. It's intended to welcome the coming of Beijing Olympic Winter Games.
The video must be in the form of MP4 and no more than 5 minutes, Additionally, the video must be originally created and show your sports life or story vividly. Necessary letters can be added. Your work should be submitted before January, 2022 through the school website.
Your attendance is greatly expected.
【知识点】命题作文；文字式应用文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】】本文是一篇活动启事，你校英语俱乐部发起了“我的奥运”5分钟短视频征集活动，请写一份活动启事，要点包括：活动目的、内容以及截止时间。写作时应涵盖所有要点，注意词汇的选择和句式的准确适用，可适当添加衔接词以使行文连贯。
【点评】所给范文要点齐全，行文流畅，重点突出，使用不少亮点词汇，如be passionate about“对某事有热情”、be intended to“目的是”、no more than“不超过”等；高分句型，如An activity themed with My Olympics, hosted by our school English club, is calling for short videos.（themed、hosted为过去分词作后置定语）。
2．【答案】Clear Your Plate Campaign
World Food Day which falls on October 16th is drawing near. There is no denying that food waste has become a serious problem on campus. We can see some students dumping leftovers without feeling guilty. So it is high time that we should call for an end to it.
On the one hand, we should start it with ourselves to save food, for instance, do not order too much, pack up the leftovers, and don't be particular about food. On the other hand, we can persuade others to join the fight with us. Tough and big as the task is, I'm sure, with everyone doing his bit, we will change the present situation for the better.
Let's take action and make some contributions to saving food.
【知识点】命题作文；提纲作文；文字式应用文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇应用文写作，要求考生以"光盘行动"为题写一封倡议书，号召同学们树立节约意识。写作背景：今年10月16日是第41个世界粮食日 。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括： 1）倡议理由；2）具体做法。 提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：World Food Day which falls on October 16th is drawing near. 运用了限制性定语从句；There is no denying that food waste has become a serious problem on campus. 运用了固定句式There is no denying that ...； So it is high time that we should call for an end to it.运用了固定句式it is high time that ...，虚拟语气； Tough and big as the task is, I'm sure, with everyone doing his bit, we will change the present situation for the better.运用了倒装句，让步状语从句，with的复合结构，宾语从句；Let's take action and make some contributions to saving food.运用了祈使句。
3．【答案】Small Actions Can Make a Difference
Dear students! Recently, I've found that many students do some behaviors harmful to our environment. They always chat with their friends on the lawn. Wherever they go, they tend to throw rubbish. Even worse, they discard food they don't like to eat and some paper which can still be used.
Now, it's time that we said no to these bad behaviors and protected our environment. We should keep away from the lawn and never throw rubbish at will. Moreover, we can choose to use both sides of paper as often as possible. If everyone does his bit, it will surely make a difference! Thank you for your listening!
【知识点】命题作文；提纲作文；文字式应用文；开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇应用文写作，要求考生 写一篇演讲稿参加比赛 。写作背景： 你校英语社团准备举行以"Small Actions Can Make a Difference"为主题的英语演讲比赛 。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）介绍校园不良现象；2）提出合理的建议和措施。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：Recently, I've found that many students do some behaviors harmful to our environment. 运用了宾语从句；Wherever they go, they tend to throw rubbish. 运用了时间状语从句；Even worse, they discard food they don't like to eat and some paper which can still be used.运用了限制性定语从句；Now, it's time that we said no to these bad behaviors and protected our environment. 运用了固定句式 it's time that...，虚拟语气； If everyone does his bit, it will surely make a difference!运用了条件状语从句。
4．【答案】On the Internet
With the development of science and technology, the Internet is playing a more and more important part in our daily life.
On the Internet, we can learn news both at home and abroad and all kinds of other information as well. We can also send messages by e-mail, make phone calls, go to net school, read various kinds of books and learn foreign languages by ourselves. Besides, we can enjoy music, watch sports matches and play chess or cards. On the net, we can even do shopping, have a chat with others and make friends with them. In a word, the internet has made our life more colorful.
However, there still exist some disadvantages in the network. So we should learn to make good use of the Internet.
【知识点】命题作文；提纲作文；文字式应用文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇应用文写作，要求考生根据所给提示为某英文报写一篇题为On the Internet的征文稿，介绍一下因特网的主要用途。写作背景：在日常生活中，因特网起着越来越重要的作用。 写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）看国内外新闻、获取其他信息；2）发e-mail、打电话；3）上网上学校、阅读各种书籍、自学外语；4）欣赏音乐、观看体育比赛、玩棋牌游戏；5）网上购物。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：With the development of science and technology, the Internet is playing a more and more important part in our daily life.运用了介词短语作状语；We can also send messages by e-mail, make phone calls, go to net school, read various kinds of books and learn foreign languages by ourselves. 运用了并列谓语； In a word, the internet has made our life more colorful.运用了形容词作宾补；However, there still exist some disadvantages in the network. 运用了倒装句。
5．【答案】My Understanding of Failure
This famous quote from J. Burroughs conveys that when faced with failure, we should reflect on ourselves instead of putting the blame on others, which is more important than failure itself.
When entering high school, many classmates found it really difficult to learn maths and did poorly in exams. They blamed it on the teacher rather than themselves, which resulted in even poorer performance. I was no exception. However, when I realized complaining made no sense, I adjusted my learning methods and turned to the teacher whenever I encountered difficult problems. Gradually, I began to make progress, which in turn boosted my confidence in maths.
The lesson I have drawn from this experience is that only by bravely taking full responsibility for failure rather than blaming others can we succeed.
【知识点】命题作文；提纲作文；文字式应用文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇应用文写作，要求考生 写一篇题为"My Understanding of Failure"的征文 。写作背景： 你校英文报正在征稿。请你结合名人名言"A man can fail many times, but he isn't a failure until he begins to blame somebody else."— J. Burroughs写一篇短文。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）你对该名言的理解；2）生活中的例子；3）你的感悟。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：This famous quote from J. Burroughs conveys that when faced with failure, we should reflect on ourselves instead of putting the blame on others, which is more important than failure itself.运用了宾语从句，时间状语从句的省略，非限制性定语从句；When entering high school, many classmates found it really difficult to learn maths and did poorly in exams. 运用了it作形式宾语；They blamed it on the teacher rather than themselves, which resulted in even poorer performance.运用了非限制性定语从句； However, when I realized complaining made no sense, I adjusted my learning methods and turned to the teacher whenever I encountered difficult problems. 运用了时间状语从句，宾语从句；Gradually, I began to make progress, which in turn boosted my confidence in maths.运用了非限制性定语从句；The lesson I have drawn from this experience is that only by bravely taking full responsibility for failure rather than blaming others can we succeed.运用了限制性定语从句，表语从句。
6．【答案】One possible version:
How to Spend My University Life
By this September, I shall have been a college student, which makes me thrilled and a little nervous. What I want is to spend a fruitful university life. Accordingly, I have drawn up the following plans.
Firstly, I am supposed to learn to be independent, especially in study. Secondly, setting aside some time for my hobbies is of equal importance. Finally, I will make many friends, through which I am capable of fostering my communicative ability.
In a nutshell, I have been prepared for my life in university and I firmly believe that it will be delightful and fruitful.
【知识点】命题作文；提纲作文；文字式应用文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇命题作文，要求考生以李华的身份以”How to Spend My University Life”为题写一篇作文。写作背景：今年你就要步入大学了。你的英语老师让你们写一篇关于大学生活的作文。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）你想要什么样的大学生活；2）具体的计划。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：By this September, I shall have been a college student, which makes me thrilled and a little nervous. 运用了非限制性定语从句；What I want is to spend a fruitful university life. 运用了主语从句； Secondly, setting aside some time for my hobbies is of equal importance. 运用了动名词作主语；Finally, I will make many friends, through which I am capable of fostering my communicative ability.运用了非限制性定语从句；In a nutshell, I have been prepared for my life in university and I firmly believe that it will be delightful and fruitful.运用了并列句，宾语从句。
【答案】 China has officially announced to set up its first group of national parks. Each of those parks aims to protect biodiversity, the habitats of some endangered species and some cultural and natural heritage sites.
As we all know, man and nature need to coexist in harmony. When we take care to protect nature, nature rewards us generously. Just as the saying goes, clear rivers and green mountains are as good as mountains of gold and silver.
We students should actively participate in ecological protection, starting from small things in our daily life, such as reducing waste, fighting pollution and saving resources. Besides, we can help to enhance the public's sense of social responsibility for a sustainable future. Let's make joint efforts to build a community of all lives on earth, and a clean and beautiful world for us all.
【知识点】命题作文；提纲作文；文字式应用文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇命题作文，要求考生 以National parks matter为题写一篇短文参加校英语报举办的征文活动 。写作背景： 2021年10月12日，我国式宜布设三江源、大熊猫、东北虎豹、海南热带雨林和武夷山等第批国家公园。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）对此举措的认识；2）自己的打算。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：As we all know, man and nature need to coexist in harmony.运用了非限制性定语从句； When we take care to protect nature, nature rewards us generously.运用了非限制性定语从句； Just as the saying goes, clear rivers and green mountains are as good as mountains of gold and silver.运用了非限制性定语从句，比较状语从句；We students should actively participate in ecological protection, starting from small things in our daily life, such as reducing waste, fighting pollution and saving resources. 运用了同位语，现在分词作状语；Let's make joint efforts to build a community of all lives on earth, and a clean and beautiful world for us all.运用了祈使句。
7．【答案】Snow Clearing
Last week, a big snowfall hit our city, which left our school playground covered under the snow, making it a struggle for us to play sports on it. So some classes were tasked to clear snow including ours.
Reaching the playground, we couldn't wait to get started. First, we gathered snow in large piles by using spades. Then working in pairs, we transported it to the set location. Finally, brooms were used to sweep away the remaining snow. Actually, the tools were too heavy for us and our arms ached a lot. However, each of us kept working until the end of the task.
Seeing the playground clean and accessible, we all felt the efforts we made were very rewarding.
【知识点】命题作文；提纲作文；文字式记叙文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇命题作文，要求考生以Snow Clearing为题，为班级英语角写一篇短文，记述校园清雪劳动。写作背景：上周你所在的城市遭受了一场大雪，你们班参加了校园清雪劳动。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）校园雪况；⒉）清雪过程；3）你的感受。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。 例如：Last week, a big snowfall hit our city, which left our school playground covered under the snow, making it a struggle for us to play sports on it. 运用了非限制性定语从句；So some classes were tasked to clear snow including ours.运用了被动语态；Reaching the playground, we couldn't wait to get started. 运用了现在分词作状语；Finally, brooms were used to sweep away the remaining snow.运用了不定式作目的状语；Seeing the playground clean and accessible, we all felt the efforts we made were very rewarding.运用了限制性定语从句。
8．【答案】How I Fell In Love With Football
Football is my favorite sport. However, I didn't fall in love with it until I entered Junior Three. There was a time when I was discouraged and felt like giving up my studies. One night, I saw my father watching a football match on TV, which caught my eyes. When the match was nearing the end, one female player from the Chinese team stopped the ball, and kicked it hard with full strength. The Chinese team won finally and the players smiled with tears, which encouraged me a lot. From then on, I have been into football because the sport has taught me to hold on and try my best.
【知识点】命题作文；提纲作文；文字式应用文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇应用文写作，要求考生以"我是如何爱上一项体育运动的"为题，写一篇短文参赛。写作背景：你校正在组织英语作文比赛。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）体育运动的名称;2）爱上这项运动的原因。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：However, I didn't fall in love with it until I entered Junior Three.运用了时间状语从句； There was a time when I was discouraged and felt like giving up my studies.运用了限制性定语从句；One night, I saw my father watching a football match on TV, which caught my eyes. 运用了非限制性定语从句；When the match was nearing the end, one female player from the Chinese team stopped the ball, and kicked it hard with full strength. 运用了时间状语从句；The Chinese team won finally and the players smiled with tears, which encouraged me a lot.运用了并列句，非限制性定语从句； From then on, I have been into football because the sport has taught me to hold on and try my best.运用了原因状语从句。
9．【答案】To be a civilized Student
In order to establish a national civilized City, the local government has launched a campaign and called on all the citizens to actively participate. Here are some do's and don'ts for a senior high school student like me.
Civilization is one of the core values. I must firmly remember and practice the 24-word core values. I should follow what is required in the campaign, such as no spitting everywhere, conducting garbage classification, waiting for the green light and walking on the zebra crossing. Be siting and walking on the zebra crossing. Besides, each of us should clear the plate and waste no food, making it a lifelong habit.
In a word, I will go all out to behave properly and to be a civilized student.
【知识点】命题作文；提纲作文；文字式应用文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇应用文写作，要求考生以“To be a civilized Student” 为题写一篇短文参赛。写作背景：你校正在组织一场响应市里“创建文明城市”活动的英语作文比赛。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）创建文明城市简介；2）你的行动。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：In order to establish a national civilized City, the local government has launched a campaign and called on all the citizens to actively participate.运用了不定式作目的状语； Here are some do's and don'ts for a senior high school student like me.运用了倒装句； I should follow what is required in the campaign, such as no spitting everywhere, conducting garbage classification, waiting for the green light and walking on the zebra crossing. 运用了宾语从句。
备考2023年高考英语二轮专题：书面表达（命题作文）
一、书面表达
1．（）为迎接2022年北京冬奥会，你校英语俱乐部发起了“我的奥运”5分钟短视频征集活动，请写一份活动启事，要点包括:
1）活动目的;
2）内容：展示你的健身生活
3）截止时间:2022年1月。
注意:
1）词数100左右;
2）题目已给出，不计人总词数;
3）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Wanted! Short Videos
for Winter Olympics
【答案】Wanted! Short Videos for Winter Olympics
Are you passionate about Olympics Do you like to share your enthusiasm for sports Here's a chance. An activity themed with My Olympics, hosted by our school English club, is calling for short videos. It's intended to welcome the coming of Beijing Olympic Winter Games.
The video must be in the form of MP4 and no more than 5 minutes, Additionally, the video must be originally created and show your sports life or story vividly. Necessary letters can be added. Your work should be submitted before January, 2022 through the school website.
Your attendance is greatly expected.
【知识点】命题作文；文字式应用文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】】本文是一篇活动启事，你校英语俱乐部发起了“我的奥运”5分钟短视频征集活动，请写一份活动启事，要点包括：活动目的、内容以及截止时间。写作时应涵盖所有要点，注意词汇的选择和句式的准确适用，可适当添加衔接词以使行文连贯。
【点评】所给范文要点齐全，行文流畅，重点突出，使用不少亮点词汇，如be passionate about“对某事有热情”、be intended to“目的是”、no more than“不超过”等；高分句型，如An activity themed with My Olympics, hosted by our school English club, is calling for short videos.（themed、hosted为过去分词作后置定语）。
2．（2022高三上·礼泉月考）今年10月16日是第41个世界粮食日，请你以"光盘行动(Clear Your Plate Campaign)"为题写一封倡议书，号召同学们树立节约意识，内容包括：
1）倡议理由；2）具体做法。
注意：1）词数120左右；2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Clear Your Plate Campaign
【答案】Clear Your Plate Campaign
World Food Day which falls on October 16th is drawing near. There is no denying that food waste has become a serious problem on campus. We can see some students dumping leftovers without feeling guilty. So it is high time that we should call for an end to it.
On the one hand, we should start it with ourselves to save food, for instance, do not order too much, pack up the leftovers, and don't be particular about food. On the other hand, we can persuade others to join the fight with us. Tough and big as the task is, I'm sure, with everyone doing his bit, we will change the present situation for the better.
Let's take action and make some contributions to saving food.
【知识点】命题作文；提纲作文；文字式应用文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇应用文写作，要求考生以"光盘行动"为题写一封倡议书，号召同学们树立节约意识。写作背景：今年10月16日是第41个世界粮食日 。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括： 1）倡议理由；2）具体做法。 提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：World Food Day which falls on October 16th is drawing near. 运用了限制性定语从句；There is no denying that food waste has become a serious problem on campus. 运用了固定句式There is no denying that ...； So it is high time that we should call for an end to it.运用了固定句式it is high time that ...，虚拟语气； Tough and big as the task is, I'm sure, with everyone doing his bit, we will change the present situation for the better.运用了倒装句，让步状语从句，with的复合结构，宾语从句；Let's take action and make some contributions to saving food.运用了祈使句。
3．（2022高三上·山西开学考）你校英语社团准备举行以"Small
Actions Can Make a Difference"为主题的英语演讲比赛，请你写一篇演讲稿参加比赛，内容包括：
1）介绍校园不良现象；
2）提出合理的建议和措施。
注意：
1）写作词数应为80左右；
2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Small
Actions Can Make a Difference
【答案】Small Actions Can Make a Difference
Dear students! Recently, I've found that many students do some behaviors harmful to our environment. They always chat with their friends on the lawn. Wherever they go, they tend to throw rubbish. Even worse, they discard food they don't like to eat and some paper which can still be used.
Now, it's time that we said no to these bad behaviors and protected our environment. We should keep away from the lawn and never throw rubbish at will. Moreover, we can choose to use both sides of paper as often as possible. If everyone does his bit, it will surely make a difference! Thank you for your listening!
【知识点】命题作文；提纲作文；文字式应用文；开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇应用文写作，要求考生 写一篇演讲稿参加比赛 。写作背景： 你校英语社团准备举行以"Small Actions Can Make a Difference"为主题的英语演讲比赛 。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）介绍校园不良现象；2）提出合理的建议和措施。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：Recently, I've found that many students do some behaviors harmful to our environment. 运用了宾语从句；Wherever they go, they tend to throw rubbish. 运用了时间状语从句；Even worse, they discard food they don't like to eat and some paper which can still be used.运用了限制性定语从句；Now, it's time that we said no to these bad behaviors and protected our environment. 运用了固定句式 it's time that...，虚拟语气； If everyone does his bit, it will surely make a difference!运用了条件状语从句。
4．（2022高二下·周至期中）在日常生活中，因特网起着越来越重要的作用。请根据下表所给提示为某英文报写一篇题为On the Internet的征文稿，介绍一下因特网的主要用途。
1）看国内外新闻、获取其他信息
2）发e-mail、打电话
3）上网上学校、阅读各种书籍、自学外语
4）欣赏音乐、观看体育比赛、玩棋牌游戏
5）网上购物
注意：1）征文稿内容要包含上述要点, 可参考下面写作提纲完成。
2）词数100-120左右
写作提纲：第一段：互联网的重要作用。
第二段：互联网的主要用途。
第三段：我们要学会正确使用互联网。
【答案】On the Internet
With the development of science and technology, the Internet is playing a more and more important part in our daily life.
On the Internet, we can learn news both at home and abroad and all kinds of other information as well. We can also send messages by e-mail, make phone calls, go to net school, read various kinds of books and learn foreign languages by ourselves. Besides, we can enjoy music, watch sports matches and play chess or cards. On the net, we can even do shopping, have a chat with others and make friends with them. In a word, the internet has made our life more colorful.
However, there still exist some disadvantages in the network. So we should learn to make good use of the Internet.
【知识点】命题作文；提纲作文；文字式应用文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇应用文写作，要求考生根据所给提示为某英文报写一篇题为On the Internet的征文稿，介绍一下因特网的主要用途。写作背景：在日常生活中，因特网起着越来越重要的作用。 写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）看国内外新闻、获取其他信息；2）发e-mail、打电话；3）上网上学校、阅读各种书籍、自学外语；4）欣赏音乐、观看体育比赛、玩棋牌游戏；5）网上购物。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：With the development of science and technology, the Internet is playing a more and more important part in our daily life.运用了介词短语作状语；We can also send messages by e-mail, make phone calls, go to net school, read various kinds of books and learn foreign languages by ourselves. 运用了并列谓语； In a word, the internet has made our life more colorful.运用了形容词作宾补；However, there still exist some disadvantages in the network. 运用了倒装句。
5．（2022·浙江模拟）你校英文报正在征稿。请你结合下面的名人名言(famous quote)，写一篇题为"My Understanding of Failure"的征文。
"A
man can fail many times, but he isn't a failure until he begins to blame
somebody else."
— J.
Burroughs
内容包括：
1）你对该名言的理解；
2）生活中的例子；
3）你的感悟。
注意：
1）词数80 左右；
2）请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
【答案】My Understanding of Failure
This famous quote from J. Burroughs conveys that when faced with failure, we should reflect on ourselves instead of putting the blame on others, which is more important than failure itself.
When entering high school, many classmates found it really difficult to learn maths and did poorly in exams. They blamed it on the teacher rather than themselves, which resulted in even poorer performance. I was no exception. However, when I realized complaining made no sense, I adjusted my learning methods and turned to the teacher whenever I encountered difficult problems. Gradually, I began to make progress, which in turn boosted my confidence in maths.
The lesson I have drawn from this experience is that only by bravely taking full responsibility for failure rather than blaming others can we succeed.
【知识点】命题作文；提纲作文；文字式应用文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇应用文写作，要求考生 写一篇题为"My Understanding of Failure"的征文 。写作背景： 你校英文报正在征稿。请你结合名人名言"A man can fail many times, but he isn't a failure until he begins to blame somebody else."— J. Burroughs写一篇短文。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）你对该名言的理解；2）生活中的例子；3）你的感悟。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：This famous quote from J. Burroughs conveys that when faced with failure, we should reflect on ourselves instead of putting the blame on others, which is more important than failure itself.运用了宾语从句，时间状语从句的省略，非限制性定语从句；When entering high school, many classmates found it really difficult to learn maths and did poorly in exams. 运用了it作形式宾语；They blamed it on the teacher rather than themselves, which resulted in even poorer performance.运用了非限制性定语从句； However, when I realized complaining made no sense, I adjusted my learning methods and turned to the teacher whenever I encountered difficult problems. 运用了时间状语从句，宾语从句；Gradually, I began to make progress, which in turn boosted my confidence in maths.运用了非限制性定语从句；The lesson I have drawn from this experience is that only by bravely taking full responsibility for failure rather than blaming others can we succeed.运用了限制性定语从句，表语从句。
6．（2022·白山模拟）假定你是李华，今年你就要步入大学了。你的英语老师让你们写一篇关于大学生活的作文。请你以”How to Spend My University Life”为题写一篇作文，内容包括：
1）你想要什么样的大学生活；
2）具体的计划。
注意：
1）词数100左右；
2）题目已为你写好。
【答案】One possible version:
How to Spend My University Life
By this September, I shall have been a college student, which makes me thrilled and a little nervous. What I want is to spend a fruitful university life. Accordingly, I have drawn up the following plans.
Firstly, I am supposed to learn to be independent, especially in study. Secondly, setting aside some time for my hobbies is of equal importance. Finally, I will make many friends, through which I am capable of fostering my communicative ability.
In a nutshell, I have been prepared for my life in university and I firmly believe that it will be delightful and fruitful.
【知识点】命题作文；提纲作文；文字式应用文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇命题作文，要求考生以李华的身份以”How to Spend My University Life”为题写一篇作文。写作背景：今年你就要步入大学了。你的英语老师让你们写一篇关于大学生活的作文。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）你想要什么样的大学生活；2）具体的计划。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：By this September, I shall have been a college student, which makes me thrilled and a little nervous. 运用了非限制性定语从句；What I want is to spend a fruitful university life. 运用了主语从句； Secondly, setting aside some time for my hobbies is of equal importance. 运用了动名词作主语；Finally, I will make many friends, through which I am capable of fostering my communicative ability.运用了非限制性定语从句；In a nutshell, I have been prepared for my life in university and I firmly believe that it will be delightful and fruitful.运用了并列句，宾语从句。
（2022·宿州模拟）2021年10月12日，我国式宜布设三江源、大熊猫、东北虎豹、海南热带雨林和武夷山等第批国家公园。请你以National parks matter为题写一篇短文参加校英语报举办的征文活动，内容包括:
1）对此举措的认识;
2）自己的打算。
注意:
1）词数100左右;
2）短文题目和首已为你写好。
National parks matter
China has officially
announced to set up its first group of national parks.
【答案】 China has officially announced to set up its first group of national parks. Each of those parks aims to protect biodiversity, the habitats of some endangered species and some cultural and natural heritage sites.
As we all know, man and nature need to coexist in harmony. When we take care to protect nature, nature rewards us generously. Just as the saying goes, clear rivers and green mountains are as good as mountains of gold and silver.
We students should actively participate in ecological protection, starting from small things in our daily life, such as reducing waste, fighting pollution and saving resources. Besides, we can help to enhance the public's sense of social responsibility for a sustainable future. Let's make joint efforts to build a community of all lives on earth, and a clean and beautiful world for us all.
【知识点】命题作文；提纲作文；文字式应用文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇命题作文，要求考生 以National parks matter为题写一篇短文参加校英语报举办的征文活动 。写作背景： 2021年10月12日，我国式宜布设三江源、大熊猫、东北虎豹、海南热带雨林和武夷山等第批国家公园。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）对此举措的认识；2）自己的打算。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：As we all know, man and nature need to coexist in harmony.运用了非限制性定语从句； When we take care to protect nature, nature rewards us generously.运用了非限制性定语从句； Just as the saying goes, clear rivers and green mountains are as good as mountains of gold and silver.运用了非限制性定语从句，比较状语从句；We students should actively participate in ecological protection, starting from small things in our daily life, such as reducing waste, fighting pollution and saving resources. 运用了同位语，现在分词作状语；Let's make joint efforts to build a community of all lives on earth, and a clean and beautiful world for us all.运用了祈使句。
7．（2021高三上·吉林期末）上周你所在的城市遭受了一场大雪，你们班参加了校园清雪劳动。请你以Snow Clearing为题，为班级英语角写一篇短文，记述本次劳动，内容包括:
1）校园雪况;
⒉）清雪过程;
3）你的感受。
注意：词数100左右；可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：铁锹spade
Snow Clearing
【答案】Snow Clearing
Last week, a big snowfall hit our city, which left our school playground covered under the snow, making it a struggle for us to play sports on it. So some classes were tasked to clear snow including ours.
Reaching the playground, we couldn't wait to get started. First, we gathered snow in large piles by using spades. Then working in pairs, we transported it to the set location. Finally, brooms were used to sweep away the remaining snow. Actually, the tools were too heavy for us and our arms ached a lot. However, each of us kept working until the end of the task.
Seeing the playground clean and accessible, we all felt the efforts we made were very rewarding.
【知识点】命题作文；提纲作文；文字式记叙文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇命题作文，要求考生以Snow Clearing为题，为班级英语角写一篇短文，记述校园清雪劳动。写作背景：上周你所在的城市遭受了一场大雪，你们班参加了校园清雪劳动。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）校园雪况；⒉）清雪过程；3）你的感受。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。 例如：Last week, a big snowfall hit our city, which left our school playground covered under the snow, making it a struggle for us to play sports on it. 运用了非限制性定语从句；So some classes were tasked to clear snow including ours.运用了被动语态；Reaching the playground, we couldn't wait to get started. 运用了现在分词作状语；Finally, brooms were used to sweep away the remaining snow.运用了不定式作目的状语；Seeing the playground clean and accessible, we all felt the efforts we made were very rewarding.运用了限制性定语从句。
8．（2021·佳木斯模拟）你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以"我是如何爱上一项体育运动的 HOW I FELL IN LOVE WITH _________"为题，写一篇短文参赛。内容包括：
1）体育运动的名称;
2）爱上这项运动的原因。
注意：1）词数100 左右；2）适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
……
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】How I Fell In Love With Football
Football is my favorite sport. However, I didn't fall in love with it until I entered Junior Three. There was a time when I was discouraged and felt like giving up my studies. One night, I saw my father watching a football match on TV, which caught my eyes. When the match was nearing the end, one female player from the Chinese team stopped the ball, and kicked it hard with full strength. The Chinese team won finally and the players smiled with tears, which encouraged me a lot. From then on, I have been into football because the sport has taught me to hold on and try my best.
【知识点】命题作文；提纲作文；文字式应用文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇应用文写作，要求考生以"我是如何爱上一项体育运动的"为题，写一篇短文参赛。写作背景：你校正在组织英语作文比赛。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）体育运动的名称;2）爱上这项运动的原因。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：However, I didn't fall in love with it until I entered Junior Three.运用了时间状语从句； There was a time when I was discouraged and felt like giving up my studies.运用了限制性定语从句；One night, I saw my father watching a football match on TV, which caught my eyes. 运用了非限制性定语从句；When the match was nearing the end, one female player from the Chinese team stopped the ball, and kicked it hard with full strength. 运用了时间状语从句；The Chinese team won finally and the players smiled with tears, which encouraged me a lot.运用了并列句，非限制性定语从句； From then on, I have been into football because the sport has taught me to hold on and try my best.运用了原因状语从句。
9．（2021高三下·九江模拟）你校正在组织一场响应市里“创建文明城市”活动的英语作文比赛。请以“To
be a civilized Student” 为题写一篇短文参赛。
内容包括：1）创建文明城市简介；2）你的行动。
注意：1）词数100左右；2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【答案】To be a civilized Student
In order to establish a national civilized City, the local government has launched a campaign and called on all the citizens to actively participate. Here are some do's and don'ts for a senior high school student like me.
Civilization is one of the core values. I must firmly remember and practice the 24-word core values. I should follow what is required in the campaign, such as no spitting everywhere, conducting garbage classification, waiting for the green light and walking on the zebra crossing. Be siting and walking on the zebra crossing. Besides, each of us should clear the plate and waste no food, making it a lifelong habit.
In a word, I will go all out to behave properly and to be a civilized student.
【知识点】命题作文；提纲作文；文字式应用文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇应用文写作，要求考生以“To be a civilized Student” 为题写一篇短文参赛。写作背景：你校正在组织一场响应市里“创建文明城市”活动的英语作文比赛。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）创建文明城市简介；2）你的行动。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：In order to establish a national civilized City, the local government has launched a campaign and called on all the citizens to actively participate.运用了不定式作目的状语； Here are some do's and don'ts for a senior high school student like me.运用了倒装句； I should follow what is required in the campaign, such as no spitting everywhere, conducting garbage classification, waiting for the green light and walking on the zebra crossing. 运用了宾语从句。

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