2024年中考英语专练(深圳专用)--专题06 书面表达(含解析)

专题06 书面表达
1.(2022·广东·深圳市罗湖中学三模)假定你是李华,你在深圳市博物馆网站上看到古代艺术馆面向13~16岁的中学生招募英语解说员,你想成为其中一员。请根据以下内容提示,给该馆负责人张馆长写一封申请信。
要点:
1. 写信意图
2. 自身优势:①热爱文博事业、热心公益事业
②英语好、沟通能力强
③……
3. 希望被录用
参考词汇:
解说员:commentator
文博事业:museum and archaeological issue
公益事业:public welfare issues
要求:
1. 词数80左右(开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数);
2. 要点齐全,可适当发挥;
3. 条理清晰,语句通顺,意义连贯,书写规范;
4. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名。
Dear Mr. Zhang,
I’m Li Hua, a fifteen-year-old middle school student. I’m delighted to know from the website that the Ancient Art Gallery of Shenzhen Museum is recruiting English commentators. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I am looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
2.(2022·广东·深圳市新安中学(集团)第一实验学校模拟预测)假如你是李华,刚刚度过了植树节,而你的好朋友John在深圳,因为疫情反复,深圳全市实行封闭式管理。你想给好朋友写一封信,介绍一下自己如何度过植树节;同时给在疫区的好朋友一些居家生活学习的意见和鼓励。请你根据以下提示,写一封信给John。
内容提示:1.植树节在3月12日,自己如何度过植树节,植树的好处:2.疫情之下,居家建议:1)学习之余注意运动;2)规律作息;3)(自己添加至少一条)。
提示词:植树节Tree Planting Day 疫情epidemic
Dear John,
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3.(2022·广东·深圳实验学校三模)中国航天日(Space Day of China),为纪念中国航天事业取得的成就、向宇航员致敬,学校英语社团组织大家用英文写信给他们,请根据以下提示,完成书信。90词左右,开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
1. 为他们对太空事业做出的贡献感到骄傲;
2. 询问太空站(space station)上生活和工作的情况(至少两点);
3. 对天宫课堂(Tiangong Class)非常期待,希望学习到更多的航天知识;
4. 表达关心,祝愿他们顺利返航(return to Earth)、安全着陆(land v.)。
Dear astronauts,
I am writing to you with great excitement. ________________________________________________
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Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
4.(2022·广东·广州华侨外国语学校二模)假如你是李华,你的美国笔友Tom来信关心你将要参加的中考的情况,请根据以下表格的信息回信告知。
考试日期和科目 日期:6月20日至22日; 科目:第一天考语文、物理、化学; 第二天考数学、道法、历史; 第三天考英语。
考试准备情况 初三以来一直在准备
考试时的状态 会有点紧张,但会很快平静下来,因为……
对试题的感受 不会很难,但要认真对待。
对考试结果的期待 考进理想的学校……
提示词:
化学 Chemistry 道法 Politics 考进理想的学校 enter my ideal school
注意:
1. 词数:80词左右(短文开头和结尾已给出,不计入词数)
2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
Dear Tom, Thank you for your concern. Well, I’m going to take the once-a-year Senior High School entrance examination. ____________________________________________________________________
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
5.(2022·广东广州·三模)中考过后,很多同学想利用假期干些无酬劳(unpaid part-time job)的兼职来锻炼自己,可是一些家长却持反对态度。他们认为打工既耽误时间,又不安全。请你以“Should teenagers be allowed to do part-time jobs ”为题写一篇短文,谈谈你的看法。
注意:
1. 词数80左右(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数);
2. 不得透露学校,姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
Should Teenagers Be Allowed to Have Part-time Jobs
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6.(2022·广东·深圳市宝安中学(集团)三模)教育部近日印发通知,要求控制中小学生书面作业总量,合理布置不同类型的作业。为此,某英文杂志社正在开展以“My Creative English Homework”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华,请写一篇征文,讲述自身经历,提出合理建议。
要点:
做过的最有创意的英语作业 内容: 收获:
给外国人写一封信介绍春节 1. 提高写作技巧; 2. 宣扬中国文化
更多有创意的英语作业建议 内容: 理由:
1. 画思维导图 1. 更好地理解学习的内容; 2. 有助于记忆
2. 至少补充一点 ……
要求:
1. 字数在80词左右。开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 必须包含以上全部要点,可以适当发挥;
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
4. 表达清楚,语句通顺,意思连贯,书写规范
Doing English homework helps us to practice and use what we’ve learned in class.
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7.(2022·广东·南山实验教育麒麟中学三模)2022年4月21日,教育部召开发布会,介绍了义务教育课程方案和课程标准修订情况。新课标出台的目的在于从小培养孩子对生命的感知和关爱,增强责任心以及提升初中学生的公共服务意识。其中,学生需要学会整理收纳、烹饪及制作传统手工,积极参与公益劳动与志愿服务。作为一名中学生,你如何看待新课标对劳技课程要求的必要性?
内容:1. 劳技课新课标出台的目的;
2. 劳技课新课标包含的内容;
3. 你的观点。
要求:1. 词数80左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 内容包括要点,可适当发挥,使短文完整、语言流畅。
参考词汇: sense(感知), awareness(意识)
On 21st April, Ministry of Education issued New Curriculum Standard.
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8.(2022·广东·深圳市龙岗区平湖中学三模)初中生活即将过去,回顾初中三年的学校生活,你是否感到满意呢?请根据下面的提示,写一篇英语短文,总结你这三年的学校生活。
满意的方面 认真努力,养成了良好的习惯;
加入了篮球俱乐部,比赛并获奖;
……
不满意的方面 忙于学习,很少跟父母沟通;
参加志愿者活动较少;
……
要求:
1. 词数80左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
2. 要点齐全,可适当发挥;
3. 不得出现真实姓名和校名;
4. 条理清楚,语句通顺,意义连贯,书写规范。
How time flies! I’ll graduate from the school soon.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
9.(2022·广东广州·二模)假如你是李华。上周,你班举办了一场“My collections”展览活动,你提供了一些收藏品。请你根据提示,写一篇英文短文,向大家介绍你的收藏品。
1.爱好:收藏 2.收藏品情况:请你补充 3.收藏原因:请你补充
注意:
1.80词左右(短文开头已给出,不计入词数)
2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
3.参考词汇:冰墩墩 Bing Dwen Dwen 雪容融 Shuey Rhon Rhon
Hello, my name is Li Hua. _____________________________________________________________
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10.(2022·广东·南山实验教育麒麟中学模拟预测)为了激励学生持续关注环保问题,积极维护健康生存环境,指导更多同学减少碳足迹,我校举办英语演讲比赛,请你写演讲稿,题目为“Act now to reduce our carbon footprints”。
内容包括:
1. 介绍减少碳足迹的重要性;
2. 介绍如何才能减少碳足迹做环保好学生,完成下面表格三方面内容,并阐明你的做法;
3. 号召大家团结合作,身体力行,为环保做出自己应有的贡献。
食物 购物 家庭
主要食用水果蔬菜和谷物 少买点 使用LED灯
吃本地的、当季的食品 尽量不买过度包装的物品 把热水器的温度调低
你的观点 你的观点 你的观点
作文要求:
1.字数100词左右。
2.演讲稿开头已给出,不计入字数。
3.文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的信息,如人名、校名。
提示词汇:
green adj. 环保的 grains n.谷物 heater n. 热水器 turn…down 将……调低
over-packaged adj. (被)过度包装的 make contributions to… 为……做贡献
Act now to reduce our carbon footprints
Good morning, everyone. I’d like to give a speech here. As we all know, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
参考答案:
1.例文
Dear Mr. Zhang,
I’m Li Hua, a fifteen-year-old middle school student. I’m delighted to know from the website that the Ancient Art Gallery of Shenzhen Museum is recruiting English commentators. I am interested in the position and willing to apply for it.
I’m convinced that I’m qualified for the position. First and foremost, I am not only keen on museum and archaeological issues but also devoted to public welfare issues. What’s more, being fluent in spoken English, I am able to instruct visitors in English without difficulty. Besides, I am good at communicating with others, which can be a great help for the voluntary work. Last but not least, I have an experience in volunteering as an English commentator in a gallery, so I am well-prepared for the job.
I would appreciate it very much if you could take my application into consideration.
I am looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】1. 题干解读:题目要求写一封申请信,说明自己想成为艺术馆的英语解说员;要求包含所有内容提示。
2. 写作指导:此作文时态用一般现在时;采用第一人称口吻;可采用4段落格式,第一段:说明写信的目的;第二段:阐述自身优势来说明能胜任这份工作;第三段希望自己能够被录用;第四段希望收到回信。
2.Dear John,
How are you I just spent the Tree Planting Day on March 12th. On that day, my classmates and I went to the park to plant trees. Besides planting trees, we learned about different plants and flew kites. As everyone knows, trees can absorb harmful gases in the air, produce oxygen, fight against air pollution and so on. Therefore, we should strictly forbid cutting down trees and plant more trees.
During the COVID-19, you must protect ourselves. Here are some suggestions for you. First, besides studying, you should also pay attention to sports. Next, make sure you keep a regular schedule. Also, take more exercise and wear a mask when you go out and don’t gather.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解读:本文要求我们作为李华,给好朋友John写一封信,介绍一下自己如何度过植树节,同时给在疫区的好朋友一些居家生活学习的意见和鼓励。
2.写作指导:本文要主要以第一人称进行写作,时态以一般过去时和一般现在时为主。写作可以首先描述自己在植树节的活动,举例说明做了些什么;其次给朋友John一些疫情期间保护自己的建议。
3.范文:
Dear astronauts,
I am writing to you with great excitement. I am proud of your remarkable accomplishments made in China’s space expeditions. With my curiosity about your life and work in Tiangong space station, I am writing to enquire about your current situation. Have you adapted to the weightless environment If you miss your family, is it possible for you to make video calls on a regular basis. Additionally, I am looking forward to “Tiangong Class”. I hope we can learn a lot about the knowledge of space by it.
Wish you a successful mission and a comfortable journey! We all hope you will return to Earth smoothly and land safe and sound.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
【详解】1. 题干解读:题目要求给宇航员们写一封信;要求包含所有提示内容。
2. 写作指导:此作文时态以一般现在时为主,穿插使用其他时态;采用第一人称和第二人称口吻;可采用2段落格式,第一段:阐述对宇航员的尊敬、对太空生活的好奇以及对天宫课堂的期待;第二段:表达关心和祝愿。
4.例文
Dear Tom,
Thank you for your concern. Well, I’m going to take the once-a-year Senior High School entrance examination.
We are arranged to attend the exam on June 20th to 22nd. Chinese, physics and chemistry will be tested on the first day, math, politics and history will be tested on the second day, and English will be tested on the third day.
We have been busy in preparing for this exam since we are in Grade 9. Besides listening to our teachers carefully in class, we often work deep into night. Therefore, I believe I can succeed. At first, I will feel a bit nervous but soon I can calm down because Chinese and English are very easy and math is my favorite subject, you know. So I suppose I can get a good mark and I will be able to enter my ideal school.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解读:本文主要是根据题干表格内的提示告诉朋友自己即将要参加的中考的情况,可适当增加细节。
2.写作指导:本文以第一人称和一般现在时、一般将来时为主。第一段已给出;第二段主要描述考试日期和科目;第三段描述考试准备情况、考试时的状态、对试题的感受以及对考试结果的期待。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚,做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
5.例文:
Should Teenagers Be Allowed to Have Part-time Jobs
After the high school entrance exam, many students choose to have part-time jobs without being paid to spend their holiday. For them, doing part-time jobs allows them to improve their abilities. However, some parents disagree because it is a waste of time to have part-time jobs. Besides, it could be dangerous if you are not careful enough.
In my opinion, it is a good lead for students to have unpaid part-time jobs. Having part-time jobs allows us to have new life experiences and learn more about society. In addition, we can make new friends by meeting more people. What’s more, by working we can get more knowledge besides textbooks. It is a great way to broaden our horizons.
Of course, there are bad sides of having part-time jobs. But if you are careful and smart enough, I believe that a part-time job will be a valuable experience and adventure in your life.
【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇话题作文。要求以“Should teenagers be allowed to do part-time jobs ”为题,谈谈你对该问题的看法,注意要点齐全,可适当发挥。
2.写作指导:写作时主要以第三人称来行文,时态用一般现在时。作文可分为三段,第一段引出话题;第二段介绍自己的看法,主要是兼职工作的好处;第三段总结。要保证语言连贯,无语法和拼写错误。
6.例文
My Creative English Homework
Doing English homework helps us to practice and use what we’ve learned in class. Doing creative homework makes us more interested in English.
Once our teacher asked us to write a letter to a foreigner. We were told to introduce the Spring Festival in the letter. It not only helped me improve my written skills but also provided a good chance to spread Chinese traditional culture.
In my opinion, it’s also a good choice to draw mind maps. It helps us to have a better understanding of the lessons. Besides, we can learn to sing English songs, since most of us love singing. In this way, our English as well as hobbies develop.
I hope we’ll have more creative English homework in the future.
【详解】1.题干解读:这是一篇材料作文,要求根据所给的参考信息以“My Creative English Homework”为题写一篇征文,可适当增加细节。
2.写作指导:本文写自身经历时用一般过去时,提建议时可采用一般现在时,人称主要以第一、三人称交替使用。文章开头已给出,第一段点题;第二段描述自己做过的最有创意的英语作业;第三段提出更多有创意的英语作业建议;第四段表达希望。写作中可使用亮点词汇和句型为文章增添色彩。注意保证上下文语句通顺,条理清晰,文中无单词和语法上的错误。
7.例文:
On 21st April, Ministry of Education issued New Curriculum Standard. It is aimed to cultivate children to sense the life and nature, care about others, strengthen their responsibilities and raise their awareness of public service. Students need to learn to clean and organize, cook and make traditional handicraft. Moreover, they are asked to take active part in modern service labor and volunteering. Students are expected to acquire basic working capabilities for livelihood and individual development.
As far as I’m concerned, these life skills are important and should be taught to children. It is essential for students to form the right view of the world, life and values.
【详解】1.题干解读:在写作时应紧接开头继续写作,根据题目要求讲述劳技课新课标出台的目的以及具体的内容,并发表自己的观点。
2.写作指导:本文时态以一般现在时为主,人称以第一、三人称为主,写作时要认真审题,根据提示的内容,列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达;然后紧扣要点,动笔写作;可以围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等,要叙述完整,条理清晰。
8.例文:
How time flies! I’ll graduate from the school soon. Think back to the three years, I’ve learned a lot. I have been studying hard and have developed good study habits since I entered the middle school. As a result, I always get good marks in my exams. I joined in the basketball club, took part in several competitions and won some prizes. And I am always ready to help my classmates when they are in trouble. What’s more, I am a good listener when my classmates tell me their unhappy feelings. So I have some friends, we help each other with study and life.
However, I am busy with my school work, so I communicate less with my parents. I seldom took part in social public activities because there was always too much homework to do. But this summer I am going to take part in some social public activities. For example, I’ll volunteer to join in a clean-up campaign.
【详解】1.题干解读:该题目属于记叙文写作。在写作时应紧接开头继续写作,根据题目要求讲述三年学校生活满意的方面和不满意的方面。
2.写作指导:本文时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主,人称以第一人称为主,讲述三年学校生活的满意和不满意的方面,要叙述完整,条理清晰。
9.例文
Hello, my name is Li Hua. It’s my turn to share our group members’ collections. I began collecting some stamps when I was seven. Some of these stamps can fly. This makes me more interested in science. I started collecting stamps five months ago. There are many scenic spots on it. These stamps let me know more about cultures around the world. I also collect some Olympic mascots such as Bing Dwen Dwen and Shuey Rhon Rhon.
【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇给材料作文,要求根据班级的展览活动为主线写一篇短文,介绍你的收藏品。写作时承接开头;首先开门见山直接介绍自己的爱好及参展物品;逐项介绍参展物品的具体情况,有何故事;最后表述收藏这些物品的原因。
2.写作指导:本文应用一般现在时来叙述;以第一人称的角度表述;写作时要保证叙述完整、条理清晰,无语法及单词拼写错误。
10.例文:
Act now to reduce our carbon footprints
Good morning, everyone. I’d like to give a speech here. As we all know, low-carbon travel is becoming more and more important. But what should we do
First, we should eat healthy food. Eating more fruit, vegetables and grains is good for our health. We’d better eat local and seasonal food. I drink milk every day, because milk is considered one of the healthy foods.
Secondly, we shouldn’t buy things made of animal fur or ivory products. Try not to buy over-packaged things. I think it is important to keep the balance of nature and save resources.
Third, we should try to use LED lights. Turn the water heater down when using it. I think there is less and less energy in the world now. We shouldn’t waste it.
We should start from small things and play a role in protecting environment.
【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇演讲稿。要求以“Act now to reduce our carbon footprints”为题,结合表格内容进行写作,注意要点齐全,可适当发挥。
2.写作指导:写作时要以第一人称来行文,时态用一般现在时。作文要分别从食物、购物和家庭生活几方面入手,号召人们为环保做贡献。要保证语言连贯,无语法和拼写错误。

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