2023-2024上学期期末考试八年级上英语期末专题复习 书面表达作文20篇(含解析)


2023-2024学年上学期期末考试八年级上英语专题复习
作文专题:书面表达20篇(人教新目标Go for it!)
期末真题+名校模拟
包含各种类型书面表达,话题匹配八年级上册
学校:___________姓名:___________班级:___________考号:___________
一、材料作文
1.新年即将来临, 新的一年期待我们更好地提高和完善自我。请根据下面内容提示,帮李华拟写一份他全家各成员的新年计划。
要求:
1. 短文应包括提示中所有的写作要点,条理清楚, 行文连贯,可适当发挥;
2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名;
3. 词数80左右。
父亲 锻炼, 花更多的时间和家人相处
母亲 学唱歌, 学做更多美味的饭菜
Li Hua 学习更加努力,读更多的书,改掉不好的习惯(get over bad habits)
妹妹 少吃垃圾食品,帮助父母做家务
New Year is coming and my family made some resolutions to live a better life. They are as follows.
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2.近来,某校针对中学生使用互联网情况做了一项调查。请根据图片内容,向大家说明下调查情况,并对此提出有关如何正确使用互联网的建议。
要求: 1. 语句通顺,条理清楚,可适当发挥;2. 不少于 80 词; 3. 注意书写规范,大小写及标点。
How to use the Internet correctly
1. spend less time on games
2. protect your personal (个人的) information
3. …
The Internet
The Internet is changing the world. It is becoming an important part of our lives. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3.近来很多学生感到学习很累,作业多,内卷厉害,压力大,其实做个快乐的中学生并不难,关键是学会高效学习,合理安排时间!请根据以下提示,以“Be a Happy Student”为题写一篇80词以上的短文谈谈你的看法。
参考词汇:knowledge知识,copy抄袭,in class课堂上,by oneself独立地
注意事项:
1. 必须包含表格中所有内容要点,可适当发挥,开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名。
As students, it’s important for us to live a happy life. Do you know how to be a happy student I don’t think it’s difficult.
First, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
In a word, we should do our best to be happy.
4.假如你是Andy,你有一个英国朋友Sam。请介绍Sam给你的同学们。
Name Sam
Age 15
Personalities honest, ...; helpful, ....
Hobbies 1. DIY: make...with...2. travelling: where, what, ...
Dream to be a teacher in China because....
要点:
1. 根据提示,适当发挥,语句通顺,意思连贯;
2. 标题和开头已经给出,不计入总词数,字数80左右。
Hi, I am Andy. Today I will introduce my friend Sam from the UK to you.
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I hope we can be good friends forever.
5.教育部曾发布《加强中小学生手机管理工作的通知》,要求中小学生原则上不带手机进校园。智能手机带给学生巨大方便的同时,也存在着不少弊端。请你根据下面表格的信息,以Smart phones为题,写一篇英语短文, 谈谈智能手机的利弊,并号召学生合理使用智能手机。
好处 1、学习方面:上网课、搜寻资料……2、生活方面:看电影、听音乐……
弊端 1、健康方面:熬夜,花太多时间打游戏;2、学习方面: 课上使用,考试舞弊。
建议 ……
要求:内容完整,语法正确,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范。词数 80左右。
参考词汇:舞弊cheat
Smart phones
As we know, smart phones are popular with students these days. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Good luck with everything!
Yours,
Li Hua
6.我们因梦想而伟大,所有的成功者都是大梦想家。你的梦想是什么?你朋友的梦想是什么?你们打算怎样实现你们的梦想呢?请你以“Our Dreams”为题用英语写一篇短文,介绍自己和朋友的梦想。
参考信息:
1. 你自己的梦想和实现途径;
2. 你朋友的梦想和实现途径;
3. 对实现自己梦想充满信心。
写作要求:
1. 80—120词;
2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校名称;
Our Dreams
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7.寒假将至,英语老师要求每个同学写一篇寒假计划,请根据以下要点提示,以“My plan for the winter holiday”为题,写一篇70词左右的英语短文。
要点提示:
1. 好好休息和放松;
2. 读一些好书;
3. 看望爷爷奶奶,帮父母做家务(housework);
4. 补充一两点有关想法。
写作要求:
1. 必须包含所提示的所有要点,并补充一点有关想法;
2. 词数不少于70,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 文中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息。
My plan for the winter holiday
The winter holiday is coming. I’m going to do what I want to do.
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二、话题作文
8.如今,随着智能手机(smart phones)的普及,玩手机成瘾的人不少,,智能手机给我们生活带来便利的同时也带来危害。请以“Look Up, Please!”为题,根据以下提示写一篇短文。
要求:
1. 短文须包含所给内容,适当发挥,语句通顺,语法正确;
2. 不能出现真实的姓名和学校名称;
3. 词数90左右。短文开头已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Look Up, Please!
Today more and more people can’t live without smart phones.
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三、电子邮件
9.假如你是张华,在学校网站上看到以下招聘广告,觉得好友李敏更适合此工作。请发一份邮件建议她去应聘。
要求:
1. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名;
2. 词数不少于60;
3. 开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Li Min,
I’m happy to tell you that the English Study Center wants helpers. In my opinion, you can get the job.
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In a word, it’s a good chance for you to study. You are the best one.
Yours,
Zhang Hua
10.假如你是李平,请阅读下面的电子邮件,接受邀请并回复。
要求:
(1)邮件必须包含所提问题;
(2)文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名;
(3)词数80左右。可适当发挥,以使行文连贯。
Hi Li Ping,How is everything going with you I’m going to have a birthday party next Saturday. Please come! We’ll have lots of drinks. But if you remember, can you bring some Chinese food The party will start at 6 p.m. What time do you think you’ll be coming I know you like playing all kinds of games with friends, can you think of some games to play at the party Besides, I’ll probably need one or two people to help me tidy up after the party. Do you think you’ll be able to stay and help Anyway, hope you can make it. Please write back to tell me if you can come or not.John
Dear John,
Thank you so much for inviting me.
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Li Ping
11.为了丰富学生的校园生活,我校将增设一个学生活动室(Student Activity Room),现有以下3种关于活动室用途的设想。
English Learning Room watch English movies read English stories … Animal Caring Room feed the animals … Play Room play chess …
假如你是学生李华,请给校长Mr. Zhou写一封邮件,表明你最喜欢的一种设想并阐述理由,同时对该室的活动安排提出你的建议。
注意:
1. 不得出现真实姓名和校名;
2. 词数:100词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Mr. Zhou,
I’m writing to share my idea about the use of the Student Activity Room. I think we’d better make it a(n) _______________.
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Yours,
Li Hua
四、书信作文
12.假如你是某英文杂志Ask Paul栏目的编辑,专门帮助青少年解决一些烦恼。下面是一位叫李华的中学生在信中诉说的烦心事,请你给他写一封回信,提一些建议来帮助他。
Dear Paul,
I argued with my parents last week. I want to keep a pet dog at home, but they don’t agree. They don’t think I can look after it by myself. I don’t know what I should do. Can you help me Thanks a lot!
Yours,
Li Hua
要求:词数80左右,信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Li Hua,
I’m sorry to hear about your problem. I’d be happy to give you some advice.
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I really hope my advice will help you.
Yours,
Paul
13.假设你是Mike,你的外教老师Ms. Steen很快要返回美国了,要号召全体同学为Ms. Steen在下周三21号举办一个惊喜聚会,可以带着你的朋友和家人,并准备一些食物和饮料以及做游戏需要的物品。
要求:请根据以上提示内容并适当展开,给全体同学写一个邀请函。40词左右。
Dear classmates,
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Mike
14.假如你是王林,你所在学校的“爱心协会 (Helping Hands Society)”将招收新会员。你想加入该协会,请根据下面表格中的内容及图片,用英语写一封自荐信。
姓名 王林 性别 男
本人特点 身体健康;学习刻苦;乐于助人;与同学友好相处
“爱心”表现 (见图片)
加入目的 ……
要求:1. 语句通顺,意思连贯;
2. 要点须包括表格和四幅图片中的信息,但不得使用真实姓名和校名;
3. 表格中“加入目的”一栏内容由考生自拟;
4. 词数:80 左右。
Dear Chairperson,
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Yours sincerely,
Wang Lin
15. 假设你是李华,从小喜爱野生动物,在网上看到了Wildlife Protection Club招募志愿者的广告。请你用英语写一封信给俱乐部主席Mr. Brown,应征志愿者。写一篇词数80词左右短文,包括以下内容要点,可适当发挥,不得出现真实姓名等信息。
学校 Beijing Sunshine Secondary School
年级 八年级
性格 勤奋,助人为乐,与人为善
爱好 阅读,旅游,参观过许多名胜古迹,爱看《动物世界》节目
愿望 成为俱乐部的一员
原因 对野生动物 (wildlife) 感兴趣,想更了解野生动物,想做些事情保护 (protect) 动物。
联系方式 010—66688999 lihua@ sunshinetown.com
Dear Mr. Brown,
I saw your advertisement on the Internet and I would like to become a member of the Wildlife Protection Club.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
五、讲稿
16.在生活中,我们可能会遇到一些危险或灾难,如果我们有良好的安全意识和自救常识,就可以保护自己,远离危险。为进一步提高广大师生的安全意识,阳光中学英语俱乐部正在举办主题为“保护自己,远离危险”的英文演讲比赛。假如你是八年级学生李威,请你以“Away from Danger”为题,根据以下思维导图写一份80词左右的英文演讲稿参加比赛。
注意事项:
1. 演讲稿须根据思维导图自拟,要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意;
2. 思维导图中括号部分为非限定性内容,仅供参考;
3. 词数在80个左右,演讲稿的首尾已给出,不计入总词数;
4. 演讲稿中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息;
5. 演讲稿必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。
Away from Danger
Good afternoon, everyone. I’m Li Wei. It’s a great honor for me to speak here. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all for my speech.Thank you.
17.
随着社会科学技术的飞速发展,我们的生活也时刻发生着变化。你们班下周一准备开展“一起畅想未来”的主题班会,请你以“My Life in the Future”为题,写一篇发言稿,向大家介绍你未来的生活。
内容要点:
1.你的梦想职业和将来居住的地方;
2.谈谈20年后你生活上的变化(至少两种变化);
3.你如何实现你的梦想(至少两种方式);
参考词汇(仅供参考):
1. dream job; 2. live in; 3. study hard; 4. come true
要求:
1. 内容完整,为使行文连贯可适当发挥;
2. 80个词左右,开头和结尾已给出,但不计入词数;
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名、地名。
My Life in the Future
Hello, Everyone! Today I want to talk about my life in the future.
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That’s all. Thanks for listening.
18.怀着一颗感恩的心,珍惜时光,努力学习,做有理想、敢担当、能吃苦、肯奋斗的时代新人。请你根据下面的思维导图和提示,分享你日常学习和生活中如何成为时代新人的一些做法,写一篇不少于80 词左右的演讲稿。
注意事项:
1) 必须包含所有提示信息,可适当拓展;
2) 意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
3) 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名;
4) 词数80左右 (开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Hello everyone. I’m very glad to be here to share my experience with you.
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That’s all. Thank you for your listening!
19.当今时代,知识更新不断加快,这对青少年的能力素质提出了新的更高要求。学生不仅要会学习,更要促进德智体美劳全面发展。为此学校为同学们提候了更多可以展示才能的舞台以散发大家的发展兴趣,例如运动会,歌咏比赛等,更开出许多种类的课后社团课。校英语报邀请你写一篇发言稿,请参考下表提供的信息,为同学们提出不同的选课建议及理由,并且阐述你自己的选择及看法。
How to choose the right lesson
What Sports lesson(high jump/football...) Music lesson(guitar/piano...) Art lesson(painting) Computer lesson(programming*) ...
Why the most exciting,healthier,... know more... better than... ... ...
要求:
1)短文可适当增加细节;
2)文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数;
3)词数:90-100。
This term, our school offers many after school lessons to make our life colorful. If you are a boy,
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Hope my advice can help you. Thanks for your listening.
20.你们班在组织一次以“我的择友标准”为主题的班会。你的择友观是什么?你和你的一位好朋友之间在外貌、性格、爱好等方面有哪些相同点和不同点?你为什么把他/她视为最好的朋友?写一篇发言稿。
要求:1. 80词左右;
2. 适当发挥;
3. 不得出现真实的名字。
要求:1. 短文须包括所有提示内容,可适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名;
3. 词数80左右,短文开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
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2023-2024学年上学期期末考试八年级上英语专题复习
作文专题:书面表达20篇
写作指导:
1.例文
New Year is coming and my family made some resolutions to live a better life. They are as follows. My father is going to do more exercise to keep healthy. And he is going to spend more time with us. My mother is going to learn to sing and cook more delicious food. I plan to study harder, so I am going to do more reading. The most important is that I am going to get over my bad habits. I want to be an excellent student. As for her sister, she is going to eat less junk food and help parents do the housework.
Everyone in my family will try our best to keep these resolutions.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般将来时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出下文,点出“我”和家人都做了新年计划;
第二步,分别介绍“我”和家人的新年计划;
第三步,总结“我”和家人都会尽力实现新年计划;
[亮点词汇]
①made some resolutions做一些新年计划
②try our best尽某人做大努力
[高分句型]
①The most important is that I am going to get over my bad habits.(that引导的表语从句)
2.例文
The Internet
The Internet is changing the world. It is becoming an important part of our lives. There is a survey about how students use the Internet. The result is as follows.
About 55% of students prefer to play games on the Internet. And 30% of students choose to chat online. Only 8% of students use the Internet to study. The rest of students do something else online. From the result above, many students use the Internet incorrectly. Therefore, it’s of great importance to use the Internet in the right way. At first, we should spend less time on games, because it is meaningless and bad for our eyes. Besides, we are expected to protect our personal Information instead of giving it away to others online. As for students, we are supposed to get the latest information and useful learning materials on the Internet.
All in all, I hope every student can use the Internet in a right way and make good use of it.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇议论文;
②时态:主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中“说明调查情况”和省略处需要补充相关内容,注意行为逻辑要通顺,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。表达出“网络的重要性”以及引出“调查结果”这个话题。
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从信息提示中“说明调查情况和如何正确使用互联网等”重点方面进行描述和提出建议。
第三步,书写结语。表达“希望每个学生都能正确科学地使用互联网”。
[亮点词汇]
①prefer to do sth偏爱做某事
②meaningless没有意义的
③give away泄露
[高分句型]
①I hope every student can use the Internet in a right way and make good use of it.(宾语从句)
②it’s of great importance to use the Internet in the right way. (it作形式主语)
③At first, we should spend less time on games, because it is meaningless and bad for our eyes.(because引导原因状语从句)
3.例文:
As students, it’s important for us to live a happy life. Do you know how to be a happy student I don’t think it’s difficult. First we should do more sports. It can help us to build us up and have strong bodies. It’s good for our health. Second, we need to make friends with others. We will feel happy when we talk with our friends. We can share many things with our friends, such as food, nice stories and so on. Third, it’s important for us to have a hobby or some hobbies, We can learn a lot from hobbies and hobbies can also bring us knowledge, happiness and friendship. At last, we should make a plan of studying We must listen carefully in class and finish our homework by ourselves Don’t copy others’.
In a word, we should do our best to be happy.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:提示要点已经给出,考生注意不要遗漏要点;注意适当发挥,突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点题:关于如何做一名快乐的学生,自己认为并不困难;
第二步,结合图示,从学习、运动、交友以及爱好等方面给出建议;
第三步,总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①be good for 对……有益
②make friends 交朋友
③at last 最后
④make a plan 制定计划
[高分句型]
①We will feel happy when we talk with our friends.(when引导的时间状语从句)
②We can learn a lot from hobbies and hobbies can also bring us knowledge, happiness and friendship.(and连接的并列句)
4.例文:
Hi, I am Andy. Today I will introduce my friend Sam from the UK to you.
Sam is 15 years old. He has big eyes and a round face. He is honest, polite and hard-working. What’s more, he is a helpful boy. He is willing to help people in need anytime. Last week, he helped a little girl find her way home. He likes playing chess, so he joined the Chess Club last year. Besides, he is good at playing basketball. He spends an hour practicing playing basketball with his classmates after school every day. He loves traveling and he visits many places of interest. He does well in DIY. He often makes things with recycled materials and decorates his house. His dream is to be a teacher in China because he wants to help more children in poor areas.
I hope we can be good friends forever.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏信息,适当添加细节,突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作目的。开头已给出;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“年龄、品质、爱好、梦想”等方面具体介绍Sam;
第三步,书写结语。结尾已给出。
[亮点词汇]
①be willing to do愿意做某事
②decorate his house装饰他的房子
[高分句型]
His dream is to be a teacher in China because he wants to help more children in poor areas.(原因状语从句)
5.例文
Smart phones
As we know, smart phones are popular with students these days.
They bring great convenience to our lives. It’s convenient for us to take online classes during COVID-19. And we can search information whenever we want. We can also read news, send and receive emails through it. When we feel tired, we can relax ourselves by listening to music or watching movies.
However, it also brings many problems. Many students spends too much time playing games. They usually stay up too late, so they can’t concentrate on study next day. Sometimes students use mobile phone in class. Even some students use phone to cheat in exams. It does harm to their study. And it’s unhealthy for the mind and the body.
In my opinion, students can’t use smart phones at school. Students should spend more time doing sports or having fun with friends. They should also pay more attention to their study. If they do, they’ll be happier and healthier.
Good luck with everything!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据提示内容介绍手机带来的利与弊,并发表自己的意见,号召学生合理使用手机,注意内容完整,表达清晰。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍手机带来的好处;
第二步,介绍手机的弊端;
第三步,表达自己的意见。
[亮点词汇]
①stay up too late熬夜太晚
②concentrate on集中
③do harm to对……有害
④pay more attention to关注
[高分句型]
①When we feel tired, we can relax ourselves by listening to music or watching movies. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②They usually stay up too late, so they can’t concentrate on study next day. (so连接的并列句)
6.范文:
Our Dreams
I want to be a teacher when I grow up. Do you know why Because we can learn all kinds of knowledge with the help of the teachers. When we are in trouble, teachers always take good care of us. They do many things for us as our parents do. We all like them very much. How can I make my dream come true First, I must try my best to study hard at all subjects. Second, I will read more books, such as English, history, science and so on. In addition, I will get into a good university.
Bob is my good friend. He wants to be a teacher, too. He wants to realize his dream by studying hard. We believe that if we put our heart into it, our dream will come true.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇说明文,属于材料作文写作;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:文章标题以及要点已经给出,按照提示的要点逐点阐述,可以适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇引出话题,介绍自己的梦想并简述实现梦想的途径,可列举具体的事例;
第二步,简要介绍你朋友的梦想和实现途径;
第三步,表达对实现自己梦想的信心并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①be in trouble陷入麻烦,遇到麻烦,处于困境中
②take good care of好好照顾
③such as比如
④in addition另外
[高分句型]
①I want to be a teacher when I grow up.(when引导的时间状语从句)
②They do many things for us as our parents do.(as引导的方式状语从句)
③We believe that if we put our heart into it, our dream will come true.(宾语从句,宾语从句中含有if引导的条件状语从句)
7.例文
My plans for the winter holiday
The winter holiday is coming. I’m going to do what I want to do. It’s my pleasure to share my holiday plans with you.
First of all, I want to have a good rest, because I can become more energetic after resting. Therefore, I’m going to a park with my friends to get relaxed. Besides, I plan to visit my grandparents. I miss them and they’ll be very happy to see me. I’ll also help my parents do some housework at home. What’s more, I intend to read some good books so that I can broaden my horizons. At last, I plan to do exercise regularly in order to keep fit.
I’m sure I’ll have a good holiday.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇议论文;
②时态:主要为“一般将来时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中需要补充的相关内容,注意行为逻辑要通顺,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。引出“我的寒假计划”这个话题。
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从信息提示中“休息、读书、看望爷爷奶奶、帮父母做家务等”几个重点方面进行计划,注意行为逻辑要通顺,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
第三步,书写结语。表达“我相信我会度过一个愉快的假期”。
[亮点词汇]
①energetic有能量的
②regularly定期地
③broaden my horizons开拓视野
[高分句型]
①It’s my pleasure to share my holiday plans with you.(it作形式主语)
②I intend to read some good books so that I can broaden my horizons.(so that引导目的状语从句)
③I want to have a good rest, because I can become more energetic after resting. (because引导原因状语从句)
8.例文:
Look Up, Please!
Today more and more people can’t live without smart phones. They bring much help to us.
We can use smart phones to get online anytime to get all kinds of useful information. We can listen to music, watch movies and play games. Also, it is much easier for us to shop online by using it. And we can learn a lot of knowledge with its help.
However, some people spend too much time on the smart phones. It’s harmful to their health. Some students are crazy about playing games, and they don’t work hard. Even some will easily lose themselves in real life when they use smart phones too much.
I think we shouldn’t spend too much time using smart phones. So we need to put down our phones, look up, and do more meaningful activities.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容,适当增加细节,并且突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。直接说明手机带来便利的同时也带来危害;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。分别阐述手机带来的便利和危害;
第三步,书写结语。表达自己的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①without没有
②knowledge知识
③be crazy about对……感到痴迷
④put down放下
[高分句型]
①Even some will easily lose themselves in real life when they use smart phones too much. (时间状语从句)
②I think we shouldn’t spend too much time using smart phones. (宾语从句)
9.例文:
Dear Li Min,
I’m happy to tell you that the English Study Center wants helpers. In my opinion, you can get the job.
Firstly, you are a middle school student. What’s more, you have the best grades in English. You can be good with kids, too. Last but not least, You are outgoing, which I think is a quality that a qualified student helper should have. If you get the chance, you will spare no effort to ensure everyone’s satisfaction. When you make the decision, you can call them at 021-0818 7116.
In a word, it’s a good chance for you to study. You are the best one.
Yours,
Zhang Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封电子邮件;
②时态:一般现在时;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,适当添加细节,突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作目的。开头已给出;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“应聘要求、鼓励好友、联系方式”等方面具体说明;
第三步,书写结语。结尾已给出。
[亮点词汇]
①last but not least最后但并非不重要的是
②spare no effort to do不遗余力做某事
[高分句型]
You are outgoing, which I think is a quality that a qualified student helper should have.(定语从句)
10.例文
Dear John,
Thank you so much for inviting me. Everything is fine with me. I’d love to come to your birthday party and I’ll arrive there at 5:30p.m. You know, my mom is good at making Chinese food, like zongzi and dumplings. So I’ve asked her to prepare some for the party and your friends can share them together. As for games to play at the party, jiguchuanhua and chengyujielong are very interesting. Besides, almost every one can take part in it. After the party is over, I will stay and help you tidy up. So don’t worry about it!
Li Ping
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般将来时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏题干提示信息,适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,对John的邀请表达谢意;
第二步,具体阐述自己带的中国食物、到达时间及活动游戏等信息;
第三步,安慰John不要担心,自己会帮助他。
[亮点词汇]
①be good at擅长
②prepare...for...为……准备……
③take part in参加
[高分句型]
So I’ve asked her to prepare some for the party and your friends can share them together. (并列句)
11.Dear Mr. Zhou,
I’m writing to share my idea about the use of the Students Activity Room. I think we’d better make it a playroom.
Students may feel sad and helpless when meeting troubles in life. If these problems aren’t solved well, they may bring serious results. Then their grades will be worse and worse. So it is important for them to have a playroom to have fun.
To make it a better playroom, I have following advice. First, they can play enjoyable games such as playing chess as well as playing card games. Students can release pressure through games so that they can be happier. What’s more, creating a movie corner also helps students relax themselves. They can indulge themselves in movies and chat with friends. Finally, there can be a music bar. Students can choose their favorite songs and sing loudly to relax themselves.
I can’t wait to have a playroom in our school. I believe students are looking forward to it as well!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为一封电子邮件;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:文章开头已经给出,注意内容的衔接;内容应该包括你最喜欢的一种设想并阐述理由,同时对该室的活动安排提出你的建议,要适当补充,使文章内容充实;行文时多用第一人称,尽量多使用短语和句型;写作中适当使用连接词,使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍你的设想;
第二步,阐述你的理由;
第三步,就该室的活动安排提出你的建议;
第四步,表达期待。
[亮点词汇]
① worse and worse 越来越差
② as well as 也
③ indulge oneself in 沉迷于
④ can’t wait to do sth. 迫不及待做某事
[高分句型]
① I believe students are looking forward to it as well! (宾语从句)
② If these problems aren’t solved well, they may bring serious results. (if引导的条件状语从句)
12.例文
Dear Li Hua,
I’m sorry to hear about your problem. I’d be happy to give you some advice.
I think you should follow your parents’ wishes. If you keep a pet dog, you’ll have to spend a lot of time looking after it. For example, you’ll have to walk it every day and clean it often. If so, you’ll spend less time on your study. If there is a pet dog at home, it will make noise. If so, you and your parents won’t get good sleep. Why not wait until you get older, and then ask your parents again
I really hope my advice will help you.
Yours,
Paul
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为书信作文。
②时态:时态为“一般将来时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中给李华提一些建议的介绍要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。借用“下面是一位叫李华的中学生在信中诉说的烦心事,请你给他写一封回信,提一些建议来帮助他。”来引出重点介绍的内容;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“我很乐意给你一些建议、我所给的建议内容、我的愿望等”几个方面重点介绍给李华提一些建议的具体情况;
第三步,书写结语,表达“我真的希望我的建议对你有帮助”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①hear about听说;
②spend time doing sth花费时间做某事;
③look after照顾;
④for example例如。
[高分句型]
①If so, you and your parents won’t get good sleep. (省略句)
②Why not wait until you get older, and then ask your parents again (“Why not do sth ”句型)
13.例文
Dear classmates,
Our foreign teacher Ms. Steen will return to the United States soon. We are going to have a surprise party for her next Wednesday, the 21st. You can bring your friends and family. Remember to bring some food and drink. You should also prepare the items you need for the game. I’m looking forward to seeing you at the party.
Mike
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇书信作文;
②时态:时态为“一般将来时”和“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图;
第二步,介绍聚会的信息,并提醒对方带一些东西;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①have a surprise party举办一个惊喜聚会
②look forward to期待
[高分句型]
Remember to bring some food and drink.(祈使句)
14.例文
Dear Chairperson,
I’m Wang Lin. I am a student from Class 1, Grade 8. I’d like to become a member of the Helping Hands Society. I am a good student in our school. I work hard at my subjects. I often help my classmates with their schoolwork. I can get on well with others. On my way home, I will help the old cross the street. On the bus I always offer my seat to the woman with a baby. When I find rubbish anywhere, I will pick it up.
I will be happy if I can become a member of the Helping Hands Society. I think it is necessary to help each other.
Waiting for your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Wang Lin
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为自荐信;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已经给出,考生注意不要遗漏表格中的“ ‘爱心’表现”和“加入目的”;注意适当发挥,突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍个人的基本信息及特点;
第二步,结合图片提示,介绍自己的“爱心”表现;
第三步,如果能成为一份子,自己将会怎样;
第四步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①help sb. with sth. 在……方面帮助某人
②get on well with sb. 与某人相处融洽
③pick up 捡起
[高分句型]
① When I find rubbish anywhere, I will pick it up.(when引导的时间状语从句)
② I will be happy if I can become a member of the Helping Hands Society. (if条件句)
15.例文
Dear Mr. Brown,
I saw your advertisement on the Internet and I would like to become a member of the Wildlife Protection Club.
I am a student of Grade 8 at Beijing Sunshine Secondary School. I am hard-working and always ready to help others. I am friendly to others. I love reading, traveling and visiting many places of interest. I love to watch Animal World. I’m very interested in wildlife. I want to know more about wildlife. And I think every one of us should do something to help protect the wild animals. So I hope I can be a member of your club. You can call me at 010-66688999 or e-mail me at lihua@ sunshinetown.com.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为书信;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据提示给俱乐部主席Mr. Brown写一封信,应征志愿者,注意要点齐全,可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开门见山,表达想要成为俱乐部的一员;
第二步,具体介绍自己的信息,包括学校、年级、性格、爱好、愿望及原因等;
第三步,介绍自己的联系方式。
[亮点词汇]
①be friendly to sb对某人友好
②places of interest名胜古迹
③be interested in对……感兴趣
[高分句型]
And I think every one of us should do something to help protect the wild animals. (省略that的宾语从句)
16.例文
Away from Danger
Good afternoon, everyone. I’m Li Wei. It’s a great honor for me to speak here.
Lots of danger is around us, such as fire. When a building catches a fire, there will be heavy smoke. It makes people hard to see things clearly. People may run in all directions because they are afraid to get hurt.
If we are in a fire, we should cover our mouth and nose with a wet towel. To protect ourselves from thick smoke, we must stay low to the ground and try to get out as soon as possible.
That’s all for my speech. Thank you.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
②时态:时态为一般现在时;
③提示:写作思维导图已给出,注意不要遗漏思维导图中的要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,按题目要求另起一段写演讲稿内容。
第二步,根据思维导图举例叙述会面临的危险,会导致的后果及我们如何保护自己。
[亮点词汇]
①such as 例如
②be afraid to do 害怕去做某事
③protect sb from sth 保护某人免受某物的伤害
④as soon as possible 尽可能快地
[高分句型]
①When a building catches a fire, there will be heavy smoke.(when引导的时间状语从句)
②People may run in all directions because they are afraid to get hurt.(because引导的原因状语从句)
③To protect ourselves from thick smoke, we must stay low to the ground and try to get out as soon as possible. (动词不定式作目的状语)
17.例文
My Life in the Future
Hello, everyone! Today I want to talk about my life in the future. I think I’ll be a doctor. I’ll live in Shanghai because it’s a wonderful city. Lots of people from China and other countries visit there, so I’ll meet lots of interesting people there. I’ll live in an apartment near my school so I can have more free time. I’ll spend more time with my friends and see them on weekends and we’ll play soccer on weekends. We can also do some other interesting things together. To have a better life in the future, I’m going to study hard to go into Yulin High School first. Then I should go to a good university to study medicine. I think if I study hard, my dream will come true.
That’s all, Thanks for your listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇发言稿;
②时态:时态为“一般将来时”;
③提示:写作要点已经给出,注意要点中的“至少两种变化”和“至少两种方式”;注意适当发挥,丰富文章的内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点题,将谈论自己未来的生活;
第二步,介绍自己梦想的职业和将要居住的地方;
第三步,介绍20年后你生活的变化,以及将如何实现你的梦想;
第四步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①lots of 许多
②on weekends 在周末
③come true 实现
[高分句型]
① I’ll live in Shanghai because it’s a wonderful city.(because引导的原因状语从句)
② I think if I study hard, my dream will come true.(if引导的条件状语从句)
18.范文
Hello everyone. I’m very glad to be here to share my experience with you. In order to become a good teenager, I study hard and read many books every day. I often exercise to make my body strong. I also have different hobbies, such as swimming, singing and so on. I think they can make us happy. What’s more, I have a proper way of using the computer. Last, I learn to stay calm when I face the natural disasters. I believe if I keep doing these, I can become a good teenager one day.
That’s all. Thank you for your listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开头已给出,引出本文主题;
第二步,分享自己在日常学习和生活中的一些做法;
第三步,感谢聆听。
[亮点词汇]
①such as例如
②stay calm保持冷静
③keep doing sth继续做某事
[高分句型]
①In order to become a good teenager, I study hard and read many books every day.(动词不定式作目的状语)
②I believe if I keep doing these, I can become a good teenager one day.(if引导条件状语从句)
19.例文
This term, our school offers many after-school lessons to make our life colorful. If you are a boy, I suggest you choose sports lessons, such as basketball, volleyball and so on. Compared with other lessons, basketball is more exciting and it makes us healthier and stronger. And it is usually the most popular choice with the boys in our school. If you are a girl, why not choose the music lessons You know, learning to play the guitar or sing songs can make you more popular in the future society. What’s more, it will be the most enjoyable to listen to some beautiful songs after a long day’s study.
As for me, I would like to choose the computer lesson, because it will surely open our eyes and make me learn more news about the outside world.
Hope my advice can help you. Thanks for your listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:要求根据表格提供的信息,分别给男孩女孩提出一条建议及理由,比如可以向男同学建议体育活动,可以保持身体健康,而对女同学可以建议学习音乐,再阐述一下自己会选择的活动课和为什么。适当添加细节,写作时保持主谓一致,注意字数要求。
[写作步骤]
第一步,首先引出话题,介绍学校这学期提供了许多课外课程;
第二步,阐述给同学们提出的建议及理由;
第三步,阐述你自己的选择及理由。
[亮点词汇]
①compared with sb.与某人对比
②learn to do sth.学会做某事
③would like to do sth.想做某事
[高分句型]
①If you are a girl, why not choose the music lessons (if引导条件状语从句)
②As for me, I would like to choose the computer lesson, because it will surely open our eyes and make me learn more news about the outside world.(because引导原因状语从句)
20.范文:
Hello, everyone! Some people think good friends should have the same ideas and interests. But I don’t think so. My best friend Li Lei is more outgoing than me. He likes to play sports and tell jokes, and I like to play the piano. But when I have problems, he always helps me. So I think a good friend reaches for your hand and touches your heart. It’s not really important to be the same as or different from each other. Thanks for listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇讲稿;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:题目所给提示内容不得遗漏,可以适当拓展,注意语意通顺,无语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己的交友观;
第二步,具体介绍自己和好朋友之间的相同和不同处;
第三步,总结自己的观点并表示感谢。
[亮点词汇]
①reach for one’s hand 帮助某人
②be different from 和……不同
[高分句型]
①But when I have problems, he always helps me.(时间状语从句)
②It’s not really important to be the same as or different from each other.(it句型)
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