读后续写句式训练02
(动作描写) Sb. was\were doing sth when...did sth 某人正在做某事, 这时......
I was crying my eyes out when my father gathered me into his arms and patted me on the back gently.我正在痛哭不止,这时爸爸把我揽入怀着,轻轻地拍着我的后背。(动作描写)
仿写1:我正在浏览公告牌上的照片,身后突然传来一个声音。_______________________________________________________________________________________
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仿写2:我们正在派对上玩得开心,这时灯突然熄灭(go out)了。
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仿写3:他在路上走着,这时突然脚一滑(slip),摔倒了。
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2. (动作描写) Sb. was\were about to do sth when...did sth.某人正要去做某事, 这时......
=Sb. was\were on the point of doing sth when ...did sth.
I was on the point of stepping off the stage when a viewer let out a scream, scaring my soul out of my body. 我正要走下舞台,突然一个观众发出一声尖叫,吓得我魂不附体。
仿写1:我正要离开教室,这时老师叫了我的名字。
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仿写2:他正要打开那个神秘的盒子,这时门铃突然响了。
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仿写3:她正要放弃这次机会, 这时教练走过来并用温柔的声音说道:“相信你自己!”
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3.(动作描写) Sb. had just done sth when...did sth.某人刚做完某事, 这时......
We had just breathed a sigh of relief when the car broke down again.我们刚松了一口气,车又抛锚了。
仿写1:我刚关上门,就听到房间里传来一个奇怪的声响。
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仿写2:我们刚松了一口气,就发现我的钱包不见了。
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仿写3:徒步者们刚搭好帐篷,狼群就开始在他们的营地周围徘徊。
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With的复合结构:With+O+OC(to do\doing\done)
He rushed to the room, with his heart beating widely and his face flushing. (动作+情绪描写)
他冲出房间,心怦怦直跳,满脸通红。
仿写1:由于紧张,我深吸了一口气。
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仿写2: 老师站在全班同学面前,脸上带着失望的表情。
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仿写3: 大卫仍然不肯看我,头埋(bury)在胳膊里。
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(情绪+动作描写)Adj. and\but adj., sb did sth. 既......又\但......,某人做某事。
Curious and confused, Frank stooped to get closer to the scene.
Frank既好奇又兴奋,于是停下来靠近现场
仿写1:既紧张又兴奋,她打开了装着大学录取通知书(college acceptance letter)的信封。
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仿写2:伤心但坚定,她擦了擦眼泪继续训练。
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仿写3: 它在离地2米左右的空中满足而快乐地飞着。
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_______________________________________________________________________________________读后续写句式训练02
(动作描写) Sb. was\were doing sth when...did sth 某人正在做某事, 这时......
I was crying my eyes out when my father gathered me into his arms and patted me on the back gently.我正在痛哭不止,这时爸爸把我揽入怀着,轻轻地拍着我的后背。(动作描写)
仿写1:我正在浏览公告牌上的照片,身后突然传来一个声音。(动作描写)
I was looking at the photos on the noticeboard when I heard a voice behind me.
仿写2:我们正在派对上玩得开心,这时灯突然熄灭(go out)了。
We were having a great time at the party when the lights suddenly went out.
仿写3:他在路上走着,这时突然脚一滑(slip),摔倒了。
He was walking along the road when his feet slipped and he fell over.
2. (动作描写) Sb. was\were about to do sth when...did sth.某人正要去做某事, 这时......
=Sb. was\were on the point of doing sth when ...did sth.
I was on the point of stepping off the stage when a viewer let out a scream, scaring my soul out of my body. 我正要走下舞台,突然一个观众发出一声尖叫,吓得我魂不附体。
仿写1:我正要离开教室,这时老师叫了我的名字。
I was about to leave the classroom when the teacher called my name.
仿写2:他正要打开那个神秘的盒子,这时门铃突然响了。
He was about to open the mysterious box when the doorbell rang suddenly.
仿写3:她正要放弃这次机会, 这时教练走过来并用温柔的声音说道:“相信你自己”。
She was about to give up the opportunity when the coach came over and said in a gentle voice, “Believe in yourself !”
3.(动作描写) Sb. had just done sth when...did sth.某人刚做完某事, 这时......
We had just breathed a sigh of relief when the car broke down again.我们刚松了一口气,车又抛锚了。
仿写1:我刚关上门,就听到房间里传来一个奇怪的声响。
I had just closed the door when I heard a strange noise coming from inside the room.
仿写2:我们刚松了一口气,就发现我的钱包不见了。
We had just breathed a sigh of relief when I found my wallet was missing.
仿写3:徒步者们刚搭好帐篷,狼群就开始在他们的营地周围徘徊。
The hikers had just set up camp when a pack of wolves began circling their site.
With的复合结构:With+o+oc(to do\doing\done)
He rushed to the room, with his heart beating widely and his face flushing. (动作+情绪描写)
他冲出房间,心怦怦直跳,满脸通红。
仿写1:由于紧张,我深吸了一口气。
With butterflies in my stomach, I took a deep breath\breathed deeply.
仿写2: 老师站在全班同学面前,脸上带着失望的表情。
The teacher stood up in front of the class, with a disappointed expression on her face.
仿写3: 大卫仍然不肯看我,头埋(bury)在胳膊里。
David still refuse to look at me, with his head buried in his arms.
(情绪+动作描写)Adj. and\but adj., sb did sth. 既......又\但......,某人做某事。
Curious and confused, Frank stooped to get closer to the scene.
Frank既好奇又兴奋,于是停下来靠近现场
仿写1:既紧张又兴奋,她打开了装着大学录取通知书(college acceptance letter)的信封。
Nervous and excited, she opened the envelope containing her college acceptance letter.
仿写2:伤心但坚定,她擦了擦眼泪继续训练。
Heartbroken but determined, she wiped her tears and continued her training.
仿写3: 它在离地2米左右的空中满足而快乐地飞着。
Content and joyful, she flew about 2 meters above the ground.
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