期中复习之书面表达15篇(Units1-3单元话题)(原卷版+解析版)2024-2025七年级英语下学期期中复习查缺补漏冲刺满分(沪教版五四制2024)

期中复习之书面表达15篇
(Units1-3单元话题)
Unit 1单元话题
1.Write at least 60 words according to the given situation. (根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文。)
音乐,如同无形的画笔,在心灵的画布上勾勒出情感的轮廓。在欢愉时,音乐如阳光洒满心田;在忧伤时,它又如温柔的夜风。它不仅是耳朵的盛宴,更是心灵的慰藉,陪伴我们走过人生的每一个季节,在寂静中回响,在喧嚣中沉淀。请你谈谈你最喜欢的音乐种类,以及你喜欢它的原因。
文章需要包含以下内容:
1. What kind of music do you like best
2. Why do you like it
(注意:短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息,否则不予评分。)
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1.Please write a passage on “My favourite music piece” in at least 60 words.
You are supposed to include:
(1)What is your favourite music piece
(2)When and where do you usually listen to it
(3)Why do you like it
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1.Write at least 60 words about the topic “My favourite song”. (以“我最喜欢的歌”为话题,写一篇不少于60词的短文。)
Suggested questions:
1. What is your favourite song
2. What kind of song is it
3. Why do you like the song best
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1.Write in at least 60 words about the topic “My favourite music (or song)” (以“我最爱的音乐(或歌)”为题,写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格。)
Suggested questions:
1. What music type is your favourite music/song
2. Why do you like it (At least two reasons.)
3. What’s your feeling when you are listening to it
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1.学校广播站号召同学们推荐下周播放的歌曲。请你根据以下提示,给广播站写一封推荐信,推荐你最喜欢的一首歌曲。
字数要求:不少于60 词。
Use the following points as reference (以下问题仅供参考) :
(1)Which song would you like to recommend?
(2)What kind of music is it?
(3)Why do you want to recommend the song?
(注意:勿出现任何与你的学校、姓名等相关的信息。)
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Unit 2单元话题
1.Write a letter in at least 50 words according to the given situation(学校“心灵之声”栏目正在向同学们征询稿件,希望聆听同学之间人际交往的故事,假如你是李华,请写一封投稿信,讲述你如何化解与同学之间矛盾的故事。不少于50词)
Suggested questions:
● What problem did you have
● What did you do to solve the problem
● How did you feel
Dear “Voice of Heart” Column,
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Best regards,
Li Hua
1.Write at least 50 words about the topic “How to communicate with our parents in a better way”.
Suggested questions:
1. How do you communicate with your parents
2. Is there any problem when you communicate with your parents
3. Do you have some possible solutions to the problem(s)
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1.假如你是李华,你校英语社团正组织关于 “Body language”的英文演讲比赛,请你写一篇演讲稿参加比赛。
内容包括:1. 重要意义;2. 举例说明;3. 观点总结
要求:1. 词数80-100,开头和结尾已经为你写好,不计入总词数;
2. 短文须包括所给内容信息,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Good morning, boys and girls,
My name is Li Hua. I’m happy to stand here and give my speech. ___________________________________________________________________________________
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Thank you for listening!
1.以“Music and Communication in My Life”为题,写一篇短文,描述音乐和交流在你生活中的作用,以及你遇到的相关经历,词数60词左右。
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Unit 3单元话题
1.助人为乐是一种美好的品格。校学生会计划在新学期倡议全体师生在生活中实践助人之举。假如你是吴飞,请代表校学生会写一份不少于50词的倡议书,呼吁全体师生尽己所能,帮助他人。
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1.Write a passage in at least 50 words about your experience of receiving help from others (请写一篇不少于50词的短文,讲述你接受他人帮助的经历,标点符号不占格)
以下问题供参考:
● What happened to you
● When did it happen
● How did he/she help you
● How did you feel
(注意:照抄阅读语篇不得分)
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1.Write at least 60 words on the topic “Happiness from helping others”, using the following questions for reference. (请根据提示问题,以“帮助他人的快乐”为题,写一篇短文,不少于60个词,标点符号不占格。)
Suggested questions:
(1)Do you often help others
(2)What do you usually do to help others
(3)How do you feel when you help others
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1.假如你是李华,热爱志愿者活动,每周末都会去敬老院看望老人。请你根据下列提示,以 “Being a volunteer is great”为题,用英语写一篇80词左右的短文,讲述你上周末的志愿者服务经历。可适当发挥。
提示:1. What did you do as a volunteer last week
2. How did you feel after that
Being a volunteer is great
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1.Write at least 60 words on the topic “________ gave me help”. (以“ ________ 给了我帮助”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格。在阅读理解E篇中,Tom在父母的帮助下解决了问题。当你在生活、学习中遇到困难或问题时,你获得了谁的帮助?请描述一次你遇到困难或问题时获得他人帮助的经历。
注意:
1. 请先将标题补充完整。
2. 短文中不得出现考生姓名、校名等个人信息,否则不予评分。
3. 照抄本卷语篇,不得分。
________ gave me help
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1.Write at least 60 words about the topic “How to help others”(以“如何帮助别人”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格。)
Use the following points as a guide (短文须包含下列要点)
1. When you are in trouble, who helps you
2. When someone is in trouble, how should you do
3. What should you do if they can’t pay for school things or living things
4. What do you think to help others
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1.Write at least 60 words on the topic“A volunteer labor”(以“一次公益劳动”为题,写一篇至少60个单词的短文。标点符号不占格)
劳动教育(Labor Education) 已经纳入国家课程方案,它包含日常生活劳动、农业生产劳动和服务性劳动。在生活中,学生通过劳动,养成吃苦耐劳的品质,培养合作共享的精神,形成助人为乐、服务他人和服务社会的公益精神。请你以“一次公益劳动(A volunteer labor)”为题,结合自身的经历谈谈自己对公益劳动的看法。文中不得出现真实的校名和姓名。
以下问题供参考:
Suggested questions:
What do you think of the volunteer labor
Why do you think so (结合自身经历说明)
What have you learned from it
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(Units1-3单元话题)
Unit 1单元话题
1.Write at least 60 words according to the given situation. (根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文。)
音乐,如同无形的画笔,在心灵的画布上勾勒出情感的轮廓。在欢愉时,音乐如阳光洒满心田;在忧伤时,它又如温柔的夜风。它不仅是耳朵的盛宴,更是心灵的慰藉,陪伴我们走过人生的每一个季节,在寂静中回响,在喧嚣中沉淀。请你谈谈你最喜欢的音乐种类,以及你喜欢它的原因。
文章需要包含以下内容:
1. What kind of music do you like best
2. Why do you like it
(注意:短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息,否则不予评分。)
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【答案】例文:
Among all kinds of music, I like pop music best. Its lively rhythms and meaningful lyrics always make me happy. For example, when I listen to songs about friendship, I feel warm inside.
There are two reasons why I love it. First, pop music is easy to sing along with, so I can enjoy it anywhere. Second, it helps me relax after studying. When I feel tired, soft pop songs calm me down like a gentle friend. Pop music colors my life with joy and comfort. This is why it’s my favorite!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:这是一篇材料作文;
②时态:主要采用“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据要点进行写作,注意条理清晰,语法正确,可以适当补充。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍最喜欢的音乐类型是流行音乐;
第二步,介绍喜欢流行音乐的原因。
[亮点词汇]
①all kinds of各种各样的
②calm me down让我平静下来
③color my life为生活添彩
[高分句型]
When I feel tired, soft pop songs calm me down like a gentle friend. (when引导时间状语从句)
1.Please write a passage on “My favourite music piece” in at least 60 words.
You are supposed to include:
(1)What is your favourite music piece
(2)When and where do you usually listen to it
(3)Why do you like it
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【答案】例文
My favourite music piece
My favourite music piece is Ludwig van Beethoven’s Moonlight Sonata. I usually listen to it in the evening while relaxing in my room or during a quiet walk in the park. The smoothing and sad melody of it helps me relax and think about my day. I love it because it brings up deep emotions and has a calming effect on my mind. The beautiful melody allows me to enter a world of calm and peace, making it the perfect background music for moments of relaxation and thinking.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据提示内容进行写作,可适当发挥,注意要点齐全,表述清晰。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出主题,介绍最喜欢的音乐作品是什么;
第二步,介绍通常在什么时候及哪里听这首音乐;
第三步,表达喜欢的原因。
[亮点词汇]
①think about思考
②allow sb to do sth允许某人做某事
③relaxation放松
[高分句型]
I love it because it brings up deep emotions and has a calming effect on my mind. (because引导原因状语从句)
1.Write at least 60 words about the topic “My favourite song”. (以“我最喜欢的歌”为话题,写一篇不少于60词的短文。)
Suggested questions:
1. What is your favourite song
2. What kind of song is it
3. Why do you like the song best
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【答案】范文
My Favourite Song
My favourite song is My Heart Will Go On. It is a classic English ballad. It is a soft and touching song. The melody is beautiful and full of deep emotions.
I like this song for several reasons. First, the story behind the song is so moving. It is from the movie Titanic, which tells a tragic but romantic love story. Whenever I listen to it, the touching scenes in the movie come to my mind. Second, Céline Dion’s voice is amazing. Her singing makes the song even more attractive.
This song always cheers me up and makes me feel the power of love.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇说明文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:文章应该包括所有提示要点,要适当补充,使文章内容充实;行文时多用第一人称,尽量多使用短语和句型;写作中适当使用连接词,使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开门见山,直接点明自己最喜欢的歌曲,并对歌曲的类型进行简单介绍;
第二步,详细阐述喜欢这首歌的原因;
第三步,总结这首歌对自己的影响。
[亮点词汇]
①cheer sb. up 使某人振作起来
②be full of 充满
[高分句型]
①It is from the movie Titanic, which tells a tragic but romantic love story. (which引导非限制性定语从句)
②Whenever I listen to it, the touching scenes in the movie come to my mind. (whenever引导时间状语从句)
1.Write in at least 60 words about the topic “My favourite music (or song)” (以“我最爱的音乐(或歌)”为题,写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格。)
Suggested questions:
1. What music type is your favourite music/song
2. Why do you like it (At least two reasons.)
3. What’s your feeling when you are listening to it
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【答案】 My Favourite Music
My favourite music is pop music. I like it because it is relaxing and meaningful. First, the melodies are cheerful, and they make me feel happy. Second, the lyrics often tell stories that I can relate to. When I listen to it, I feel relaxed and happy. It helps me forget my worries and enjoy the moment. Pop music is my favourite because it brings joy to my life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,描述自己最喜欢的音乐或歌曲;
②时态:以一般现在时为主;
③提示:题目给出了三个要点,必须写出所给内容,可以适当补充细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己最喜欢的音乐或歌曲的类型;
第二步,说明喜欢它的原因(至少两个);
第三步,描述听音乐时的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①relaxing令人放松的
②meaningful有意义的
③cheerful愉快的
[高分句型]
When I listen to it, I feel relaxed and happy. (时间状语从句)
1.学校广播站号召同学们推荐下周播放的歌曲。请你根据以下提示,给广播站写一封推荐信,推荐你最喜欢的一首歌曲。
字数要求:不少于60 词。
Use the following points as reference (以下问题仅供参考) :
(1)Which song would you like to recommend?
(2)What kind of music is it?
(3)Why do you want to recommend the song?
(注意:勿出现任何与你的学校、姓名等相关的信息。)
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【答案】
I would like to recommend a song called “Count on Me” by Bruno Mars. It has a cheerful melody and heartwarming lyrics about friendship and support. I recommend this song because it reminds me that true friends are always there for each other, no matter what happens. When I first heard it, I was feeling lonely, but the song instantly made me smile and think of my best friend. I believe playing this song will spread positive energy and encourage everyone to cherish their friendships. I’m sure everybody will enjoy this song.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态以“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应根据提示要点进行书面表达,不要遗漏要点,可适当发挥。应能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等,清楚连贯地表达自己的思想,进而完成写作任务。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图,引出话题;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。分别从推荐哪一首歌曲、是一首什么样的歌曲以及推荐这首歌的原因等方面介绍具体详情。
第三步,书写结语。表达自己的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①would like to do sth想要做某事
②think of想起……
③each other彼此
④feel lonely感到孤独
[高分句型]
①I recommend this song because it reminds me that true friends are always there for each other, no matter what happens. (状语从句和宾语从句)
②I believe playing this song will spread positive energy and encourage everyone to cherish their friendships. (宾语从句)
Unit 2单元话题
1.Write a letter in at least 50 words according to the given situation(学校“心灵之声”栏目正在向同学们征询稿件,希望聆听同学之间人际交往的故事,假如你是李华,请写一封投稿信,讲述你如何化解与同学之间矛盾的故事。不少于50词)
Suggested questions:
● What problem did you have
● What did you do to solve the problem
● How did you feel
Dear “Voice of Heart” Column,
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Best regards,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear “Voice of Heart” Column,
I am Li Hua. I had an unforgettable experience with my friend Tom. One day, I made a joke about Tom. I didn’t expect that he got really angry. After realizing my mistake, I felt very guilty.
I decided to take the initiative to solve this problem. I went to find Tom and sincerely apologized to him. I told him that I didn’t mean to hurt his feelings and I promised not to do such things again. Tom saw my sincerity and forgave me. We became good friends again.
This incident made me understand that we should be careful with our words and actions when dealing with friends. When we make mistakes, we should have the courage to admit and correct them.
Best regards,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,是书信。
②时态:时态主要为一般过去时,因为讲述的是过去发生的事情。
③提示:主要是李华对自身经历的叙述。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开头表明自己身份,引出要讲述的与朋友汤姆的经历。
第二步,中间详细叙述事情经过,从开汤姆玩笑导致他生气,到自己意识到错误主动道歉,最后汤姆原谅自己。
第三步,结尾总结此次经历让自己明白的道理,即在与朋友相处时言行需谨慎,犯错要勇于承认和改正。
[亮点词汇]
① unforgettable难忘的
② guilty内疚的
③ initiative主动性
④ sincerely真诚地
[高分句型]
This incident made me understand that we should be careful with our words and actions when dealing with friends.(使用“make sb. do sth.”结构,that引导的宾语从句)
1.Write at least 50 words about the topic “How to communicate with our parents in a better way”.
Suggested questions:
1. How do you communicate with your parents
2. Is there any problem when you communicate with your parents
3. Do you have some possible solutions to the problem(s)
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【答案】例文
How to communicate with our parents in a better way
In most cases, I get along well with my parents. We enjoy spending time together, having some really good meals and talking about our daily lives. However, we still argue with each other from time to time, especially when I do badly in my exams. It is easy for them to blame me for my poor scores. Then I can’t help but shout back at them, which usually makes the whole thing worse. To better communicate with my parents, I will avoid shouting next time. Instead, I will write down my feelings and share my feelings with my parents when all of us have calmed down. I hope it will work.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏所有介绍要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍平时和父母是如何相处的;
第二步,介绍和父母有哪些矛盾;
第三步,提出几个解决矛盾的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①get along well with sb和某人相处得好
②enjoy doing sth喜欢做某事
③avoid doing sth避免做某事
④calm down冷静下来
[高分句型]
①Then I can’t help but shout back at them, which usually makes the whole thing worse. (which引导非限制性定语从句)
②To better communicate with my parents, I will avoid shouting next time. (动词不定式作目的状语)
1.假如你是李华,你校英语社团正组织关于 “Body language”的英文演讲比赛,请你写一篇演讲稿参加比赛。
内容包括:1. 重要意义;2. 举例说明;3. 观点总结
要求:1. 词数80-100,开头和结尾已经为你写好,不计入总词数;
2. 短文须包括所给内容信息,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Good morning, boys and girls,
My name is Li Hua. I’m happy to stand here and give my speech. ___________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thank you for listening!
【答案】例文
Good morning, boys and girls,
My name is Li Hua. I’m happy to stand here and give my speech. My speech is about the body language in our daily life. I think it’s important to improve our body language because everyone knows that body language is very useful.
In our daily life, we can see body language everywhere, and even in games. Last Friday, we had a party. One of the games was called What is it We worked in pairs. The host showed different words. Then one person tried his best to tell the other one the word by using body language, and the other person tried to guess what it was. It was really funny. We made many funny mistakes.
From the game, we knew the importance of body language. So I think improving our body language is really important.
Thank you for listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示,并适当添加细节,注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、承接已给的开头,介绍肢体语言的重要性;
第二步、举例说明肢体语言在日常生活中的应用;
第三步、观点总结。
[亮点词汇]
①body language肢体语言
②in pairs成对
③try one’s best to do sth.尽力做某事
④try to do sth.试着做某事
[高分句型]
①I think it’s important to improve our body language because everyone knows that body language is very useful.(because引导原因状语从句;that引导宾语从句)
1.以“Music and Communication in My Life”为题,写一篇短文,描述音乐和交流在你生活中的作用,以及你遇到的相关经历,词数60词左右。
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【答案】例文:
Music and Communication in My Life
Music and communication are both important in my life. Music cheers me up when I’m sad. Soft music makes me relaxed, and energetic music makes me excited.
Communication helps me share my feelings. I often talk with my friends about music. Once, I recommended a song to my friend, and we had a great conversation about its meaning. Through music and communication, I can express myself and get closer to others.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文属于材料作文写作;
②时态:以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:题目要求描述音乐和交流的作用以及相关经历。可叙述音乐如何改变心情,以及沟通是如何帮助分享感受的。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点题,指出音乐和沟通在个人生活中的角色;
第二步,具体阐述音乐如何根据不同的情境调整情绪——无论是使人放松还是让人兴奋;
第三步,进一步说明通过沟通与朋友分享音乐的经历,以及这如何帮助加深彼此之间的关系。最后总结音乐和沟通对个人生活的积极影响。
[亮点词汇]
①cheer sb up让某人振作起来
②make sb relaxed使某人放松
③energetic music充满活力的音乐
④share my feelings分享我的感受
⑤recommend a song推荐一首歌
[高分句型]
①Music cheers me up when I’m sad.(when引导的时间状语从句)
②Once, I recommended a song to my friend, and we had a great conversation about its meaning. (并列句)
③Through music and communication, I can express myself and get closer to others. (介词短语作为方式状语)
Unit 3单元话题
1.助人为乐是一种美好的品格。校学生会计划在新学期倡议全体师生在生活中实践助人之举。假如你是吴飞,请代表校学生会写一份不少于50词的倡议书,呼吁全体师生尽己所能,帮助他人。
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【答案】例文
Dear teachers and students,
Helping others is a beautiful virtue. As the new semester begins, the Student Council encourages everyone to practise acts of kindness in our daily lives. Whether it’s helping a classmate with his/her studies or simply offering a smile, every small act counts. For example, you can help a fellow student carry his/her books. You can also do volunteer work in your community. Let’s work together to create a supportive and caring environment.
Sincerely,
Wu Fei
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是话题作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,应注意不要遗漏提示的要点,在每个要点下要适当增加细节,使表述内容更完整。
[写作步骤]
第一步,作文开头直接点题——帮助他人是一种美德;
第二步,从身边小事做起,践行助人美德;
第三步,总结上文,呼吁大家一起创造关心和友爱的环境。
[亮点词汇]
①encourage sb to do sth鼓励某人做某事
②in our daily lives在我们的日常生活中
③for example例如
[高分句型]
①As the new semester begins, the Student Council encourages everyone to practise acts of kindness in our daily lives.(as引导时间状语从句)
②Whether it’s helping a classmate with his/her studies or simply offering a smile, every small act counts. (whether引导让步状语从句)
1.Write a passage in at least 50 words about your experience of receiving help from others (请写一篇不少于50词的短文,讲述你接受他人帮助的经历,标点符号不占格)
以下问题供参考:
● What happened to you
● When did it happen
● How did he/she help you
● How did you feel
(注意:照抄阅读语篇不得分)
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【答案】例文
There was a time when I was deeply touched by the kindness of a stranger. It was a rainy day and I was rushing to catch a bus. In my haste, I slipped and fell, scattering my books and belongings all over the wet ground.
Just as I was feeling embarrassed and frustrated, a kind lady came to my rescue. She helped me pick up my things and even offered me a handkerchief to wipe the mud off my clothes. She asked if I was okay and stayed with me until the bus arrived.
I was so grateful for her help. Her act of kindness not only made my day but also reminded me of the goodness in the world. From that day on. I have been more aware of the opportunities to help others, just as I was helped when I needed it most.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般过去时”;
③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作,不能遗漏信息,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,整体说明接受帮助的经历;
第二步,具体阐述事件发生的时间、经过以及对方的帮助方式;
第三步,最后表达自己的感受或感悟。
[亮点词汇]
① help sb do sth 帮助某人做某事
② offer sb sth 提供某人某物
③ remind sb of sth 提醒某人某事
[高分句型]
She asked if I was okay and stayed with me until the bus arrived.(宾语从句)
1.Write at least 60 words on the topic “Happiness from helping others”, using the following questions for reference. (请根据提示问题,以“帮助他人的快乐”为题,写一篇短文,不少于60个词,标点符号不占格。)
Suggested questions:
(1)Do you often help others
(2)What do you usually do to help others
(3)How do you feel when you help others
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【答案】例文
Happiness from helping others
I enjoy helping others and I often help people in need. At home, I usually help my mother do housework, such as sweeping the floor, doing some washing and so on. At school, I usually help my teachers hand out the papers. What’s more, I often help with my classmates to solve math problems.
I feel happy after helping others. I will keep helping others and pass the spirit of helping others to everyone around me.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己是否经常帮助别人以及通常帮助别人做什么;
第二步,介绍自己帮助别人的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①help sb do sth帮助某人做某事
②in need需要
③such as例如
[高分句型]
①I often help with my classmates to solve math problems(动词不定式作宾补)
②I will keep helping others and pass the spirit of helping others to everyone around me(动名词作宾语)
1.假如你是李华,热爱志愿者活动,每周末都会去敬老院看望老人。请你根据下列提示,以 “Being a volunteer is great”为题,用英语写一篇80词左右的短文,讲述你上周末的志愿者服务经历。可适当发挥。
提示:1. What did you do as a volunteer last week
2. How did you feel after that
Being a volunteer is great
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【答案】例文:
Being a volunteer is great
It’s great to be a volunteer and help others.
Last Sunday, my class went to the old people’s home. As soon as we got there, we started to help with some things. First, we cleaned the old people’s rooms and did some washing. Then, some of us read the newspaper to the old people, and others sang songs to cheer them up. After that, we helped repair some broken things. Real happiness comes from helping others. When I saw the old people laugh happily, I had a strong feeling of satisfaction.
We hope our volunteer work can make a difference to more people.
【详解】1.题干解读:该题目属于记叙文写作。在写作时应注意文章的段落安排,第一段点明主旨;第二段根据提示要描述具体做的事情和做完事情的感受;第三段结尾。
2.写作指导:本文应该用第一人称we来描述,写作时要注意第二段描写做的具体事情时采用一般过去时;注意描述多个事情时要有逻辑,最好加上逻辑词,例如First, Second, Then, Finally等,保证条理清晰。
1.Write at least 60 words on the topic “________ gave me help”. (以“ ________ 给了我帮助”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格。在阅读理解E篇中,Tom在父母的帮助下解决了问题。当你在生活、学习中遇到困难或问题时,你获得了谁的帮助?请描述一次你遇到困难或问题时获得他人帮助的经历。
注意:
1. 请先将标题补充完整。
2. 短文中不得出现考生姓名、校名等个人信息,否则不予评分。
3. 照抄本卷语篇,不得分。
________ gave me help
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【答案】例文:
My English teacher gave me help
At the beginning of the seventh grade, I had many problems in learning English. After my English teacher Ms Liu knew about it, she helped me read the words for 20 minutes after school every day. She was also patient to correct my pronunciation. Besides, she encouraged me to answer questions and speak English in class. With the help of the teacher, my English improved a lot in the final exam. I thanked her a lot.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
②时态:时态为“一般过去时”;
③提示:先补全题目,再围绕自己被帮助的经历展开写作。注意表达正确、条理清晰。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍我遇到的困难;
第二步,介绍英语老师是如何帮助我的;
第三步,表达对英语老师的感谢。
[亮点词汇]
①have problems in doing sth做某事有问题
②be patient to do sth有耐心做某事
③with the help of sb在某人的帮助之下
④improve a lot提升很多
[高分句型]
After my English teacher Ms Liu knew about it, she helped me read the words for 20 minutes after school every day. (after引导时间状语从句)
1.Write at least 60 words about the topic “How to help others”(以“如何帮助别人”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格。)
Use the following points as a guide (短文须包含下列要点)
1. When you are in trouble, who helps you
2. When someone is in trouble, how should you do
3. What should you do if they can’t pay for school things or living things
4. What do you think to help others
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【答案】例文
How to help others
Everyone has trouble in their daily life. When I do badly in my study or have some difficulties in my life, I always get help from my parents or my friends. It can’t be imagined what my life will be like without their help. So when my friends are in trouble, I’ll try my best to help them. Some of my friends are poor and sometimes they are sad because they can’t afford to buy school things or living things. I’ll lend them some money and do something to help them get through. And when they are unhappy because of the bad score, I’ll talk to them, encourage them to be brave and never give up, or maybe I’ll go shopping, take a walk or watch films with them. By doing this, they can relax themselves and be happy again.
I think helping others is a very important thing. It can be not only good for others but also helpful for myself, too.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,可适当发挥,以使行文连贯,注意要点齐全,表述完整。
[写作步骤]
第一步,以“每个人日常生活中都会遇到困难”引出话题;
第二步,介绍自己处于困难,是谁帮助度过困难的及别人遇到困难,你又做什么去帮助他们;
第三步,表达自己的感受,表达帮助别人不仅对他人有好处也对自己有好处。
[亮点词汇]
①be in trouble陷入困境
②get through度过
③take a walk散步
④give up放弃
[高分句型]
①When I do badly in my study or have some difficulties in my life, I always get help from my parents or my friends.(when引导时间状语从句)
②Some of my friends are poor and sometimes they are sad because they can’t afford to buy school things or living things.(because引导原因状语从句)
③I think helping others is a very important thing.(省略that的宾语从句,动名词作主语)
1.Write at least 60 words on the topic“A volunteer labor”(以“一次公益劳动”为题,写一篇至少60个单词的短文。标点符号不占格)
劳动教育(Labor Education) 已经纳入国家课程方案,它包含日常生活劳动、农业生产劳动和服务性劳动。在生活中,学生通过劳动,养成吃苦耐劳的品质,培养合作共享的精神,形成助人为乐、服务他人和服务社会的公益精神。请你以“一次公益劳动(A volunteer labor)”为题,结合自身的经历谈谈自己对公益劳动的看法。文中不得出现真实的校名和姓名。
以下问题供参考:
Suggested questions:
What do you think of the volunteer labor
Why do you think so (结合自身经历说明)
What have you learned from it
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【答案】例文
A Volunteer Labor
Volunteer labor is very helpful for us, it not only makes us become independent, but also learn teamwork.
On April 28th, my classmates and I went to the park near my school where we took part in a volunteer labor. We got there at nine o’clock. After divided into three groups, we began to work. Each group had their own tasks. Group one planted trees and watered flowers. Group two picked up litter left by tourists and cleaned the benches. My group wiped all the equipment in Children’s Playground. Each of us worked hard.  
At about half past eleven, we finished working. Though we were tired, we were happy. It was a meaningful day for us because we had done a good deed.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文。
②时态:时态为“一般过去时”。
③提示:文章为第一人称,介绍自己参加的一次公益活动,并提出自己的看法。适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,说明公益活动的好处;
第二步,具体介绍自己参加的公益活动,做了哪些事情;
第三步,总结并表明自己对这次活动的看法。
[亮点词汇]
① not only...but also不仅……而且
② took part in参加
③ divided into分成
④ picked up litter捡垃圾
⑤ be helpful for对有益
[高分句型]
①On April 28th, my classmates and I went to the park near my school where we took part in a volunteer labor.(定语从句)
②It was a meaningful day for us because we had done a good deed.(原因状语从句)

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