Unit 8 Life in the future 书面表达（含解析）牛津深圳版 八年级下册英语题型专项集训
1．世界日新月异，20年后我们都已经成人，你有想过20年后的生活吗？我们总说未来可期，未来又会是什么样子呢？每个人都有自己不同的想象。假如你是李华，学校英语校刊上将设立“Life in the future”的话题专栏，请你根据下列提示写一篇80字左右的短文进行投稿，从不同角度谈谈你对未来生活的展望。80词左右。
动物和人类 衣食住行 学习或工作
1. 许多动物将会得到更好的保护，比如大熊猫、亚洲象等； 2. 更多的人把宠物当成家人看待，而不是随意遗弃它们。 1. 当你需要更多食物时，你的智能冰箱将会帮你从超市订购； 2. 新型的氢气汽车—The CJ3被广泛使用。 3. ……（请自行发挥一点） …… （请自行发挥至少一点）
提示词：hydrogen car氢气汽车 abandon遗弃
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2．假定你是李华，你的外国朋友Jerry刚来深圳一个月，还有些不习惯。请你给他写一封电子邮件，介绍一下深圳这个城市，帮助他早日融入深圳的当地生活。
要点：
1.深圳是一座义工之城，建议他多参加一些有意义的义工活动。
2.他在深圳可以体会到丰富的中国传统文化，丰富自己的业余生活。
3.任选一点自己再补充（公园之城，运动之都，海滨城市……）。
要求：
1.必须包含所有要点，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；
2.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
3.条理清晰，语意连贯，语句通畅；
4.不少于80词，开头结尾不计入总词数。
Dear Jerry,
I heard that you’ve been in Shenzhen for only one month. Maybe you don’t get used to your life in a new city.
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I’m looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
3．假如你是李华，在今天的英语课上，你们班以“Life in the future: better or worse ”为主题进行了讨论。请你写一篇英语短文，总结一下班上同学的讨论结果。短文需包括以下要点：
1.乐观者的观点： 世界变得更好，人的寿命更长；
2. 担忧者的观点： 世界变得更挤，环境问题更多；
3. 你的观点。 (请补充)
注意：
(1)参考词汇：对……乐观的(be optimistic about)
(2)词数：80词左右(短文的开头已给出，不计入词数)；
(3)不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
Today we had a discussion about the life in the future in the English class.
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4．你想象过未来的生活会是怎么样的吗？请根据下面的提示内容，写一篇关于未来生活的英语短文。
提示内容：
1. 交通将会变得更加快捷、安全，人类可以到其他星球上度假，还可以去海底生活；
2. 孩子们可以在家里通过电视或广播接受教育；
3. 人们可以享受更长寿、更健康的生活。
要求：
1. 语意连贯，语句通顺，要点齐全，可以适当发挥；
2. 词数： 80左右（短文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数）。
参考词汇： transportation交通， videophone可视电话， physical examination体检
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5．随着科技的发展，未来人们的生活将会发生很大的变化。Shenzhen Daily正开展以“Our Future Life”为主题的征文活动，请根据以下提示写一篇英语短文投稿，内容包含以下要点：
1.交通不再拥挤，因为人们拥有可以飞的摩托车；
2.越来越多的人去月球度假；
3.越来越多的机器人为我们服务，例如：①……；②……；
4.为了未来的美好生活，你会做些什么准备。（至少2点）
要求：
1.80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数内；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
3.可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯；
4.标点正确，书面整洁。
提示词：拥挤的heavy；摩托车motorbike
Our Future Life
With the development of science and technology. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
6．2022年6月5日，搭载三名宇航员的“神舟十四号”飞船顺利升空。将来去太空遨游成为了很多人的梦想，因为太空对我们来说是一个很神秘的地方。假如你是李华，上周去太空旅游了一趟。请发挥你的想象力，根据以下要点提示，以“My space travel”为题，写一篇文章描述你的太空之旅。
要点：
1. 旅行的同伴是谁？
2. 旅行的方式及花费的时间？
3. 在太空看到了什么？
4. 你的感受。
要求：
1. 要点齐全，可适当发挥；
2. 不得出现学校、姓名等个人信息；
3. 80词左右，开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。
My space travel
I had a great time last week and I was so excited because I had a journey into space.
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7．深圳成为国内首个进入5G时代的城市，科技发展正改变着我们的生活。假如你是李华。你校校报英文版正在开展题为“科技改变未来生活”的征文活动，请用英语写一篇短文描述你想象中的未来生活。
要点如下：
生活环境 青山绿水，鸟语花香
工作方式 居家办公，网络沟通
休闲娱乐 （自由发挥）
要求：
1.词数80左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2.可围绕要点适当发挥，使行文连贯；
3.文中不能出现与本人相关的信息。
Science and technology change our life
Shenzhen has become the first city in China to enter the time of 5G technology.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
8．科技的发展日新月异，我们的生活也发生着变化。假如你校英语周报正在举办以“Smart House in the Future”为题的征文活动。请你用英语写一篇短文投稿。（提示词语：温度temperature人工智能AI）
要点：（1）智能厨房：智能冰箱连接超市电脑等；
（2）智能卧室；
（3）机器人助手；
（4）……
要求：（1）80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数内；
（2）文中不得使用真实的校名与姓名；
（3）可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯；
（4）标点正确，书面整洁。
Smart House in the Future
With the development of technology, the house in the future must be very smart.
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参考答案：
1．范文
What will the future be like First of all, many animals will be better protected, such as giant pandas, Asian elephants and so on. Secondly, more people will treat their pets as family members instead of abandoning them at will. When you need more food, your smart fridge will help you order it from the supermarket. In addition, a new hydrogen car, The CJ3, will be widely used. In the future, our homes will be very smart. Finally, students will study at home and do not need to go to school. A lot of hard work will be done by robots.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态以“一般将来时”为主；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，可自行发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍动物和人类在未来的相处情况；
第二步，介绍人类的衣食住行情况；
第三步，最后说明在学习或工作上的情况。
[亮点词汇]
① first of all首先
② instead of而不是
③ in addition此外
[高分句型]
①When you need more food, your smart fridge will help you order it from the supermarket.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②In addition, a new hydrogen car, The CJ3, will be widely used.（被动语态）
2．例文
Dear Jerry,
I heard that you’ve been in Shenzhen for only one month. Maybe you don’t get used to your life in a new city. Let me introduce the city of Shenzhen to help you integrate into the local life in Shenzhen as soon as possible.
First of all, Shenzhen is a city of volunteers. You can take part in many meaningful volunteer activities. This will help you a lot. Secondly, you can experience the rich traditional Chinese culture and enrich your spare time life in Shenzhen. Finally, Shenzhen is also a city of parks. There are many parks where you can walk and exercise. I hope my introduction can help you know more about Shenzhen.
I’m looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第二人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，建议他多参加一些有意义的义工活动。
第二步，介绍他可以在深圳体验中国文化丰富自己；
第三步，最后介绍深圳也是公园之城，以及可以在里面做的事情。
[亮点词汇]
① help sb do sth帮助某人做某事
② first of all首先
③ take part in参加
[高分句型]
① There are many parks where you can walk and exercise.（where引导的定语从句）
3．范文
Today we had a discussion about the life in the future in the English class. Many students in our class look forward to the future life. They think that the world will be a better place than it is now and our lives will be greatly improved. As a result, people will live longer.
However, other students are worried about the future. They believe that the world will become more crowded. Therefore, we will have even more environmental problems.
But in my opinion, I think we will find ways to solve the problems and everyone will live more happily in the future.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，总体指出讨论的主题；
第二步，具体介绍乐观者及担忧者的不同的观点；
第三步，最后介绍自己的观点。
[亮点词汇]
① in the future在未来
② look forward to盼望
③ as a result结果
[高分句型]
① They think that the world will be a better place than it is now and our lives will be greatly improved.（that引导的宾语从句）
② we will find ways to solve the problems and everyone will live more happily in the future.（and连接并列句）
4．例文
In the future, transportation will become cleaner, faster and safer. It is likely for man to go on a space travel. We can take a vacation on the moon or visit other planets. With the earth’s land left no enough room, man can even live under the sea.
As for education, there will be no more teachers giving lessons in the classroom. Students can study at home on the radio or TV instead of going to school every day. In addition, every family will have videophones, through which we can go shopping and take a physical examination.
In the field of health and medicine, people in the future will be able to enjoy a longer and healthier life and remain active even in old age.
In a word, in the future, the new science and technology can make our life easier.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般将来时”；
③提示：要求根据提示内容描写关于未来生活的文章，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍未来的交通；
第二步，介绍未来的教育；
第三步，介绍未来健康和医学领域；
第四步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①In the future在未来
②As for至于
③instead of而不是
④In a word总而言之
[高分句型]
①In addition, every family will have videophones, through which we can go shopping and take a physical examination.（which引导的定语从句）
②In the field of health and medicine, people in the future will be able to enjoy a longer and healthier life and remain active even in old age.（and连接并列结构）
5． Our Future Life
With the development of science and technology. People’s lives will change a lot in the future.
In the future, there will be in the world. So there may not be enough food and water for so many people. But the traffic will not be heavy any more because people can go by flying motorbikes. And more and more people will go on a vacation to the Moon by spaceship. Houses, hospitals, schools will be built on other planets, too. People will do less work in the future, too. Robots will do the dangerous and hard work for people.
To have a better in the future, I’m going to study harder to have more knowledge. At the same time, I also want to have more time for sports to have a healthier body. I believe our life will be better and better.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于说明文写作。在写作时，第一段应承接短文开头，交代题目中的“未来人们的生活将会发生很大的变化”；第二段要包含前三个要点的内容，交代未来生活的样子；第三段写要点四，说明“会为未来的美好生活做些什么准备”。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来描述未来生活；时态采用一般将来时；要包含所有要点，并适当发挥，写出自己的准备内容，同时各要点间要保证条理清晰。
6．范文：
My space travel
I had a great time last week and I was so excited because I had a journey into space. I went there with a famous astronaut. He had been there many times. We spent 10 hours arriving there by spacecraft. When we reached there, I was amazed at the beauty of space. I saw many planets which looked very beautiful. But I thought the earth was the most beautiful. I hope everyone can have a chance to go on a space travel.
【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求以“My space travel”为题写一篇短文；要求包含所有提示内容。
2. 写作指导：此作文时态以一般过去时为主；采用第一人称口吻；直接采用1段落格式，阐述清楚太空旅行的人物、时间、方式、内容以及感受；注意无语法和拼写错误。
7．例文
Science and technology change our life
Shenzhen has become the first city in China to enter the time of 5G technology.
With the development of science and technology, our life in the future will be quite different from what it is now.
At that time, we’ll live in a greener and more beautiful world with trees, birds, blue skies and sunshine. And we’ll be able to arrange things like meals, bathing and sleep with our smart phones. Robots will be able to do most of the housework for us. As for work, we’ll mostly work at home, communicating ideas for work online. If necessary, we’ll have video meetings with our partners around the world. During our free time, we’ll be able to travel to places of interest in new vehicles, like flying cars. We’ll even enjoy space trips to the moon and other planets.
All in all, our life will become more comfortable and colorful.
【详解】1.题干解读：这是一篇材料作文，题目要求围绕表格内容写作，命题既有限制又给予了学生发挥的空间。题目和开头已经给出，文章内容要三个方面展开：生活环境、工作方式、休闲娱乐活动，学生们在此基础上对每个提示信息再进行合理地拓展，把文章写得更具体、更充实。
2.写作指导：写作时应注意以下几点：第一点：审题可知，本文写未来的生活应主要采用一般将来时并结合第一人称。第二点：文章开头已经给出，接下来需承接开头，叙述表格规定内容并合理拓展，最后总结。第三点：写作中可使用亮点词汇、短语和句型为文章增添色彩。第四点：文章做到思路清晰，层次分明，要点齐全；行文要语句通顺，符合逻辑关系；无语法、单词拼写和标点错误。
8．One possible version:
Smart House in the Future
With the development of technology, the house in the future must be very smart. All the things will be controlled by AI through the Internet. There will be a robot in our home. In the kitchen, the fridge will be connected with the supermarket. If some food is not enough, the fridge will send a message to the supermarket’s computer by itself. In the bedroom, the temperature will be controlled by AI. It can learn about the temperature of our bodies and change the room’s temperature to make us feel comfortable. In the room, the robot will help us make tea for the guests. Is it cool
【详解】1. 题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。根据提示要点，谈谈未来的智能住宅。注意写作时保证要点齐全，同时也要紧扣主题进行合理发挥。
2. 写作指导：本文以第三人称、一般将来时进行叙述。写作中内容要包含题目所给的提示内容，并在此基础上选用合适的连词，短语来进行串联和拓展；注意做到思路清晰，层次分明，要点齐全；行文要语句通顺，符合逻辑关系；无语法、单词拼写和标点错误。
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