2024年中考英语冲刺解题技巧：书面表达之电子邮件和书信类
电子邮件和书信类文章按其内容可分为普通书信、感谢信、申请信、推荐信、邀请信、道歉信等多种类型，因其行文格式基本统一，所以，我们在写作时可以使用一些通用的写作策略，写作过程中再根据具体试题中的具体内容进行调整。
认真审题，确定体裁、时态、人称。
书信类文章有着自己独特的格式，写信人的地址及发信日期写在右上角，收信人的姓名及地址写在信纸的左上方；年份应该完全写出，如不能写08代替2008；月份一般不要简写；书信的在称呼下一行开始；称呼要顶格写，末尾要用逗号，而不是冒号；结尾敬语应该另起一行开始；敬语yours sincerely, faithfully等之后，必须写上逗号。
书信中的人称应以第一人称为主，但也不排除表述时的灵活使用。时态的运用比较灵活，要根据文章的内容选用。书信写作的基本要求：准确、简洁和清楚。一般来说书信的段落短、句子短、用词要平易。
构思提纲，列出写作要点。
　　信件类文章一般要含有称谓、正文、结尾客套语、签名，其中正文部分是信件的主体，一般来说可以分为三个部分来写作。
电子邮件和书信类文章正文
内容 经典句式
开头 称谓 Dear Sir, /Dear Lady, / Dear headmaster,
正文 第一段 问候并交待写信目的[来 How is it going I’m writing to introduce …… I am very glad to get your letter and I would like to …… You asked me about(problem, question in your letter, now let me give you some advice.[来 In reply your letter about ……[
第二段 围绕信件主题进行详细的说明、记叙、建议或论证 这一部分要根据信件的内容进行写作，常用句式可参考前面几个专题的内容
第三段 结束语 I hope to have a letter from you before long. Give my best wishes to you. Wishing your business ever successful！ Hope you are healthy. Please write to me as soon as possible. Please remember me to your whole family. Looking forward to your next visit to China.
结尾 签名 Yours, /Yours sincerely, /Your student, /Your son,
　　
三、遣词造句。
写作的下一个步骤，是根据确定的提纲和要点，选择适当的词汇造句。在造句时，初习写作者可以按照由简单句到复合句、特殊句式的写作思路进行写作。在保证句子基本正确的基础上，再将简单句润色为
稍为复杂的句式。
四、组句成篇。
　　最后，我们可以再读文章，检查是否存在语法、拼写错误，并在句与句之间增加些衔接、过渡词汇，组句成篇。
一、书面表达
1．王梅的英国朋友 Jenny去到了一个新学校，遇到了一些问题，她向王梅寻求帮助。下面是 Jenny发来的电子邮件的部分内容。请你根据所给内容，以王梅的名义回复。
I have some problems now. I have been in my new school for one month, but I haven’t made any friends. And I also have some trouble with my schoolwork. I don’t know what to do. Can you give me some suggestions
注意：
(1)针对 Jenny的问题，给出合理的建议，可适当发挥。
(2)回复邮件中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
(3)词数80个左右 (开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。
Dear Jenny,
I’m glad to hear from you. Don’t worry. _______________________________________________________
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Yours,
Wang Mei
【参考答案】
Dear Jenny,
I’m glad to hear from you. Don’t worry. I can give you some suggestions on how to solve the problems.
To make friends, I think you can communicate with your classmates more often to let them get to know you. What’s more, join a club or take part in some activities. They are good ways to know more students and make friends with them.
As for schoolwork, you can ask your classmates or teachers for help. It can not only help you solve your problems but also help you get closer to your classmates and teachers. In addition, it’s best to make a plan before studying because it can help you make full use of your time.
I hope these suggestions are useful and helpful to you.
Yours,
Wang Mei
【详解】
［总体分析］
①题材:本文是封电子邮件；
②时态:本文时态为一般现在时；
③提示:写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏邮件中需要回答的两个问题，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
［写作步骤］
第一步，总述回信内容关于如何解决问题的建议；
第二步，关于交朋友和学业的建议；
第三步，结束语，希望建议有帮助。
［亮点词汇］
① What’s more此外；
②not only...but also...不仅……而且
③ In addition除此之外
［高分句型］
①In addition, it’s best to make a plan before studying because it can help you make full use of your time. （原因状语从句）
② I hope these suggestions are useful and helpful to you.（宾语从句）
2．假如你是李华，下周六上午你们学校将与社区在学校操场上共同举办以“品民俗，话端午”为主题的活动，你打算邀请你们班的交换生Peter一起参加。请根据以下图示提示，用英语写一封电子邮件，告诉他活动的时间、地点、活动安排以及需要做什么准备。
要求：
1. 电子邮件的内容必须包括图示中的所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名；
3. 词数80左右（电子邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear Peter,
How is it going _________________________________________________________________________
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I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考答案】
Dear Peter,
How is it going I’m writing to invite you to take part in our activity to welcome the Dragon Boat Festival. It is going to be held on our school playground next Saturday morning.
I can’t wait to tell you about the interesting activities. At the beginning, some seniors from the community
will teach us to make zongzi and we can eat it after that. What’s more, we will have a chance to watch the dragon boat models. Besides, our Chinese teacher will share some ancient poems about the festival. You will be surprised by the beauty of the language. Last but not least, according to the weather report, it will be sunny that day so you’d better wear a cap.
The activities are very interesting and meaningful and I am sure you will have a good time with us.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏“要点”中需要做的准备，注意不要遗漏要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，引出将举办端午节活动并邀请Peter参加；
第二步，具体介绍活动相关内容，围绕“举办时间、地点、活动安排”等展开；
第三步，告知对方需要做的准备，抒发感悟并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①can’t wait to do sth迫不及待做某事
②have a chance to do sth有做某事的机会
③according to根据
[高分句型]
The activities are very interesting and meaningful and I am sure you will have a good time with us.（宾语从句）
3．假如你是张芳，有一个美国笔友叫Julia。请你根据下面的信息给Julia写一封电子邮件，告诉她你是如何度过在家上网课的时光的，并告诉她从父母那里学会做饭给你带来哪些好处。
写作要点：
1.写信目的：告诉Julia你前一段时间是如何在家学习和生活的。
2.介绍如何度过在家上网课的时光。
（1）学习方面：认真上网课，并按照老师的要求完成所有任务
（2）健康方面：每天在室内做一些简单的运动，并多吃蔬菜和水果
（3）生活方面：每天打扫房间并和父母学会了做饭
3.说一说从父母那里学习做饭会给中学生带来哪些好处。
写作要求：
（1）不得使用真实的姓名和校名。
（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。
（3）字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。
（4）至少80词。
Dear Julia,
How is everything going
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【参考答案】
Dear Julia,
How is everything going
I have online classes at home from Monday to Friday. I take online classes seriously, and complete all tasks according to the teacher’s requirements. Besides, I also do some simple indoor sports every day, and eat more vegetables and fruits to keep healthy. When I am free, I often help my parents with housework. I clean my room every day and learn to cook with my parents. I think cooking is an essential life skill. I can help my parents to reduce their stress from the work and take good care of myself when they are busy.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Zhang Fang
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据提示要点进行写作，注意要点齐全，表述完整。以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，问候对方；
第二步，具体介绍如何度过在家上网课的时光，从学习、健康和生活方面进行阐述；
第三步，介绍学习做饭的好处；
第四步，表达祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
①take seriously认真对待
②besides此外
③be free有空
④take good care of myself好好照顾自己
⑤according to根据
[高分句型]
①When I am free, I often help my parents with housework. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②I think cooking is an essential life skill. (省略that的宾语从句；动名词作主语)
4．假如你是李华，你的笔友Chris对中国文化很感兴趣。他给你发来电子邮件，询问中国的传统节日。请你用英语回复一封电子邮件，向他介绍一个你最喜欢的中国传统节日，并说说理由。
提示词语：the Spring Festival the Lantern Festival the Dragon Boat Festival
the Mid-Autumn Festival the Double Ninth Festival
traditional, show, get together, celebration
提示问题：
1.what’s your favourite traditional festival Please describe it.
2.Why do you love it
要求
（1）词数：80~100个。
（2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
Dear Chris,
I am glad that you are interested in Chinese traditional festivals.__________________________________
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I hope the above is helpful. Please feel free to ask for more information.
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考答案】
Dear Chris,
I’m glad that you are interested in Chinese traditional festivals.
My favorite traditional festival is Dragon Boat Festival. It falls on the fifth day of the fifth lunar month every year. On that day, Chinese people usually hold lots of interesting celebrations. The Dragon boat race is the highlight, which truly is a combination of strength and beauty. And eating Zongzi, which is a kind of sticky rice dumpling, is a must during the Dragon Boat Festival.
The reason why I love the festival is not only the enjoyment it brings but also the deep meaning behind it. The festival is celebrated to remember Qu Yuan, a great poet and patriot. Celebrating the day also represents Chinese people’s love for their country.
I hope the above is helpful. Please feel free to ask for more information.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】
[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图借用“简单介绍你喜欢的中国的传统节日”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，从“节日名称、时间、庆祝节日的活动、喜欢的原因等”几个方面重点介绍中国传统节日的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语表达“希望自己的内容对Chris了解中国文化有帮助”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①The Dragon boat race 赛龙舟
②a combination of 组合，结合
③a kind of 一种
④not only...but also... 不仅……而且……
⑤patriot 爱国者
[高分句型]
①The Dragon boat race is the highlight, which truly is a combination of strength and beauty. （which引导的非限制性定语从句）
②The reason why I love the festival is not only the enjoyment it brings but also the deep meaning behind it.（why引导的定语从句）
5．假定你是李华，最近收到来自澳大利亚的交换生Tony的电子邮件。请你阅读后回复。
注意：
1.词数80左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数；
2. 回复须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使全文连贯、通顺：
3. 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear Li Hua, How are you these days I’m so excited to go to Wuwei as an exchange (交换) student soon and we can meet again! Could you please tell me something about Wuwei What do you think of Wuwei and the people here What great changes have taken place these years Is there anywhere interesting or anything delicious By the way, what’s the weather like in Wuwei when I’m arriving in winter Looking forward to your reply. Yours,
Tony
Dear Tony,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【参考答案】
Dear Tony,
Thanks for your mail. I hope everything is OK with you. Now let me tell you something about my hometown, Wuwei.
I think it is a city where history and modernity meet. The people here are very friendly and kind-hearted. Great changes have taken place in this city these years. There have been more beautiful natural parks than ever before. The city is becoming greener and greener.
Wuwei mutton, a major feature, is tender and delicious. You can’t miss it.
By the way, it’s very cold here in winter, so don’t forget to bring your warmest clothes.
I’m looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：需根据Tony的电子邮件内容梳理出写作要点，考生应注意不要遗漏邮件中提出的问题，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，对Tony即将来武威表示开心和欢迎，并引出介绍武威的话题；
第二步，对Tony提出的问题进行回复，从“对武威的评价、武威人民的特点、近年来发生的变化、武威美食、天气等”几个方面重点介绍Tony想了解的情况；
第三步，书写结语。表达“期待在武威相聚”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①kind-hearted善良的
②tender柔软的
[高分句型]
①I think it is a city where history and modernity meet.（where引导的限制性定语从句，省略引导词that引导的宾语从句）
6．2024年巴黎奥运会（Paris 2024）志愿者项目的报名通道现已开启! 假如你是李华，请根据下方赛事官方的报名要求，写一篇英语短文作为你的申请信。
PARIS 2024 VOLUNTEER PROGRAMME
Conditions to Be A Volunteer※Be at least 14 years old. ※Speak French or English well. ※Have at least one volunteer experience and tell us about it. ※Tell us what you can do to help. ※Tell us your hope for Paris 2024.
注意：
（1）短文必须包括所有要点，并适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
（3）词数：80—100；
（4）书信开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Paris 2024,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Paris 2024,
I’m Li Hua, a 16-year-old boy from China. I think I am qualified to be a volunteer for you next summer.
I can speak English very well. I have taken part in several English speech contests in the past three years. Besides, I have some volunteer experiences. For example, I was a volunteer at the 19th Asian Games in 2023. I helped many foreign visitors and athletes. If I become a member of you, I could help organize activities or check tickets.
Last but not least, I sincerely hope that everyone will be able to share exciting moments and unforgettable memories!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中“自己补充”内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山提出请求：希望加入2024年巴黎奥运会（Paris 2024）志愿者；
第二步，具体介绍自己申请加入的目的、原因、优势、打算等内容；
第三步，书写结语，希望能通过申请。
[亮点词汇]
①take part in参加
②in the past three years在过去的三年里
③become a member of成为……的成员
④be able to能
[高分句型]
①I think I am qualified to be a volunteer for you next summer.（省略that的宾语从句）
②If I become a member of you, I could help organize activities or check tickets.（if引导的条件状语从句）
③I sincerely hope that everyone will be able to share exciting moments and unforgettable memories!（that引导的宾语从句）
7．初中三年即将进入尾声，每位同学都在这段重要的成长时期有了不同的收获。某校的老师组织了以“我成长，我快乐”为主题的中外交流会。假如你是赵敏，请以此主题给你的笔友Bob写一封电子邮件，介绍一次你自己在初中三年中印象最深刻的成长经历及带给你的收获。
内容包括：
·Write about the purpose of your writing.
·Tell a story about how you grew up.
·Share what you have learned from it.
要求：
1. 词数不少于80词，首尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 文中不能出现真实的人名、校名。
Dear Bob,
How are you _________________________________________________________________________________
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Yours,
Zhao Min
【参考答案】
Dear Bob,
How are you I’m very exciting these days because I’ll graduate from middle school in a month.
In the past few years, I’ve learned a lot not only from classes but also from people around me. There is one thing that impressed me. Last spring, our school held a sports meeting. I took part in the 1,500-meter race. When I nearly reached the finishing line, I fell over. At this moment, a girl named Li Hui stopped to help me. She held me to the finishing line. Although neither of us got an award, I owned valuable friendship.
From then on, like Li Hui, I try my best to help people in need. Helping others makes me proud of myself.
Is there anything that impresses you in your life I hope to hear from you soon.
All the best.
Yours,
Zhao Min
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材：本文为话题作文，是一封电子邮件；
②时态：一般过去时、一般现在时；
③提示：围绕主题“我成长，我快乐”，需要包括所有要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，寒暄，引出话题；
第二步，讲述一次你自己在初中三年中印象最深刻的成长经历；
第三步，说明此事对我产生的影响。
第四步，结束语。
[亮点词汇]
①take part in 参加
②at this moment 就在这时
③hear from you 收到你的来信
[高分句型]
①There is one thing that impressed me. （定语从句）
②Although neither of us got an award, I owned valuable friendship.（让步状语从句）
8．假如你是李晨，你的美国笔友Linda打算来中国度假。请你根据下面所给的要点提示给她写一封不少于80词的电子邮件，简单介绍一下中国的风俗与餐桌礼仪。
要点：
①赴宴要准时，见面要微笑、握手；
②每次不要吃太多；
③当你吃饱了，对主人的劝菜应礼貌回绝；
④告辞时，要对主人表示感谢。
要求：
①内容包括所有提示要点，但不要逐词翻译；
②行文流畅、脉络清晰、字迹工整，可适当发挥；
③开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Linda,
I'm glad to hear that you will come to my country for vacation. Different countries have different customs and table manners. In China, ________________________________________________________________________
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【参考答案】
Dear Linda,
I’m glad to hear that you will come to my country for vacation. Different countries have different customs and table manners. In China, if you’re invited to dinner, you’re supposed to be on time and shake hands with the host with a smile. While eating, you should not eat too much at a time. It’s good manners to chew with your mouth closed and use a napkin to wipe your mouth sometimes. When you are full but the host still asks you to help yourself to some more food, you should say “Thank you. It’s delicious, but I’m full.” It’s polite to say thanks while leaving. Have a good trip!
Yours,
Li Chen
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是封电子邮件；
②时态：本文时态以一般现在时为主；
③提示：注意句子要连贯、通顺、符合逻辑。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍这封电子邮件的目的；
第二步，具体介绍中国的风俗与餐桌礼仪；
[亮点词汇]
①be supposed to do应该做某事
②at a time一次
③some more food更多食物
[高分句型]
①In China, if you’re invited to dinner, you’re supposed to be on time and shake hands with the host with a smile.（条件状语从句）
②When you are full but the host still asks you to help yourself to some more food, you should say “Thank you.（时间状语从句）
9．“2024中外青年文化交流营”即将于今年五一假期在济宁举办，一些外国学生将到曲阜“三孔”参观，现急需招募十名志愿者。假定你是李华，请写一封电子邮件推荐自己。根据以下要点提示，写一篇英语短文。提示：
1. 自荐目的：成为志愿者；
2. 个人信息：身份，年龄，性格（外向、善于与人相处），假期有空；
3. 个人优势：擅长英语；
4. 表达期望：获得机会并能做好，请本周五前回复。
注意：
1. 词数100左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 须包括以上所有信息，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不能出现任何透露考生真实身份的信息。
提示词汇：曲阜三孔 The Three Holes of Qufu
要求：
1. 须包括以上所有提示信息，并适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现任何透露考生真实身份的信息；
3. 100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am glad to see your notice Volunteers Wanted. On the coming May Day, some foreign students__________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考答案】
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am glad to see your notice Volunteers Wanted. On the coming May Day, some foreign students will visit The Three Holes of Qufu. I’m willing to be a volunteer. Let me introduce myself to you.
I’m a middle school student aged 15. I’m an outgoing girl who can always get on well with others. As for the time, I will be available this holiday. My oral English is so excellent that I have no difficulty communicating with foreign friends. More importantly, I know a lot about The Three Holes of Qufu culture. I’m sure I can help them have a better understanding of it. I believe I can manage it if you give me a chance.
Please reply to me by Friday!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】
[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表达自荐的目的；
第二步，具体描述个人信息和优势；
第三步，最后表达期望。
[亮点词汇]
①be willing to do乐意做
②get on well with sb和某人相处得好
③help sb do sth帮助某人做某事
[高分句型]
①I’m an outgoing girl who can always get on well with others.（who引导定语从句）
②My oral English is so excellent that I have no difficulty communicating with foreign friends.（so...that...引导结果状语从句）
③I believe I can manage it if you give me a chance.（if引导条件状语从句）
10．假如你是第一中学毕业班的学生李平，你的笔友美国学生Mike想了解你的近况，请你给他写一 封电子邮件介绍一下你的备考生活，并和他说说你在有限的时间内如何积极备考。
写作要点：
1. 告诉他你的备考生活充实而又忙碌；
2. 介绍你的备考生活。
(1)每天课后学习2—3个小时；
(2)坚持体育锻炼；
3. 谈谈你是如何在有限的时间内积极备考的。(有限的时间： limited time)
写作要求：
1. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。
2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。
3. 字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。
4. 至少80词。
Dear Mike,
I’m happy to hear from you. _________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ping
【参考答案】
Dear Mike,
I’m happy to hear from you. As a graduating student, my days are filled with excitement and busyness, because I must prepare for the coming exams.
My preparation routine is quite structured. After school, I dedicate 2—3 hours to studying, focusing on revising key concepts and solving practice problems. However, I also make it a point to balance my studies with physical activities. Regular exercise helps me stay refreshed and focused, ready to tackle the challenges ahead. I create a detailed study plan, setting clear goals for each day. This helps me stay organized and on track. Additionally, I make use of every available resource, to maximize my learning.
Overall, while the days are busy, I am enjoying this phase of my life.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ping
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点应注意题干给出的“介绍自己的备考生活”并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点题，介绍备考生活是忙碌的；
第二步，根据题干给处的要点，详细描述备考生活；
第三步，介绍自己是如何在有限的时间内积极备考，点评备考生活并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①be filled with被……充满
②prepare for准备
[高分句型]
①As a graduating student, my days are filled with excitement and busyness, because I must prepare for the coming
exams.（because引导原因状语从句）
②Additionally, I make use of every available resource, to maximize my learning.（不定式表目的）2024年中考英语冲刺解题技巧：书面表达之电子邮件和书信类
电子邮件和书信类文章按其内容可分为普通书信、感谢信、申请信、推荐信、邀请信、道歉信等多种类型，因其行文格式基本统一，所以，我们在写作时可以使用一些通用的写作策略，写作过程中再根据具体试题中的具体内容进行调整。
认真审题，确定体裁、时态、人称。
书信类文章有着自己独特的格式，写信人的地址及发信日期写在右上角，收信人的姓名及地址写在信纸的左上方；年份应该完全写出，如不能写08代替2008；月份一般不要简写；书信的在称呼下一行开始；称呼要顶格写，末尾要用逗号，而不是冒号；结尾敬语应该另起一行开始；敬语yours sincerely, faithfully等之后，必须写上逗号。
书信中的人称应以第一人称为主，但也不排除表述时的灵活使用。时态的运用比较灵活，要根据文章的内容选用。书信写作的基本要求：准确、简洁和清楚。一般来说书信的段落短、句子短、用词要平易。
构思提纲，列出写作要点。
　　信件类文章一般要含有称谓、正文、结尾客套语、签名，其中正文部分是信件的主体，一般来说可以分为三个部分来写作。
电子邮件和书信类文章正文
内容 经典句式
开头 称谓 Dear Sir, /Dear Lady, / Dear headmaster,
[来 正文 第一段 问候并交待写信目的[来 How is it going I’m writing to introduce …… I am very glad to get your letter and I would like to …… You asked me about(problem, question in your letter, now let me give you some advice.[来 In reply your letter about ……[
第二段 围绕信件主题进行详细的说明、记叙、建议或论证 这一部分要根据信件的内容进行写作，常用句式可参考前面几个专题的内容
第三段 结束语 I hope to have a letter from you before long. Give my best wishes to you. Wishing your business ever successful！ Hope you are healthy. Please write to me as soon as possible. Please remember me to your whole family. Looking forward to your next visit to China.
结尾 签名 Yours, /Yours sincerely, /Your student, /Your son,
　　
三、遣词造句。
写作的下一个步骤，是根据确定的提纲和要点，选择适当的词汇造句。在造句时，初习写作者可以按照由简单句到复合句、特殊句式的写作思路进行写作。在保证句子基本正确的基础上，再将简单句润色为
稍为复杂的句式。
四、组句成篇。
　　最后，我们可以再读文章，检查是否存在语法、拼写错误，并在句与句之间增加些衔接、过渡词汇，组句成篇。
一、书面表达
1．王梅的英国朋友 Jenny去到了一个新学校，遇到了一些问题，她向王梅寻求帮助。下面是 Jenny发来的电子邮件的部分内容。请你根据所给内容，以王梅的名义回复。
I have some problems now. I have been in my new school for one month, but I haven’t made any friends. And I also have some trouble with my schoolwork. I don’t know what to do. Can you give me some suggestions
注意：
(1)针对 Jenny的问题，给出合理的建议，可适当发挥。
(2)回复邮件中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
(3)词数80个左右 (开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。
Dear Jenny,
I’m glad to hear from you. Don’t worry. _______________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Wang Mei
2．假如你是李华，下周六上午你们学校将与社区在学校操场上共同举办以“品民俗，话端午”为主题的活动，你打算邀请你们班的交换生Peter一起参加。请根据以下图示提示，用英语写一封电子邮件，告诉他活动的时间、地点、活动安排以及需要做什么准备。
要求：
1. 电子邮件的内容必须包括图示中的所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名；
3. 词数80左右（电子邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear Peter,
How is it going _________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________
I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
3．假如你是张芳，有一个美国笔友叫Julia。请你根据下面的信息给Julia写一封电子邮件，告诉她你是如何度过在家上网课的时光的，并告诉她从父母那里学会做饭给你带来哪些好处。
写作要点：
1.写信目的：告诉Julia你前一段时间是如何在家学习和生活的。
2.介绍如何度过在家上网课的时光。
（1）学习方面：认真上网课，并按照老师的要求完成所有任务
（2）健康方面：每天在室内做一些简单的运动，并多吃蔬菜和水果
（3）生活方面：每天打扫房间并和父母学会了做饭
3.说一说从父母那里学习做饭会给中学生带来哪些好处。
写作要求：
（1）不得使用真实的姓名和校名。
（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。
（3）字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。
（4）至少80词。
Dear Julia,
How is everything going
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
4．假如你是李华，你的笔友Chris对中国文化很感兴趣。他给你发来电子邮件，询问中国的传统节日。请你用英语回复一封电子邮件，向他介绍一个你最喜欢的中国传统节日，并说说理由。
提示词语：the Spring Festival the Lantern Festival the Dragon Boat Festival
the Mid-Autumn Festival the Double Ninth Festival
traditional, show, get together, celebration
提示问题：
1.what’s your favourite traditional festival Please describe it.
2.Why do you love it
要求
（1）词数：80~100个。
（2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
Dear Chris,
I am glad that you are interested in Chinese traditional festivals.__________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_____
I hope the above is helpful. Please feel free to ask for more information.
Yours,
Li Hua
5．假定你是李华，最近收到来自澳大利亚的交换生Tony的电子邮件。请你阅读后回复。
注意：
1.词数80左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数；
2. 回复须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使全文连贯、通顺：
3. 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear Li Hua, How are you these days I’m so excited to go to Wuwei as an exchange (交换) student soon and we can meet again! Could you please tell me something about Wuwei What do you think of Wuwei and the people here What great changes have taken place these years Is there anywhere interesting or anything delicious By the way, what’s the weather like in Wuwei when I’m arriving in winter Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Tony
Dear Tony,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
6．2024年巴黎奥运会（Paris 2024）志愿者项目的报名通道现已开启! 假如你是李华，请根据下方赛事官方的报名要求，写一篇英语短文作为你的申请信。
PARIS 2024 VOLUNTEER PROGRAMME
Conditions to Be A Volunteer※Be at least 14 years old. ※Speak French or English well. ※Have at least one volunteer experience and tell us about it. ※Tell us what you can do to help. ※Tell us your hope for Paris 2024.
注意：
（1）短文必须包括所有要点，并适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
（3）词数：80—100；
（4）书信开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Paris 2024,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
7．初中三年即将进入尾声，每位同学都在这段重要的成长时期有了不同的收获。某校的老师组织了以“我成长，我快乐”为主题的中外交流会。假如你是赵敏，请以此主题给你的笔友Bob写一封电子邮件，介绍一次你自己在初中三年中印象最深刻的成长经历及带给你的收获。
内容包括：
·Write about the purpose of your writing.
·Tell a story about how you grew up.
·Share what you have learned from it.
要求：
1. 词数不少于80词，首尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 文中不能出现真实的人名、校名。
Dear Bob,
How are you _________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Zhao Min
8．假如你是李晨，你的美国笔友Linda打算来中国度假。请你根据下面所给的要点提示给她写一封不少于80词的电子邮件，简单介绍一下中国的风俗与餐桌礼仪。
要点：
①赴宴要准时，见面要微笑、握手；
②每次不要吃太多；
③当你吃饱了，对主人的劝菜应礼貌回绝；
④告辞时，要对主人表示感谢。
要求：
①内容包括所有提示要点，但不要逐词翻译；
②行文流畅、脉络清晰、字迹工整，可适当发挥；
③开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Linda,
I'm glad to hear that you will come to my country for vacation. Different countries have different customs and table manners. In China, ________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
9．“2024中外青年文化交流营”即将于今年五一假期在济宁举办，一些外国学生将到曲阜“三孔”参观，现急
需招募十名志愿者。假定你是李华，请写一封电子邮件推荐自己。根据以下要点提示，写一篇英语短文。提示：
1. 自荐目的：成为志愿者；
2. 个人信息：身份，年龄，性格（外向、善于与人相处），假期有空；
3. 个人优势：擅长英语；
4. 表达期望：获得机会并能做好，请本周五前回复。
注意：
1. 词数100左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 须包括以上所有信息，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不能出现任何透露考生真实身份的信息。
提示词汇：曲阜三孔 The Three Holes of Qufu
要求：
1. 须包括以上所有提示信息，并适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现任何透露考生真实身份的信息；
3. 100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am glad to see your notice Volunteers Wanted. On the coming May Day, some foreign students__________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
10．假如你是第一中学毕业班的学生李平，你的笔友美国学生Mike想了解你的近况，请你给他写一 封电子邮件介绍一下你的备考生活，并和他说说你在有限的时间内如何积极备考。
写作要点：
1. 告诉他你的备考生活充实而又忙碌；
2. 介绍你的备考生活。
(1)每天课后学习2—3个小时；
(2)坚持体育锻炼；
3. 谈谈你是如何在有限的时间内积极备考的。(有限的时间： limited time)
写作要求：
1. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。
2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。
3. 字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。
4. 至少80词。
Dear Mike,
I’m happy to hear from you. _________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ping

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