高考英语一轮复习 读后续写
一.书面表达(共20小题)
1.(2025 重庆模拟)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Two exams were awaiting for them.Tang was waiting in the corridor(过道) with her class on Friday morning.She felt sick and her knees were shaking.She always felt sick during the exam week.She had two more exams that day and physics was the first.She really hated physics.Zhong glanced back at her from the front of the queue and then looked away quickly.Zhong didn't have a problem with physics.Zhong didn't have a problem with anything.
Zhong was looking back at her again. "So what's wrong with her?" Ning standing behind Tang had noticed Zhong looking back at them. "I thought you were friends.""Yeah,so did I," said Tang, "She' d promised to help me revise for the physics exam,but then just ignored all my calls and texts.Ning was trying to look sympathetic.However,it was time to enter the exam room.Tang gave Ning a worried look and followed them.
Tang had been staring at question number two for ten minutes without any clue,when she looked up.Zhong was sitting a few rows in front of her to the right and Tang couldn't believe her eyes!Zhong had her phone on her left knee and she was reading from it.Is that how Zhong always got good grades?She just felt really angry at Zhong.She almost put her hand up to tell the teacher,Mr.Fair,but Zhong had already put her phone away when Tang looked up again.She looked back over her shoulder at Tang and smiled sadly.
It wasn't fair!Tang never cheated and she was often in trouble for failing exams,while Zhong had been cheating all this time.The next exam was history,which was Tang's favorite and best subject but it didn't help her feel any better.She was angry with Zhong.But she didn't know what to do.
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Just then,Mr.Fair walked past her table,asking Tang to hint(暗示) if Zhong had her phone out.________
Tang was walking to the school gate when she heard Zhong calling her behind.________
2.(2025 浙江模拟) Final exams were approaching,and everyone in school was excited about vacations.We were dreaming of far﹣off destinations,our minds filled with images of thrilling adventures.
After school on Friday,on my way home,I ran into my best friend.Enthusiastic about the vacations,I asked him about his plans.His eyes twinkled brightly as he replied,"I'm going to visit my grandparents with my parents for a week."
"Don't you ever get tired of going to the same place year after year?I remember,every year,your family takes 7 to 10 days off to head back to your native village,"I asked,raising an eyebrow in curiosity.
"Oh,not at all!That's the absolute best time of the year for me!Being with my folks in the village is just amazing."His face beamed with joy as he continued,"In the village,I get to meet so many wonderful people,and everyone there is so kind and welcoming.Our neighborhood crew is tight!We're always hanging out together,you know?Just running wild,chilling by the lake,or bouncing between each others houses.Honestly,I know what really matters about these village trips.It's not the cool places we see﹣it's spending time with the people I love.That's the real treasure of life."
His words made me recall my own grandparents.I realized I hadn't seen them for years.But still,it's a pleasure to be there….we had big long gardens and a big multi﹣story house.
The next day,over breakfast,I mustered up the courage and asked my parents,"Can we visit grandparents this summer after exams?"Dad replied hesitantly,"Oh,that's unexpected."Mom was surprised."Well,you know it gets really hot there this time of year."After a short pause,Dad gave a small sigh and met my hopeful gaze. "However,"he said,"if you perform well in exams,we'll make the trip."
For the next six weeks,I threw myself completely into my studies.My mom was amazed by this sudden transformation in me.Soon came the long﹣awaited exam results.
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I rushed home and immediately handed my parents my score card and a note with"PLEASE."
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I saw my mom had tears in her eyes when leaving them.
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3.(2025 济南三模) For over 15 years,Christina in Pocatello,who has Down syndrome (唐氏综合征)and limited speech,made renting movies an essential part of her routine.She regularly visited video rental stores,her face lighting up with excitement as she scanned the shelves filled with a vast collection of movies.As she picked through her favorite tapes,Christina would settle into a usual spot,carefully comparing each tape until she found the perfect pick.
Each store she visited became a precious part of her life,holding a unique place in her heart.She even named her favorite video rental store Video Stop "Babar" after the movie she loved,while another video store became "Beast",inspired by Beauty and the Beast.For Christina,the act of renting movies was more than just an activity—it was a comforting and consistent part of her daily life.
However,the rise of digital streaming led to the decline of video rental stores,making physical rentals outdated.This shift not only reduced convenience but also weakened community connections.As the last remaining video rental store in Pocatello,Video Stop was the final link to Christina's valued routine—but like all others,it couldn't escape the wave of this social transformation.
When Christina's mother,Laura,learned that Video Stop was closing,she worried about how it would affect Christina.Video Stop was the last place where Christina could get her favorite films.With the store ceasing rentals and clearing out most of its collection,Laura was reminded of the struggle they faced years ago,when the closure of another store had left Christina standing outside,confused and heartbroken.Laura feared a repeat of that pain.
In this moment of uncertainty,David Kraning,the owner of Video Stop and a convenient store called Quick Stop,noticed Christina's deep connection to the store.Determined to preserve her routine,he offered a heartfelt solution to ensure her happiness even after the store closed.
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After much thought,David decided to take action.
"Christina's Corner" in Quick Stop left both Christina and Laura speechless.
4.(2025 北碚区校级模拟) Tom concentrated hard.The rocket competition was about to begin,and he wanted to be sure he hadn't let any detail unchecked.No possible fault was too small to be ignored.Nothing could threaten his winning.Always being on top,he pushed himself to remain there.Although the other kids rarely came over to him,he would never go over to them because he'd win again and they couldn't ignore that.
He opened his toolbox.Moving past various parts and tools,he took out the pieces of his launching stand and started putting it together.As he worked,he glanced at the other rockets.He noticed problems quickly:one rocket had messy areas around its stickers,and another had wings placed too high﹣without doubt,these rockets would fall down.One rocket,however,caught his eye.Its body shone in the sun.The painted areas were finely done,and connection between the parts was perfect.His critical eye detected that this rocket could beat his.
A thin boy lifted it carefully."Hi,my name is Ed.Nice rocket you've got there!"said the boy friendly."Thanks,"Tom looked up and replied without much emotion,but then regretted it.He added,"I haven't seen you at any of the competitions.You don't care for these contests?"Ed said,"I never really thought about them.I keep pretty much to myself."
It was then that the announcer began explaining the rules,but Tom wasn't paying attention.He kept staring at Ed's rocket.Then his heart suddenly raced﹣Ed had no chance of winning.As Ed lifted his rocket to place it on the stand,one wing had gotten caught and was now loose.It was now fatally(致命地) weakened.But Ed hadn't noticed.He glanced back at Tom and gave a thumbs﹣up sign.Though Tom felt a wave of regret,he decided not to say anything﹣why risk his certain victory?Then it went,one rocket after another,most gaining respectable heights,but none as high as Tom's.Tom watched,yet the problems they had didn't make him feel good.
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At that moment,Ed set of for the launch area with his rocket.
Ed's rocket reached the highest.
5.(2025 广州模拟)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
My 12﹣year﹣old daughter is smart,even sharper than I was at her age,but she just wouldn't pick up a chapter book for fun.School books were tough for her,and when it came to free time,she stuck to picture books and listened to "Harry Potter" audiobooks.None of these really got her into deep reading,where you stare at words on paper and let your imagination fly.
For a while,I had to face the truth:I hadn't passed on the joy of reading to her.I tried telling her how reading makes life richer,but she shrugged (耸肩) and said, "Lots of my friends don't like reading either.It's no big deal."
Things went worse when she got a smartphone last year.Suddenly,my lively child became lazy,always on her phone.I suggested other fun activities,but she just found them "boring." I still held out hope for reading,seeing it as a developmental escape.But the problem was that she chose the colorful,noisy world of her phone.
Then,right before we left for an 8﹣day holiday on a beautiful Greek island,we talked about reading again. "Novels are the best way to understand how people feel," I told her. "I can learn more from social media," she replied.I mentioned storytelling and history,and she said, "I can watch movies and use the internet." I even promised to buy her any books she liked,but she smiled and said, "Mama,welcome to your dream."
I realized I couldn't win.She had good reasons and I couldn't say she was wrong.Sure,reading opens up new worlds,but so does the whole internet.Still,deep down,I wished she'd experience the pure magic of reading—those special moments when an author says exactly what you've always felt but never knew how to express.
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So,instead of talking more,I decided to offer a reward.________
By the end of the holiday,my daughter finished her book and asked for another ________
6.(2025 芜湖模拟)
The Last Oxygen
Juliette's wrench clanged against the broken ventilator(通风设备).The air tasted of metal,like blood on her tongue.On the wall screen above her,the eternal wasteland glared back—cracked(裂开的) earth and toxic yellow clouds."Cleaners die in 5 minutes out there,"the Siló' s children were taught.But Juliette knew the cameras hadn't been cleaned in 49 years.
She wiped sweat from her neck.Three levels below,her father had disappeared last winter after questioning the"energy quotas".Now her own tools revealed the Siló' s secret:pipes thinner than mandated,patched with decaying tape.This tomb is choking us,she thought.
A flickering(闪烁的) server light caught her eye.Behind the cracked panel lay a dented hard drive labeled "Project Recovery".Her breath hitched.Possessing pre﹣Collapse files meant execution(死刑).
The video loaded.A woman in a white coat stood before luxuriant forests."Geoengineering failed,but natural air purification will conclude in 150 years.Surviving Silós must—"Static swallowed her words.The timestamp read 198 YEARSAGO.
Juliette' s gloves froze on the keyboard.If the air had healed,why did the screens still show poison?
"Mechanic 17."Mayor Bernard's voice crackled through her earpiece."Report to Level 1 immediately."His office reeked of antiseptic.Surveillance(监控画面) feeds covered the walls like ivy."Your father's obsession with'truth' blinded him,"Bernard said,polishing his glasses.Atremor in his hand exposed him.Juliette glanced at his wrist monitor:Oxygen:22%—the exact percentage from the ancient video' s"safe zone".
Midnight found her in the forbidden server room.The external camera feed hissed with snow.She input override (超控) codes that her father once scribbled on a napkin:GREEN.
A single blade of grass quivered (摇曳) in the wind,its vivid emerald defying the gray desert.Then the screen died.Alarms exploded.Red lights bathed the corridor in blood.Guards' shouts ricocheted off steel walls.
Juliette ran.Her boots pounded past flickering warnings:AIRLOCK BREACH!EXTREME HAZARD!The ancient door groaned (呻吟着) open,its gears screaming.Wind slapped her face—cool,damp,smelling of thunderstorms,not death.Beyond the concrete ruins,a silver ribbon glinted(闪烁) on the horizon.Water?!
"STOP!"Bemard's roar boomed from speakers."The Pact(公约) protects us!"
She stepped into the light.
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(2)请按如下格式在答题卡相应位置作答。
A bird's shadow flickered over the cracked ground as Juliette gasped—the air no longer burned her lungs.________
Inside the Silós,Bernard's finger froze above the"Delete Data"button,the screen flashing:"External Oxygen SAFE since 2075".________
7.(2025 朝阳区校级四模) On a sunny May morning,the Bank of the West in Woodland was usually a dynamic scene of routine activity.Michael Armus,a 69﹣year﹣old retired auto body painter,pushed open the heavy glass doors.The familiar jingle of the entrance bell seemed hushed by a weighty silence.The air was thick with unease,a sharp contrast to the bright sunlight streaming through the windows.
As he stepped inside,Michael's eyes swept across the room.Normally,he'd be greeted with lively "Hi,Mr.Armus!" from the tellers.But today,the tellers' stations were like islands of tension,their smiles replaced with tight﹣lipped anxiety,their eyes shifting nervously.His gaze landed on a man at a teller window.The man,wearing a ragged T﹣shirt,had pulled it up to partially cover his face,like a makeshift mask.
Michael's heart skipped a beat. "This is a robbery," he murmured under his breath.But instead of the expected rush of fear,a wave of compassion washed over him.He recognized the man—Eduardo Plascencia.He'd seen Eduardo on street corners,studying attentively over a self﹣help book,his face carved with hope as he tried to find answers within its pages.
Taking a deep breath,Michael squared his shoulders and walked over,his footsteps echoing in the otherwise quiet bank. "Hey there," he said softly,his voice steady. "What's going on?Don't you have a job?"
Eduardo looked up,his eyes wide with surprise.Tears welled up instantly,as if a dam had burst. "There's nothing for me here," he choked out. "Nothing in this town.I've got nothing,and I just want to go to prison."
Michael's chest tightened.Memories of his own time in prison,the darkness and hopelessness,flashed before his eyes. "I know what it's like to feel like your life's going nowhere," he said,his voice gentle yet firm. "But this?This isn't the answer."
Eduardo stared at him,a mix of confusion and hesitation in his eyes.After a moment,he nodded slightly. "Let's go outside and talk," Michael said,extending his hand.To his relief,Eduardo took it,and they made their way out of the bank.
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The instant they stepped into the warm sunlight,Michael enveloped in a bear hug.______
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Though ultimately charged with attempted robbery,Eduardo felt a change in his inner self.______
8.(2025 合肥三模)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I'm not known to be a particularly lucky person.Raffles(抽奖),t﹣shirt cannons,radio calls,random roommate selections﹣none of these ever seem to work out in my favor.But my fortune seemed to hit an all﹣time low last Monday.
The day started nice enough.I went to work,got off at five and decided to head to the beach.It was sweltering hot,and I knew the cool waters of Lake Michigan would help wash away my sweat.The first sign of trouble was when my cellphone navigation stopped working properly and showed the wrong directions.I was new to the area and didn't quite know my way around yet,so I ended up taking a wrong turn and driving through a web of neighborhoods,turning a 10﹣minute drive into a 40﹣minute one.
But fine,I get lost often.I made it to the beach eventually.Took a quick dip in the water,had a bite of the butter paneer I had picked up earlier.I made it back to my car,pulling some clothes out to change into.As I headed to the restroom,I realized I had forgotten a shirt.So I walked back,tugged on the handle and realized with horror that my keys were sitting in the passenger seat of my car.
I called AAA(American Automobile Association).As it turns out,I don't have an AAA membership.I called my parents and they anxiously tried to figure out how to add me to their card,while my phone battery was at 21% and dropping.
I called AAA again,and they informed me that they would be there in about an hour and a half,which seemed like a long time as I sat on top of the trunk of my car.The sun was lowering in the sky and the parking lot was emptying out.I heard thunder,and I saw people exiting the beach at an increasing rate.When I checked my weather app,I saw an alarming update:a heat advisory(预警),a 100% chance of a lightning storm,and a tornado warning.
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Fearful and alone,I stood frozen as thunder rolled closer.___________________
The kind lady drove me through the pounding rain toward a nearby Starbucks._______________
9.(2025 南京二模)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was 1975.I left school at 16 to work at the Tibooburra Pub,which had special significance for my family.The pub had first been run by my great﹣grandfather,Walter,back in 1913 and then he sold it.In the late 1940s,my grandfather bought it back.Having spent so much time there as a kid,1 thought it was a great place to work in.Grandfather's cheerful smile and comforting voice made those years precious to me.Unfortunately,grandfather died from a heart attack and the pub was eventually sold to a family,which meant I had to find work elsewhere.
I then got a job at the local hospital and enjoyed it,though nothing felt the same as working for one's own family.Aged 20,I connected with a man named Craig.Later we got married.Running a sheep property kept us busy,but one thing stayed on my mind. "I'd love to buy back the pub one day," I said to Craig.Part of me still longed for the days of being behind the bar and welcoming customers with a smile,just like my grandfather had.
In 2014,the pub came on the market again,so Craig and I went for it.Our offer was successful.
Running it again was like stepping back in time;nothing much had changed,and I enjoyed slipping into my old job.But Craig and I had plans to expand.We used our savings and did some renovations (翻新),like putting in a beer garden outside and building more motel (汽车旅馆) rooms.I felt like I was not only doing a great business,but also keeping alive our family tradition.
In February 2021,I went to the neighboring state to get some supplies and on the way back,I got a call from Craig. "There's been a fire at the pub," he cried.Being hours away was hard as I didn't know how bad the damage was.
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When I returned home and saw it with my own eyes,I broke down.________
"We're going to rebuild it," I said to Craig,firmly.________
10.(2025 广州模拟)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
One sunny afternoon,Josh sat alone in his room,staring at a chessboard in front of him.The black and white squares made him think of his dreams and problems.His parents had different ideas about his future in chess.
His mum was excited and had high hopes.She was already finding the best chess coaches and making a strict training plan for him.She believed he could become a famous chess master and even win championship,which brings honor to the family.His dad,on the other hand,had always emphasized the importance of a balanced life.He thought chess was a great hobby but shouldn't take over other parts of Josh's life,like school and friendships.
Josh felt torn.He loved chess with all his heart.The feeling of strategizing and outwitting his opponents on the board was exciting.But he also cherished the carefree days of playing basketball with his friends at the park and the evenings spent reading adventure novels.
As days went by,tension grew at home.His mum kept talking about chess tournaments,while his dad tried to change the subject.Josh found it hard to focus on school or even enjoy chess.
One evening,after a big argument between his parents,Josh went to the park.He used to play chess there with his dad.Sitting on a bench,he watched the sunset and thought about what he really wanted.
An old man with a kind face came over.He saw the chessboard and asked if he could play a game.As they played,the man told Josh about his past,when he had to choose between his passion and others' expectations. "Son," the old man said, "listen to your heart.Whatever you choose,do your best and don't regret it."
That night,Josh went home with a clear mind.He knew what he had to do.
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The next morning,Josh sat his parents down at the kitchen table.________
Josh's Dad nodded in agreement,a look of relief on his face.________
11.(2025 长春模拟)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was the first day of the new school year,and 16﹣year﹣old Mia was determined to make a fresh start.She had always been known as the"quiet girl"in class,someone who preferred to stay in the background and avoid attention.But this year,she wanted to change.She wanted to be more confident,to speak up,and to make new friends.The problem was,she didn't know where to start.
During lunch break,Mia noticed a poster on the school bulletin board.It was an announcement for the school's annual talent show.Students were encouraged to showcase their talents,whether it was singing,dancing,or even telling jokes.Mia's heart raced as she read the poster.She had always loved singing,but she had never performed in front of any one except her mirror.The thought of standing on a stage,with everyone watching her,made her feel nervous.But deep down,she knew this was her chance to step out of her comfort zone.
That evening,Mia practiced her favorite song in her room.Her voice was soft at first,but as she sang,she felt a sense of joy she hadn't felt for a long time.She imagined herself on the stage,the spotlight shining on her,and the audience clapping.But then,doubt crept in.What if she messed up?What if people laughed at her?She shook her head,trying to push those thoughts away.She knew she had to try,even if it was scary.
The day of the talent show arrived,and Mia's hands were trembling as she waited backstage.She could hear the audience cheering for the previous performer,and her heart pounded in her chest.When her name was called,she took a deep breath and walked onto the stage.The spotlight was blinding,and for a moment,she froze.But then,she remembered why she was there﹣to prove to herself that she could do it.She closed her eyes,took another deep breath,and began to sing.
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As Mia's voice filled the room,the audience fell silent.______________________
From that day on,Mia no longer saw herself as the"quiet girl".______________________
12.(2025 太原二模) I was really starving when I stepped out of the city library after an entire afternoon buried in books.Then I smelt something delicious﹣the hot dog stand at the street corner.
"One hot dog,please!"I nearly rushed to the stand.
"OK,ready soon!"The vendor(摊主) replied cheerfully.As he handed me the hot dog,he grinned,"You deserve the best hot dog in the world!"I guessed that was the slogan for his little business,for the words were painted in cheerful yellow letters on his cart.
I couldn't wait to take a bite.The warm bread,the chilli sauce and the juice in the sausage—it was the best thing in the world!Definitely at that time!
"Five dollars,young lady,"the vendor said,wiping his hands on his apron.
Hot dog in one hand,I reached for my wallet with the other.Just then,"Ouch!"a cry came from behind me.I turned back and found a woman in her 50's struggling to pick herself up from the ground.Her grocery bag split open with oranges rolling in every direction.
Seeing this,I stuffed the rest of the hot dog into my mouth,picked up the oranges and put them back into her bag."Are you okay?"I asked with concern.
"Thank you.I didn't see the pole on the ground,"she breathed.Noticing her hand was wounded,I remembered the Band﹣Aid(创可贴) in my bag and dug it out."Thank you so much for your kindness,"the woman said as I carefully applied it to her wound.Across the street,the bus I was about to take was pulling in.Waving a goodbye to the woman,I dashed to the bus stop and barely got aboard before the door closed.
As the bus pulled away,I saw the woman bought a hot dog from the same vendor.On the way,I was always wondering if she would be greeted with the same words,"You deserve the best hot dog in the world!"I was lost in it.
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But wait﹣had I forgotten something?
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"Someone has paid for it,"the vendor smiled.
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13.(2025 郑州模拟) One morning,16﹣year﹣old Luna woke up to find her mother already at work.It wasn't unusual﹣her mother,a single parent,worked long hours as a nurse to support their family.But today,Luna felt a strange emptiness in the house.She glanced at the note her mother had left on the kitchen table:"Luna,I have an overnight shift.Breakfast is in the fridge.Love,Mom."
Luna sighed.Lately,she'd been feeling distant from her mother.Between school,her part﹣time job at the cafe,and her mother's busy schedule,they barely had time to talk anymore.She missed the days when they would sit together and share stories over dinner.Now,it seemed like their conversations were limited to quick texts or hurried goodbyes.
After school,Luna dragged herself to the cafe where she worked three afternoons a week.As she took orders and wiped tables,her thoughts kept drifting back home.She wondered if her mother even noticed how hard she was trying to balance everything.Did she see the late nights Luna spent finishing homework after work,or the effort she made to keep their small apartment tidy?
That evening,when Luna finally returned home,the house was dark and quiet.Her mother's car wasn't in the driveway.Luna found her mother asleep on the couch,still in her nursing clothes,her face pale and tired.A half﹣empty coffee cup sat on the coffee table,and a bunch of unpaid bills lay nearby.Luna's throat tightened.She remembered a time when her mother's laughter filled the house,but lately,it felt like both of them were just going through the motions.
Luna hesitated for a moment,and quietly covered her mother with a blanket.Then,she noticed how tired her mother looked.Dark circles shadowed her eyes,and tiredness was etched (流露出) on her face."When was the last time we really talked?"she thought.She sat down beside her mother,careful not to wake her.For the first time in weeks,she felt a wave of sympathy and determination wash over her.
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The next morning,Luna decided to do something different._____
When her mother came home that evening,she found Luna waiting with a meal on the table._____
14.(2025 如皋市校级模拟) I'd always been told to take care of my older brother,Brian,who was born weak and small.I'd often tie his shoes or prepare another glass of water for him.My mom saw my larger size and strong body as a sign that I was to be a kind of guardian angel(守护天使) for Brian.However,that was not the case.
One day our school sponsored a pumpkin﹣carving contest.First prize was $100,and I knew just how I would spend it.There was a brand﹣new game I was dying to own.So I decided the first place bonus definitely had to land in my pocket.
When I had to carve the perfect pumpkin I'd picked out,it dawned on me that with my big clumsy fingers I'd surely screw it up(搞硬).I thought of Brian's smaller,delicate hands and knew he was the man for the job.I immediately begged Brian.Unexpectedly,he asked for a cut.That was fifty﹣fifty.Quickly doing the math in my head,I figured out even if I split(分摊) the first prize,I'd still have enough cash for the game.So I gave in to Brian's demands.With skillful hands Brian carved the perfect face,and now we had the best pumpkin ever.
Then the unexpected happened:We came in second.Unfortunately,second prize was only$50,and I needed every penny of that to buy the game.The day of the awards ceremony,the principal handed over the money to me because Brian was home,sick with cold.
If he really wanted to win,he would have been here today,I thought to myself,justifying stealing the cash from under poor Brian's runny nose.With hardly a thought,I ran to the store and bought my dream game.That night when Brian asked if we had won,I denied,afraid to look into his eyes.
The whole thing was never mentioned again until the day when Brian was packing for college.I played my usual role in helping him pack when I came across an old album filled with photos he had taken as the school photographer.
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(1)续写词数应为150左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I was enjoying the photos when one caught my eye.________
"You actually knew and didn't say anything?"I was shocked.________
15.(2025 长春模拟) The morning sun shone through tree leaves,showering our hiking group of four with golden light.Lily adjusted her oversized blue backpack. "Let me check the supplies again," she insisted.The rest of us laughed as she opened her heavy backpack,which was filled with a map,some pieces of clean cloth,bottled water,and even a rope.Ignoring our laughter,Lily continued, "I have saved the park's rescue number as well just in case.Remember Mr.Chen's safety lecture?He said every hiker should..."
"Should enjoy the view!" I interrupted,swinging my nearly empty backpack onto one shoulder.The spring air carried the good smell of beautiful flowers,making warnings about potential risks seem unnecessary.The other two friends only packed snacks while I brought only a bottle of water,a phone and a pair of sunglasses.Lily looked at my light load,but I just put on my sunglasses and started to hike.
As we went up,rocky steps gave way to uneven dirt paths.Lily paused frequently to look at her map,her finger tracing our route. "There's a steep (陡峭的) section ahead," she warned,but I was already rushing ahead,eager to reach viewing spots quickly.They were left behind as I raced ahead.
At one viewing spot,the wind rushed through my hair as I stood on a rock.I turned round to wave excitedly at the distant figures below.However,suddenly I slipped off the rock.Small rocks fell into the empty space as I grabbed wildly at nothing.When I was stopped by a rock,I found something terrible —my jeans were torn open,revealing a deep bleeding cut on my left leg.Soon I realized I was trapped on a small flat area of the rock,with no way to move up or down.The wind carried panicked shouts from my friends still far away.I attempted to call them with my phone,only to find it was broken.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
After a while,I heard Lily's voice come from above.
Realizing the need of professional help,Lily called the park office.
16.(2025 大通县三模) I was standing in the backyard,staring at the old tree that had stood there for as long as I could remember.It was a towering oak(橡树),its branches stretching out like arms welcoming the world.My grandfather had planted it when he was just a young man,and now it was a symbol of strength and stability in our family.
As a child,I would often climb to the top of the tree,feeling a sense of adventure and freedom.I would sit on one of the higher branches,my legs swinging over the edge,and watch the world below me.From up there,everything seemed small and manageable.The worries and stresses of everyday life faded away,replaced by a sense of peace.
My grandfather was always there to encourage me,teaching me the importance of nature and the lessons it could teach us.He would tell me stories about how the tree had weathered storms and strong winds,yet always stood tall and proud."Just like this tree,"he would say,"you need to be strong and resilient(适应力强的) in the face of adversity."
As the years went by,I grew older and my interests changed.I spent less time in the backyard and more time on my studies and social life.The old tree was still there,but I rarely noticed it anymore.It became just another part of the background,something I took for granted.
One summer,a severe storm swept through our town.The wind blew hard and the rain poured down heavily.When the storm finally passed,I went outside to survey the damage.To my horror,the old oak tree had been struck by lightning and was split in two parts.It lay on the ground,a fallen giant,its once strong branches now broken and scattered.
I stood there,tears streaming down my face,feeling a deep sense of loss.The tree that had been a part of my life for so long was gone.It was as if a piece of my childhood had been torn away.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
My grandfather came and put his arm around me.
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Now,whenever I'm free,I'll sit on that bench made of the oak.
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17.(2025 厦门模拟)
The Do﹣It﹣Yourself Disaster
"Time for the demonstration and we'll vote for the entries for the Science Fair.Who wants to show your project first?"Mrs.Williams asked.For this project,we were allowed to do anything,as long as we did it ourselves.I buried my head in my sweater,just like my turtle buried his head in his shell to avoid notice.
The first volunteer was Ava.Unlike me,Ava just loved talking in front of people.She skipped to the front and showed us how to wire potatoes to produce electricity.It was cool,and I told her so when she passed my desk.My buddy Jayce got called on next.He demonstrated the Unpoppable Bubble.It was really good.I gave him a thumbs﹣up."You did it,"I mouthed.
"Michael,please."Michael.That was me.I guessed I forgot to keep my head buried.I walked to the front on shaking legs and set my birdhouse on the table.I swallowed the baseball﹣sized lump in my throat and started."This is how to build a birdhouse.I looked online for plans and went to the woodyard with my dad,since I'm not old enough to drive."My classmates laughed and I could tell they appreciated my humor.Having gained some confidence,I went on with my words."Someone there cut four pieces for the walls,and made the hole."
Luka's hand shot up."So what did you do?"he asked.I swallowed.The lump in my throat was now the size of a basketball."I came up with the idea and I figured out how to hinge(加铰链) the roof so I can clean out the house after the birds leave."I lifted the roof to show everyone.Some kids stood up to see.
"Then I nailed all the walls together."I picked up the heavy hammer(锤子) borrowed from my dad.I had left one of the nails sticking out a little so I could demonstrate.As I gave the nail a mighty blow,the hammer came down on the roof instead of the nail.Smash!
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
The roof caved in and the birdhouse fell apart.________
As the thunderous applause faded,Mrs.Williams announced the start of the voting.________
18.(2025 湖北模拟) One morning when I woke up,a shocking realization struck me:I have probably lived more years than I have left.It wasn't about death,exactly —it was about time.All those things I'd told myself I'd do someday suddenly seemed ridiculous.Someday was NOW.
That's how I found myself standing in front of a piano later that day.I hadn't touched one in decades.Not since I was twelve,when I quit after my piano teacher sighed and said, "Adam,you play like a typewriter."
But my daughter,Olivia,had been taking lessons for years.Watching her practice —her small hands moving effortlessly through Chopin's nocturnes (《夜曲》) —I felt a stupid,stubborn jealousy.Not of her talent,but of her freedom.She played because she loved it.I had stopped because I was afraid of failing.
So,in secret,I signed up for adult beginner classes at a community center.The teacher,a kind Russian woman named Irina,would tap my wrist with a pencil when I rushed. "Music is not a race," she'd say. "You must make friends with each note." But to me,it was a race.Every wrong note made me think I was too old to learn new things.
For months,I practiced in the basement after everyone was asleep.My goal was simple:to play Nocturne in E﹣flat Major (《降E大调夜曲》) at my fiftieth birthday dinner without embarrassing myself.And the night arrived soon.Family and friends crowded our apartment.Wine flowed,laughter rose,and then,all eyes turned to me as I sat at the piano.My hands shook.The first notes sounded rough and shaky.Halfway through,my fingers got mixed up,and I stopped dead.Silence fell.I could almost hear the collective thought:Poor Adam,having his midlife crisis at the piano.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1:Then,from the corner,Olivia called out, "Start again,Dad."
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Paragraph 2:But this time,no one laughed.
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19.(2025 蚌埠模拟) Mr Lim had been in a bad mood ever since he lost his job three months ago.His efforts to find another job had been fruitless as well.To make ends meet,his wife,Mrs Lim,had to take on an overseas job offer.This meant that Mr Lim was left to tend to his two children,Luke and Lisa,all by himself.Seeing their father being so unhappy every day,Luke and Lisa wanted badly to cheer him up.On the day of Mr Lim's birthday,the children decided to turn their intention into action.
"Hurry,Luke!Dad will be home anytime now!Let's hide to surprise him!"Lisa said.After placing the birthday cake they had bought on the table,something that Luke and Lisa were sure Mr Lim would not have expected,they hid under it.It had taken the children many weeks to save enough money to buy their father's favourite cake.
They smiled at each other when the smell of fresh paint reached their nose.Luke and Lisa had painted on their dining area's wall,intending that to be decoration for Mr Lim's surprise birthday party.Moments later,the main door creaked(嘎吱作响) open.Suddenly,a loud shout filled the air!
"Who messed up the wall on purpose?"Mr Lim shouted angrily.On hearing those words,Luke and Lisa stared at each other in shock.As the elder brother,Luke knew he had to protect Lisa.Taking a deep breath,Luke slowly moved out from under the table.Before he could say a word,Mr Lim gave him an earful(长时间的斥责).Hoping to clear up the misunderstanding,Luke said,"Dad,you're wrong.We just wanted to.."
"Don't you dare give me excuses!"Mr Lim raised his voice.Then,with great force,he threw the newspaper he had been holding at the dining table.It hit the birthday cake,ruining it!Seeing that,Luke's heart broke.He cried.
"Dad….we….we're sorry!We wanted to give….give you a birthday sur….surprise,"Lisa explained in between cries,after moving out from her hiding spot.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Hearing that,Mr Lim fell silent for a moment before approaching Luke.
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After the tension eased,Luke and Lisa sang a birthday song for Mr Lim.
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20.(2025 正定县校级二模) Lily and Susie are sisters,with only two years between them.You'd think they would get along well,but they never got on.
When Susie was born,their mother encouraged Lily to hold the little hand.When Lily did,Susie cried suddenly,as if showing her dislike for her sister.As Susie grew,she hated Lily for telling her how to do things.Lily viewed Susie as spoilt(宠坏的)."Let her choose,"their mother would say when they fought over television programs."After all,she's younger."At secondary school,Lily shone at English;Susie was excellent at maths.Each made the other feel incompetent.When Lily turned fifteen,Susie was angry when her sister was allowed to go to the youth club."You're not old enough,"their parents would point out.Neither of them thought highly of the other,behaving like enemies.
Now,well into their fifties,these long﹣standing grievances(不满) were still as vivid as if they had occurred just yesterday in the sisters' minds.The only thing they had in common was that they both loved their mother.
Then one day,Lily was in the classroom,dealing with a particularly challenging group of teenagers.Meanwhile,Susie was at home,looking after her grandchildren,enjoying the simple pleasures of family life.Just as they were engaged in their respective activties,their father rang them.His voice was heavy with sorrow as he delivered the terrible news that their mother had died suddenly.Both sisters were stricken with sadness.
At the wake,the two sisters sat in silence.When their father showed the family's slide photos,they could no longer hold back their tears,emotions flooding back.After the funeral(葬礼),their father took out the painting﹣the source of one of their biggest arguments.They both desired to own the painting in that it vividly described their happy moment with their mother.When they were about to speak,their father presented their mother's will,saying"As for the painting,you each shall have it for two months and then give it to the other in person,not using delivery services."
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Hearing the will,the two sisters,never meeting privately,looked troubled.
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Once,Lily found Susie absent from the fixed spot and got news about her injury.
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高考英语一轮复习 读后续写
参考答案与试题解析
一.书面表达(共20小题)
1.(2025 重庆模拟)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Two exams were awaiting for them.Tang was waiting in the corridor(过道) with her class on Friday morning.She felt sick and her knees were shaking.She always felt sick during the exam week.She had two more exams that day and physics was the first.She really hated physics.Zhong glanced back at her from the front of the queue and then looked away quickly.Zhong didn't have a problem with physics.Zhong didn't have a problem with anything.
Zhong was looking back at her again. "So what's wrong with her?" Ning standing behind Tang had noticed Zhong looking back at them. "I thought you were friends.""Yeah,so did I," said Tang, "She' d promised to help me revise for the physics exam,but then just ignored all my calls and texts.Ning was trying to look sympathetic.However,it was time to enter the exam room.Tang gave Ning a worried look and followed them.
Tang had been staring at question number two for ten minutes without any clue,when she looked up.Zhong was sitting a few rows in front of her to the right and Tang couldn't believe her eyes!Zhong had her phone on her left knee and she was reading from it.Is that how Zhong always got good grades?She just felt really angry at Zhong.She almost put her hand up to tell the teacher,Mr.Fair,but Zhong had already put her phone away when Tang looked up again.She looked back over her shoulder at Tang and smiled sadly.
It wasn't fair!Tang never cheated and she was often in trouble for failing exams,while Zhong had been cheating all this time.The next exam was history,which was Tang's favorite and best subject but it didn't help her feel any better.She was angry with Zhong.But she didn't know what to do.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Just then,Mr.Fair walked past her table,asking Tang to hint(暗示) if Zhong had her phone out.________
Tang was walking to the school gate when she heard Zhong calling her behind.________
【答案】 Just then,Mr.Fair walked past her table,asking Tang to hint(暗示)if Zhong had her phone out.Tang's heart raced.She glanced at Zhong,who was scribbling answers with a calm face.Memories of Zhong's broken promise to help her revise flashed through her mind.Her hands trembled as she debated between justice and friendship.Finally,she subtly nodded at Mr.Fair.The teacher immediately walked to Zhong's desk and confiscated the phone.The whole class gasped,and Zhong turned pale,avoiding Tang's gaze.Tang felt a mix of relief and guilt,wondering if she had done the right thing.
Tang was walking to the school gate when she heard Zhong calling her behind.She stopped hesitantly.Zhong approached,eyes red from tears. "Thank you," she mumbled.Surprised,Tang stared at her. "I've been struggling with anxiety,and cheating became a bad habit.But today you helped me face it," Zhong whispered.Tang softened,realizing Zhong's perfection was a facade.They sat on a bench,and Zhong admitted the pressure to stay top of the class had driven her to cheat.Tang shared her own exam fears,and they apologized to each other.As the sun set,they walked home together,vowing to support each other honestly in the future.
【分析】文章讲述了Tang考试周因物理考试焦虑,发现曾承诺帮自己复习的Zhong作弊。老师询问时她暗示情况,事后钟坦言因焦虑作弊,两人和解并决定互相真诚支持。
高分句型一:Tang felt a mix of relief and guilt,wondering if she had done the right thing.
翻译:唐感到如释重负又心怀愧疚,不知道自己是否做了正确的事。
分析:句中运用了现在分词短语wondering if she had done the right thing作状语和if引导的宾语从句。
高分句型二:As the sun set,they walked home together,vowing to support each other honestly in the future.
翻译:当夕阳西下时,她们一起走回家,发誓未来要真诚地互相支持。
分析:句中运用了as引导的时间状语从句和现在分词短语vowing to support each other honestly in the future作状语。
【解答】 Just then,Mr.Fair walked past her table,asking Tang to hint(暗示)if Zhong had her phone out.Tang's heart raced.She glanced at Zhong,who was scribbling answers with a calm face.Memories of Zhong's broken promise to help her revise flashed through her mind.Her hands trembled as she debated between justice and friendship.Finally,she subtly nodded at Mr.Fair.The teacher immediately walked to Zhong's desk and confiscated the phone.The whole class gasped,and Zhong turned pale,avoiding Tang's gaze.Tang felt a mix of relief and guilt,wondering if she had done the right thing.【高分句型一】(描写老师询问Zhong是否作弊,Tang纠结后暗示,老师没收Zhong的手机,Tang心怀矛盾不知对错)
Tang was walking to the school gate when she heard Zhong calling her behind.She stopped hesitantly.Zhong approached,eyes red from tears. "Thank you," she mumbled.Surprised,Tang stared at her. "I've been struggling with anxiety,and cheating became a bad habit.But today you helped me face it," Zhong whispered.Tang softened,realizing Zhong's perfection was a facade.They sat on a bench,and Zhong admitted the pressure to stay top of the class had driven her to cheat.Tang shared her own exam fears,and they apologized to each other.As the sun set,they walked home together,vowing to support each other honestly in the future.【高分句型二】(Zhong感谢Tang让自己直面焦虑,坦言因压力作弊,两人和解并承诺真诚相待)
【点评】(1)品读原文,确定文章线索
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(2)仔细审题,明确续写要求
注意续写段落的首句提示,这样考生可以做到"心中有数"。
(3)回扣原文,揣摩续写思路
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(4)拟写草稿,修改错词病句
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2.(2025 浙江模拟) Final exams were approaching,and everyone in school was excited about vacations.We were dreaming of far﹣off destinations,our minds filled with images of thrilling adventures.
After school on Friday,on my way home,I ran into my best friend.Enthusiastic about the vacations,I asked him about his plans.His eyes twinkled brightly as he replied,"I'm going to visit my grandparents with my parents for a week."
"Don't you ever get tired of going to the same place year after year?I remember,every year,your family takes 7 to 10 days off to head back to your native village,"I asked,raising an eyebrow in curiosity.
"Oh,not at all!That's the absolute best time of the year for me!Being with my folks in the village is just amazing."His face beamed with joy as he continued,"In the village,I get to meet so many wonderful people,and everyone there is so kind and welcoming.Our neighborhood crew is tight!We're always hanging out together,you know?Just running wild,chilling by the lake,or bouncing between each others houses.Honestly,I know what really matters about these village trips.It's not the cool places we see﹣it's spending time with the people I love.That's the real treasure of life."
His words made me recall my own grandparents.I realized I hadn't seen them for years.But still,it's a pleasure to be there….we had big long gardens and a big multi﹣story house.
The next day,over breakfast,I mustered up the courage and asked my parents,"Can we visit grandparents this summer after exams?"Dad replied hesitantly,"Oh,that's unexpected."Mom was surprised."Well,you know it gets really hot there this time of year."After a short pause,Dad gave a small sigh and met my hopeful gaze. "However,"he said,"if you perform well in exams,we'll make the trip."
For the next six weeks,I threw myself completely into my studies.My mom was amazed by this sudden transformation in me.Soon came the long﹣awaited exam results.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1:
I rushed home and immediately handed my parents my score card and a note with"PLEASE."
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Paragraph 2:
I saw my mom had tears in her eyes when leaving them.
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【答案】 I rushed home and immediately handed my parents my score card and a note with "PLEASE." Dad took the score card,his eyes widening in surprise. "You've done an excellent job,son!" he exclaimed,a broad smile spreading across his face.Mom,too,looked at me with pride in her eyes.Without further hesitation,they agreed to the trip.We started planning right away,booking tickets and preparing gifts for my grandparents.The thought of seeing them after so many years filled me with a mix of excitement and nervousness.I couldn't wait to tell them about my life,show them my achievements,and hear their stories again.
I saw my mom had tears in her eyes when leaving them.She hugged my grandparents tightly,saying how much she missed them.I realized this visit meant a lot to her as well.Before we left,my grandparents gave me a big hug and a warm smile,telling me to study hard and visit them often.On the way back,I couldn't stop thinking about the wonderful time we had together.I decided that from then on,I would make sure to visit my grandparents regularly,because I understood that family time is truly the most precious thing in life.
【分析】文章讲述了期末考试临近,大家期待假期。作者受好友启发,为见祖父母努力学习,考出好成绩后如愿前往,深刻体会到亲情珍贵。
高分句型一:We started planning right away,booking tickets and preparing gifts for my grandparents.
翻译:我们马上开始计划,预订车票并为祖父母准备礼物。
分析:句中运用了现在分词短语booking tickets and preparing gifts for my grandparents作状语。
高分句型二:I decided that from then on,I would make sure to visit my grandparents regularly,because I understood that family time is truly the most precious thing in life.
翻译:我决定从那时起一定要定期看望祖父母,因为我懂得家人相聚的时光确实是生命中最珍贵的东西。
分析:句中运用了that引导的宾语从句和because引导的原因状语从句。
【解答】 I rushed home and immediately handed my parents my score card and a note with "PLEASE." Dad took the score card,his eyes widening in surprise. "You've done an excellent job,son!" he exclaimed,a broad smile spreading across his face.Mom,too,looked at me with pride in her eyes.Without further hesitation,they agreed to the trip.We started planning right away,booking tickets and preparing gifts for my grandparents. 【高分句型一】The thought of seeing them after so many years filled me with a mix of excitement and nervousness.I couldn't wait to tell them about my life,show them my achievements,and hear their stories again.(描写作者拿成绩单和写有"PLEASE"的纸条让父母同意旅行,父母答应后开始筹备,作者期待见祖父母)
I saw my mom had tears in her eyes when leaving them.She hugged my grandparents tightly,saying how much she missed them.I realized this visit meant a lot to her as well.Before we left,my grandparents gave me a big hug and a warm smile,telling me to study hard and visit them often.On the way back,I couldn't stop thinking about the wonderful time we had together.I decided that from then on,I would make sure to visit my grandparents regularly,because I understood that family time is truly the most precious thing in life.【高分句型二】(描写离别时妈妈落泪,返程中作者决定常探望祖父母,深知亲情珍贵)
【点评】(1)品读原文,确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路,通过精读文章,找到该篇文章的写作线索。
(2)仔细审题,明确续写要求
注意续写段落的首句提示,这样考生可以做到"心中有数"。
(3)回扣原文,揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求,再次快速阅读短文,抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思路。
(4)拟写草稿,修改错词病句
在确定了思路和内容之后,最关键的就是结合提示语或者文中画线的关键词拟写草稿。拟写时,注意句子结构的多样性,语言的丰富性,并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用,使上下文连贯。
3.(2025 济南三模) For over 15 years,Christina in Pocatello,who has Down syndrome (唐氏综合征)and limited speech,made renting movies an essential part of her routine.She regularly visited video rental stores,her face lighting up with excitement as she scanned the shelves filled with a vast collection of movies.As she picked through her favorite tapes,Christina would settle into a usual spot,carefully comparing each tape until she found the perfect pick.
Each store she visited became a precious part of her life,holding a unique place in her heart.She even named her favorite video rental store Video Stop "Babar" after the movie she loved,while another video store became "Beast",inspired by Beauty and the Beast.For Christina,the act of renting movies was more than just an activity—it was a comforting and consistent part of her daily life.
However,the rise of digital streaming led to the decline of video rental stores,making physical rentals outdated.This shift not only reduced convenience but also weakened community connections.As the last remaining video rental store in Pocatello,Video Stop was the final link to Christina's valued routine—but like all others,it couldn't escape the wave of this social transformation.
When Christina's mother,Laura,learned that Video Stop was closing,she worried about how it would affect Christina.Video Stop was the last place where Christina could get her favorite films.With the store ceasing rentals and clearing out most of its collection,Laura was reminded of the struggle they faced years ago,when the closure of another store had left Christina standing outside,confused and heartbroken.Laura feared a repeat of that pain.
In this moment of uncertainty,David Kraning,the owner of Video Stop and a convenient store called Quick Stop,noticed Christina's deep connection to the store.Determined to preserve her routine,he offered a heartfelt solution to ensure her happiness even after the store closed.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
After much thought,David decided to take action.
"Christina's Corner" in Quick Stop left both Christina and Laura speechless.
【答案】 After much thought,David decided to take action.He cleared a corner in his convenience store,Quick Stop,and filled it with Christina's favorite movies.He labeled the area "Christina's Corner," complete with shelves of DVDs and a cozy seating spot where she could browse just like at Video Stop.David even kept the familiar rental process,allowing Christina to" borrow" movies with a simple sign﹣out sheet.When Laura brought Christina to the store,she couldn't believe her eyes — her daughter's face lit up as she recognized the familiar tapes and the warm,welcoming space.
"Christina's Corner" in Quick Stop left both Christina and Laura speechless.Tears of gratitude filled Laura's eyes as she saw Christina happily flipping through the movies,her routine preserved.David's kindness not only saved a cherished part of Christina's life but also showed the power of community and empathy.The corner became more than a movie section;it was a symbol of how small acts of care can bridge change and preserve what matters most.Christina continued to visit regularly,her smile a constant reminder of the beauty in human connection.
【分析】本文以人物为线索展开,主要讲述了患有唐氏综合征且言语受限的克里斯蒂娜,15 年多来将租赁电影视为生活中不可或缺的一部分,随着数字流媒体兴起,当地的录像带租赁店纷纷倒闭。当最后一家租赁店 Video Stop也面临关闭时,店主大卫为了保留克里斯蒂娜的生活习惯,在自己的便利店 Quick Stop中打造 "克里斯蒂娜的角落"的暖心故事。
高分句型一:He labeled the area "Christina's Corner," complete with shelves of DVDs and a cozy seating spot where she could browse just like at Video Stop.
翻译:他把这个地方称为"克里斯蒂娜的角落",里面摆满了DVD的架子,还有一个舒适的座位,她可以像在视频站一样浏览。
分析:运用了where引导的定语从句。
高分句型二:The corner became more than a movie section;it was a symbol of how small acts of care can bridge change and preserve what matters most.
翻译:这个角落不仅仅是一个电影区;这是一个象征,表明小小的关爱之举可以架起改变和保护最重要事物的桥梁。
分析:运用了how引导的宾语从句以及what引导的宾语从句。
【解答】 After much thought,David decided to take action.He cleared a corner in his convenience store,Quick Stop,and filled it with Christina's favorite movies.He labeled the area "Christina's Corner," complete with shelves of DVDs and a cozy seating spot where she could browse just like at Video Stop. 【高分句型一】David even kept the familiar rental process,allowing Christina to" borrow" movies with a simple sign﹣out sheet.When Laura brought Christina to the store,she couldn't believe her eyes — her daughter's face lit up as she recognized the familiar tapes and the warm,welcoming space.(描写围绕大卫具体如何改造便利店角落)
"Christina's Corner" in Quick Stop left both Christina and Laura speechless.Tears of gratitude filled Laura's eyes as she saw Christina happily flipping through the movies,her routine preserved.David's kindness not only saved a cherished part of Christina's life but also showed the power of community and empathy.The corner became more than a movie section;it was a symbol of how small acts of care can bridge change and preserve what matters most. 【高分句型一】Christina continued to visit regularly,her smile a constant reminder of the beauty in human connection.(描写克里斯蒂娜看到角落时的喜悦表现,以及劳拉对大卫的感激之情,还有这个角落在社区产生的积极影响)
【点评】读后续写,首先要阅读文章,理解材料的主旨和重要细节,注意把握材料中的人物、情节、时间和地点等信息,在确定主题和情节时注意与材料中的情节和人物保持连贯性,同时可以加入自己的想象力和创造力来丰富情节。首先写开头部分,与提供的阅读材料进行衔接,确保文章的连贯性;然后写发展部分,根据自己确定的情节发展进行拓展,可以使用适当的语法、词汇和句式来表达自己的观点和分析。同时,注意与前文保持逻辑上的连贯性;最后写结尾部分,总结全文,并为读者留下一定的思考空间。
4.(2025 北碚区校级模拟) Tom concentrated hard.The rocket competition was about to begin,and he wanted to be sure he hadn't let any detail unchecked.No possible fault was too small to be ignored.Nothing could threaten his winning.Always being on top,he pushed himself to remain there.Although the other kids rarely came over to him,he would never go over to them because he'd win again and they couldn't ignore that.
He opened his toolbox.Moving past various parts and tools,he took out the pieces of his launching stand and started putting it together.As he worked,he glanced at the other rockets.He noticed problems quickly:one rocket had messy areas around its stickers,and another had wings placed too high﹣without doubt,these rockets would fall down.One rocket,however,caught his eye.Its body shone in the sun.The painted areas were finely done,and connection between the parts was perfect.His critical eye detected that this rocket could beat his.
A thin boy lifted it carefully."Hi,my name is Ed.Nice rocket you've got there!"said the boy friendly."Thanks,"Tom looked up and replied without much emotion,but then regretted it.He added,"I haven't seen you at any of the competitions.You don't care for these contests?"Ed said,"I never really thought about them.I keep pretty much to myself."
It was then that the announcer began explaining the rules,but Tom wasn't paying attention.He kept staring at Ed's rocket.Then his heart suddenly raced﹣Ed had no chance of winning.As Ed lifted his rocket to place it on the stand,one wing had gotten caught and was now loose.It was now fatally(致命地) weakened.But Ed hadn't noticed.He glanced back at Tom and gave a thumbs﹣up sign.Though Tom felt a wave of regret,he decided not to say anything﹣why risk his certain victory?Then it went,one rocket after another,most gaining respectable heights,but none as high as Tom's.Tom watched,yet the problems they had didn't make him feel good.
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At that moment,Ed set of for the launch area with his rocket.
Ed's rocket reached the highest.
【答案】 At that moment,Ed set off for the launch area with his rocket.Tom hesitated for a second,then rushed after him. "Ed,wait!" he called out. "Your rocket has a problem.The wing is loose.It might not fly well." Ed was shocked.He thanked Tom profusely.Together,they quickly fixed the wing with some tools Tom had.As they finished,the announcer signaled it was their turn.Ed launched the rocket,and it soared smoothly into the sky.
Ed's rocket reached the highest.The crowd cheered loudly.Ed turned to Tom with a bright smile. "Thanks to you,I won.This is more than just a victory for me." Tom felt a warmth in his heart.He realized that helping others brought a different kind of joy,much more fulfilling than winning alone.From then on,Tom became more open﹣hearted.He started sharing his knowledge and skills with other kids,and they formed a great team,always ready to create and compete together.
【分析】本文主要讲述了汤姆全神贯注。火箭比赛即将开始,他要确保自己没有放过任何一个细节。任何可能出现的小毛病都不容忽视。没有什么能威胁到他的胜利。一直处于领先地位的他,督促自己要保持下去。尽管其他孩子很少主动接近他,但他也从不会主动去找他们,因为他知道自己还会再次获胜,而他们也无法忽视这一点。
高分句型一:As they finished,the announcer signaled it was their turn.
翻译:当他们完成时,播音员示意轮到他们了。
分析:运用了As引导的时间状语从句。
高分句型二:He realized that helping others brought a different kind of joy,much more fulfilling than winning alone.
翻译:他意识到帮助他人带来了一种不同的快乐,比独自获胜更令人满足。
分析:运用了that引导的宾语从句。
【解答】 At that moment,Ed set off for the launch area with his rocket.Tom hesitated for a second,then rushed after him. "Ed,wait!" he called out. "Your rocket has a problem.The wing is loose.It might not fly well." Ed was shocked.He thanked Tom profusely.Together,they quickly fixed the wing with some tools Tom had.As they finished,the announcer signaled it was their turn. 【高分句型一】Ed launched the rocket,and it soared smoothly into the sky.(Tom帮助Ed发射火箭)
Ed's rocket reached the highest.The crowd cheered loudly.Ed turned to Tom with a bright smile. "Thanks to you,I won.This is more than just a victory for me." Tom felt a warmth in his heart.He realized that helping others brought a different kind of joy,much more fulfilling than winning alone. 【高分句型二】From then on,Tom became more open﹣hearted.He started sharing his knowledge and skills with
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