Unit 1 Asia 单元写作--2024-2025学年九年级英语下册重点题型精准练 牛津译林版
1．作为2025年春节联欢晚会分会场之一的重庆，一座8D魔幻城市，再一次引起了全国人民的关注，甚至火到了国外。你的英国笔友Sam写信来想让你给他介绍一下重庆这座城市，请根据以下信息提示写一封回信。
写作要求：
1. 条理清晰，字迹工整，词数不少于80~120；
2. 开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 文中不得出现真实人名和学校等相关信息。
参考信息如下：
Dear Sam,
Thank you for your letter and I am glad to introduce my hometown, Chongqing, to you. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Lin Dan
2．假设你是李华，你的英国好友 Peter暑期将来中国游学。请你根据一下相关信息，写一封邮件，向他推荐一个合适的博物馆，并说明理由。
注: the Red Army 红军 craft n. 手工艺品
要求：1. 邮件需包含所选博物馆至少两点相关信息，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；
3. 词数100左右，邮件的首尾和第一句已给出，不计入总词数.
Dear Peter,
I’m happy to know that you are interested in Chinese museums. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3．2025年1月，随着TikTok在海外进入关闭倒计时，大量外国网友涌入中文社交软件“小红书 (Red Note)”，自称是“TikTok refugee (难民)”。许多中国网友纷纷表示欢迎，并热情地向外国朋友介绍中国的风土人情。
假设你是李华，是一名深圳的中学生，也是一位小红书博主。请你发布一条vlog并配解说，向他们介绍“小红书”的用途，并向外国朋友推荐深圳的美景美食。
要求：
1.80词左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯、条理清晰。
提示词： recommend 推荐 set up an account 建立账户 encyclopaedia 百科全书
Dear TikTok refugees,
This is Li Hua from Shenzhen.
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Welcome again. Hope you have fun in Shenzhen, have fun in Red Note!
4．假定你是李华，下周你的英国朋友Alan要来湖南游玩，并发来如下邮件。请给Alan回复一封邮件。
Hi Li Hua, Next week I’ll be with you in Hunan. I can’t wait! We could do lots of exciting things together. And now I need to pack for my trip. How’s the weather in Hunan What should I bring with me Since I am interested in history and culture of China, I want to know where we will go and know about some places of interest. By the way, can you introduce some special local products to me I’d like to buy some for my family. I’m so excited about the trip! See you soon. Alan
Word bank:
Orange Isle (橘子洲头); Yueyang Tower (岳阳楼);
Hunan embroidery (湘绣); Junshan Silver Needle Tea (君山银针).
Hi Alan,
I’m so happy to get your email saying that you're coming to visit us next week.
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Yours,
Li Hua
5．春节假期期间，各地纷纷向国内外游客发出诚挚邀请。请你为深圳文旅宣传助力，为深圳宣传大片写一份解说词，并邀请各位游客来深圳游玩。
内容提示：
1．深圳位于中国南部，是一座依山傍海的美丽城市；
2．在深圳，你可以：
①前往大梅沙游玩；②游览中华民俗文化村，了解中国各种文化民俗；③观光世界之窗，了解世界景点；④……
要求：
1．包含所有提示内容，可适当发挥；
2．语句通顺，语法正确，行文连贯，书写工整；
3．80词左右（短文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数）。
参考词汇：大梅沙海滩Dameisha Beach；中华民俗文化村Chinese Folk Culture Village；世界之窗Window of the World
Within less than 50 years, a small fishing village turned into one of China’s biggest cities. This is Shenzhen.
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6．假设你是李华，你的英国笔友 Tom 即将在暑假来中国研学旅行。请你根据以下提示给他写一封邮件，帮助他适应在中国的生活。
内容提示：
(1)欢迎他来中国研学旅行；
(2)你的建议：学习一些中国习俗，如使用筷子等；购物时可以使用移动支付；……
(3)你对他的祝福。
要求：
(1)80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数内；
(2)文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
(3)可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连其。
参考词汇：研学旅行 study tour；习俗 customs；筷子chopsticks；移动支付 mobile payment
Dear Tony,
I am so glad that
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I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Lihua
7．榕江自然风光秀美，地方风物独特。近日，榕江县教育部门正在举办主题为“亮出贵州名片，我为家乡代言”的英语征文比赛。请你以“Beautiful ____________ My Hometown” 为题，写一篇约80词的稿件。
要求：
1. 补全标题；
2. 稿件须包含思维导图中至少两条信息；
3. 适当表达自己的看法及感受；
4. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。
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8．现如今外出旅游备受欢迎，淄博，哈尔滨和重庆一度成为旅游热点，但在旅游中我们也时常会看到一些不文明行为。某英文报旅游专栏正以“Traveling in Good Manners”为题，向广大学生征稿，倡导大家文明旅游。假设你是李华，请结合表格内的信息，用英文写一篇短文投稿。
Impolite behaviors Opinions Advice
Throw rubbish everywhere impolite Put…into dustbins
Pick flowers in a park … Put up signs
Speak loudly in public … Make rules
内容包括：
1.简述表格中的不文明行为。(任选其中两个)
2.提出个人观点及建议。
3.倡导文明旅游。
注意：
1.词数80左右。
2.可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
3.文中不能出现真实的人名、地名等信息。
4.文章标题和开头已给出，笔记如总词数。
提示词：tourist attractions (景区)
Traveling in Good Manners
Nowadays traveling is getting more and more popular.
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9．假定你是李华，今年“五一”劳动节期间你打算和父母一起乘飞机去旅游，请以 “My travel plan to Yinchuan”为题写一篇短文。
要求：
1. 80词左右；
2. 短文须包含图中所有信息，并适当拓展；
3. 文中不能出现真实的人名和校名。
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10．假如你叫李华，你们班将在今年暑假参加以“亲近大自然”为主题的户外拓展夏令营。其中包括小组自由活动。请根据下面你设计的小组活动方案写一封电子邮件，发给交换生Mike，告知Mike你所设计的计划。
Morning climb mountains
Noon picnic singing, dancing, tell stories
Afternoon pick fruits
要求：
（1）电子邮件包含计划中所有的活动，并给出理由；
（2）邮件不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名；
（3）词数80左右（开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Hi there,
We are going for a camp this summer vacation. I’m glad to make a plan for our group.
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We are looking forward to the summer camp because we can forget the busywork at school, and I believe we’ll have a wonderful time.
Li Hua
11．进入信息时代，读书还那么重要吗？有人说“读万卷书不如行万里路”，但是也有人持不同的观点。请你根据下表提示分别阐述这两种意见并发表自己的观点。
Reading Travelling Your own opinion
1．认识世界 1．观光， 游览名胜 ……
2．了解历史 2．体验不同的文化
注意：
(1) 词数80左右 (文章的开头已给出，不计入词数)。
(2) 不得透露学校，姓名等个人信息，否则不予评分。
“It is better to travel ten thousand miles than to read ten thousand books.” This old Chinese saying has caused heated discussions among students. Some people think __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
12．Write a passage according to the information.请根据以下问题提示，结合自己的旅行经验，写一篇文章推荐一个旅游景点。不少于80词。
1.Where have you been so far 2.What do you think is the most interesting place you have been to
3.Where is it 4.What’s the best time to go there
5.What is the typical food there 6.What can you do there
7.How do you like the city
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《Unit 1 Asia 单元写作--2024-2025学年九年级英语下册重点题型精准练 牛津译林版》参考答案
1．例文
Dear Sam,
Thank you for your letter and I am glad to introduce my hometown, Chongqing, to you.
Chongqing, located in the southwest of China, is a city with a rich history of over 3,000 years and diverse culture. Covering an area of 82,400 square kilometers, it is one of the largest municipalities in the country. One of the highlights of Chongqing is its food. The city is famous for its hot pot, a spicy and flavorful dish that is a must-try for visitors. Another popular dish is Chongqing noodles, which are known for their rich and savory taste. Chongqing is also home to many interesting places to visit, such as Chaotianmen, Jiefangbei, Ciqikou, and so on. The weather in Chongqing is characterized by hot summers and cold winters.
Yours,
Lin Dan
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出主题，介绍重庆；
第二步，根据图片提示，细节介绍重庆。
[亮点词汇]
①located in位于
②diverse多种多样的
③is famous for因为……而出名
[高分句型]
The city is famous for its hot pot, a spicy and flavorful dish that is a must-try for visitors.（定语从句）
2．范文：
Dear Peter,
I’m happy to know that you are interested in Chinese museums. As your friend and a native Chinese, I’d like to recommend a museum that I believe would be perfect for your visit.
Between the two options, I highly recommend the museum located in the city center. This museum offers a fascinating glimpse into ancient China, showcasing a wide array of artifacts and relics from various historical periods. You’ll have the opportunity to see items that reflect the daily life, culture, and technology of our ancestors. What’s more, it features an exhibit dedicated to the story of the Red Army, providing a deep understanding of China’s revolutionary history and the sacrifices made by countless heroes.
Visiting this museum will not only enrich your knowledge about China’s past but also allow you to appreciate the resilience and bravery of the Chinese people. The exhibits are well-preserved and presented in a way that makes history come alive. Additionally, the museum is centrally located, making it easily accessible via public transportation or even a short walk if you’re staying nearby.
I hope you’ll find my recommendation helpful. If you have any other questions about your trip or need further suggestions, please don’t hesitate to ask. I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon and welcoming you to China!
Best regards,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一封邮件，向朋友推荐一个适合参观的博物馆。
② 时态：文章使用“一般现在时”描述博物馆的特点和推荐的理由。
③ 提示：根据要求，介绍博物馆的特点并说明为什么适合推荐给Peter。邮件结构清晰，内容有条理，最后表达期待与欢迎。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简要回应Peter并表达高兴；
第二步，推荐博物馆，并阐述它的优势，如历史背景、展品和位置；
第三步，补充推荐的理由，特别是它能带来的历史体验和文化收获；
第四步，提出希望Peter能找到有用的信息，鼓励他继续提问，并期待见面。
[亮点词汇]
① be interested in 对……感兴趣
② not only...but also... 不但……而且……
③ look forward to 盼望
④ hear from 收到……来信
[高分句型]
① I’d like to recommend a museum that I believe would be perfect for your visit. (定语从句)
② Additionally, the museum is centrally located, making it easily accessible via public transportation or even a short walk if you’re staying nearby.(条件状语从句)
③ I hope you’ll find my recommendation helpful. (宾语从句)
3．例文：
Dear TikTok refugees,
This is Li Hua from shenzhen. Welcome to Red Note, a popular social platform where you can discover a world of creativity and sharing!
On Red Note, you’ll find tips on fashion, travel, knowledge of different fields and so on. It’s like an encyclopaedia, where you can get answers and solutions of anything you are dealing with. In the meanwhile, Red Note is also a place where you can share your life moments and something special that you want to recommend. So quickly set up an account on Red Note.
Speaking of recommendation, let me tell you about my hometown, Shenzhen. Shenzhen is a bustling city with stunning skyscrapers and beautiful parks. Don’t miss the opportunity to visit a series of parks along the Shenzhen Bay, where you can enjoy breathtaking views of the sunrise and you can also take a ride along the coast. When it comes to food, you must try our Dim Sum and the coconut chicken. Trust me, you’ll not only satisfy your taste buds but also enjoy Cantonese culture through these food. Now, you can grab a cup of coffee, sit back and explore Red Note. And if you plan to visit Shenzhen, I’d love to show you around!
Welcome again. Hope you have fun in Shenzhen, have fun in Red Note!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏信息，考生结合自身经历，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己并欢迎外国朋友来到小红书；
第二步，介绍小红书的用途并且向外国朋友推荐深圳的美景美食；
第三步，最后再次表示欢迎和祝福。
[亮点词汇]
①when it comes to…当提到……
②show you around带你们参观
③have fun玩得开心
[高分句型]
①It’s like an encyclopaedia, where you can get answers and solutions of anything you are dealing with. (where引导的定语从句)
②And if you plan to visit Shenzhen, I’d love to show you around! (if引导的条件状语从句)
4．例文
Hi Alan,
I’m so happy to get your email saying that you’re coming to visit us next week.
The weather in Hunan is usually quite warm this time of the year, so you can bring some light and breathable clothes, like T-shirts. Also, don’t forget to bring your sunglasses and a hat to protect yourself from the sun.
As for the places to visit, we can go to Orange Isle. It’s a very famous scenic spot in Changsha. You can enjoy the beautiful scenery along the Xiangjiang River and see the huge head statue of Chairman Mao. Another great place is Yueyang Tower. It is a historical building with a long-standing reputation. You can learn a lot about Chinese history and culture there.
When it comes to local products, Hunan embroidery is very special. The patterns are delicate and vivid, which can be a wonderful gift for your family. Junshan Silver Needle Tea is also well-known. It has a unique taste and is beneficial to health.
I’m really looking forward to seeing you and showing you around Hunan.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据邮件中的提示内容进行写作，可适当发挥，注意行文连贯，表述清晰。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍湖南的天气及建议对方带的物品；
第二步，介绍参观的景点及当地的特殊产品；
第三步，书写结语，表达期待对方的到来。
[亮点词汇]
①forget to do sth忘记去做某事
②when it comes to当提到……时
③be beneficial to有益于
[高分句型]
①The weather in Hunan is usually quite warm this time of the year, so you can bring some light and breathable clothes, like T-shirts. (so连接的并列句)
②The patterns are delicate and vivid, which can be a wonderful gift for your family. (which引导的非限制性定语从句)
5．例文
Within less than 50 years, a small fishing village turned into one of China’s biggest cities. This is Shenzhen.
Shenzhen is a beautiful city by the sea and mountains. It lies in the south of China. There are so many places of interest to visit. Shenzhen is also famous for its wonderful beaches, so you can go swimming in Dameisha. You can visit the Chinese Folk Culture Village to learn about various Chinese cultures and customs. You can visit the Window of the World to learn about the world attractions. In Shenzhen, you can enjoy many different kinds of delicious food, especially seafood and roasted pegeons.
All in all, Shenzhen is a wonderful city. Why not visit Shenzhen this Spring Festival I look forward to your visit!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一份解说词；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、开篇点题，引出话题；
第二步、介绍深圳的地理位置，并给出综合性的评价；
第三步、介绍深圳的景点建筑并书写结语，邀请各位游客来深圳游玩。
[亮点词汇]
①turn into变成
②places of interest名胜古迹
③be famous for…以……而闻名
④different kinds of不同种类的
⑤all in all总而言之
⑥look forward to期待
[高分句型]
①You can visit the Chinese Folk Culture Village to learn about various Chinese cultures and customs.(不定式作目的状语)
6．Dear Tom,
I am so glad that you are going to have a study tour in China this summer holiday. To help you adapt to life here, I have some advice for you.
First, you can learn some Chinese customs, such as how to use chopsticks, how to greet people and so on. Second, when you shop, you can pay with mobile payment. Besides, the traffic rules are different from those in the UK. The drivers drive on the right side of the road, so when you cross the road, you should look left first. I hope that you can have a good time in China.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并结合要点进行适当的发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，欢迎他来中国进行研学旅行；
第二步，具体介绍给他的一些建议；
第三步，表达对他的祝福。
[亮点词汇]
①and so on等等
②be different from与……不同
③have a good time玩得开心
④look forward to期盼
[高分句型]
①To help you adapt to life here, I have some advice for you. (不定式作目的状语)
②I hope that you can have a good time in China. (that引导宾语从句)
7．例文
Beautiful Rongjiang, My Hometown
My hometown Rongjiang lies in the east of Guizhou. It is a place with a long history. There are many places of interest in Rongjiang. When you climb Mount Kongming, you can enjoy the sea of clouds and the mushroom stones. Ruili River is so clean that you can see a lot of fish in it. Besides, the food in Rongjiang is quite delicious, such as yupijuan and suantangniurou. What’s more, the local people are warm-hearted and friendly. Rongjiang has colorful customs and traditional festivals. These customs and festivals not only enrich the cultural life of Rongjiang, but also show the local residents’ respect for traditional culture and pursuit of a better life.
My hometown is a beautiful place and I love it. Welcome to visit Rongjiang!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点应注意题干给出的“介绍自己的家乡”并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的家乡，以及其地理位置等信息；
第二步，根据题干中思维导图的要点，详细介绍家乡的食物，风景名胜以及习俗等信息；
第三步，表达欢迎大家前来家乡游玩，并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①lie in位于
②there be有
[高分句型]
①When you climb Mount Kongming, you can enjoy the sea of clouds and the mushroom stones.（时间状语从句）
②Ruili River is so clean that you can see a lot of fish in it.（so…that引导结果状语从句）
8．例文
Traveling in Good Manners
Nowadays traveling is getting more and more popular. But we can often see some impolite behaviors during traveling. For example, some people throw rubbish everywhere when traveling in tourist attractions. It’s really impolite. They should put rubbish into dustbins. Besides, there are some people picking flowers in a park just because they think the flowers are beautiful. They are rude and selfish. We can put up signs to remind those people not to do that.
In my opinion, we should travel in good manners so that we can better enjoy the beauty of the world.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏表格中信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。重点介绍两个不文明行为；
第三步，介绍个人观点与建议；
第四步，书写结语，倡导文明旅游。
[亮点词汇]
①for example例如
②selfish自私
③so that以便
[高分句型]
①For example, some people throw rubbish everywhere when traveling in tourist attractions. (时间状语从句)
②In my opinion, we should travel in good manners so that we can better enjoy the beauty of the world. (目的状语从句)
9．例文
My travel plan to Yinchuan
Hello, I’d like to tell you something about my plan. During the Labor Day this year, I plan to travel to Yinchuan by plane with my parents. I feel very excited now. I plan to stay there for three days to visit some places of interest, such as Shuidonggou, Yinchuan Lanshan Park and Shuidonggou Site Museum. These attractions are very famous in Yinchuan and have attracted many visitors every year. Of course, I will taste delicious food. I hope that I can have a good trip there.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为 “一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏提示的相关要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍五一计划；
第二步，介绍将要游玩的景点；
第三步，表达对五一出游的期待。
[亮点词汇]
①would like to do sth想要做某事
②plan to打算做某事
③places of interest名胜古迹
④such as例如
[高分句型]
①I hope that I can have a good trip there.(that引导的宾语从句)
10．例文
Hi there,
We are going for a camp this summer vacation. I’m glad to make a plan for our group.
First of all, we plan to climb mountains in the morning so that we can enjoy fresh air and watch beautiful sunrise. It’s also a great way to improve our physical fitness. At noon, we’ll have a picnic. We can share our food. We can enjoy ourselves by singing dancing and telling stories. We can develop our English speaking and communication skills. In the afternoon, we’ll have a fruit-picking competition between boys and girls, which will help us know each other better.
We are looking forward to the summer camp because we can forget the busywork at school, and I believe we’ll have a wonderful time.
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般将来时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏表格中给出的关键信息，从上午、中午和下午三个时间段来指定夏令营活动计划。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，指定夏令营计划；
第二步，详述自己的计划；
第三步，收尾，相信会玩得愉快。
[亮点词汇]
①first of all 首先
②enjoy oneself 玩得愉快
③each other 彼此，相互
[高分句型]
①First of all, we plan to climb mountains in the morning so that we can enjoy fresh air and watch beautiful sunrise.（so that引导目的状语从句）
②In the afternoon, we’ll have a fruit-picking competition between boys and girls, which will help us know each other better.（which引导非限制性定语从句）
11．例文：
“It is better to travel ten thousand miles than to read ten thousand books.” This old Chinese saying has caused heated discussions among students. Some people think we get a lot from books. First, we can read all kinds of books to know how everything works. Second, by reading good books, we can understand the world better. Third, books make us learn more about history and make us full of different thoughts.
However, somer people prefer to travel outside. Through sightseeing and visiting places of interest, we can understand the world better. It is necessary for us to open our eyes to feel different cultures. Travelling is another way to stay relaxed. Besides, getting in touch with more people can improve our communicating skills.
In my opinion, both of them are good for us. If we want to feel the real world , try travelling.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏表格中信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，说明同意阅读的学生的意见；
第二步，说明同意旅行的学生的意见；
第三步，说明自己的意见。
[亮点词汇]
①prefer更喜欢
②sightseeing观光旅游
③improve提高，改善
[高分句型]
①It is necessary for us to open our eyes to feel different cultures. (it作形式主语)
②Besides, getting in touch with more people can improve our communicating skills. (动名词作主语)
12．例文
I have been to Dali and Huangshan so far. The most interesting place I’ve been to is Huangshan, Anhui. It is a city in southern Anhui. It is very beautiful. The best time to go there is in autumn or spring because the weather is neither too hot nor too cold. It doesn’t rain very often. One of the most popular things to eat in Huangshan is Mao Toufu. It smells bad but it is actually very delicious. We can not only climb Mount Huangshan, but we can also visit the old Xidi and Hongcun villages. The villages can teach us how people lived in the past.
All in all, I like the city very much.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据提示问题推荐一个旅游景点，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己去过哪里以及最有趣的地方是哪里；
第二步，介绍它的位置、最佳参观时间、典型食物以及在那里可以做什么；
第三步，表达自己的喜爱之情。
[亮点词汇]
①neither...nor既不……也不
②not only...but also不但……而且
③all in all总的来说
[高分句型]
①The most interesting place I’ve been to is Huangshan, Anhui. (定语从句)
②The best time to go there is in autumn or spring because the weather is neither too hot nor too cold. (because引导的原因状语从句)
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