2024年人教版英语中考一轮复习写作指导
话题10　居住环境
话题项目 居住环境;情感与情绪;休闲娱乐
教材链接 八年级(上)Unit 1 Where did you go on vacation 八年级(上)Unit 4 What’s the best movie theater 八年级(下)Unit 3 Could you please clean your room 八年级(下)Unit 7 What’s the highest mountain in the world 八年级(下)Unit 9 Have you ever been to a museum 九年级Unit 3 Could you please tell me where the restrooms are
词句技能磨炼　
一、短语集锦
1.改变很大
2.过去曾经
3.一个学习的好地方
4.发生
5.在过去的几年
6.有很大改善
7.看到了许多变化
8.整洁干净
9.肮脏拥挤
10.一个……的象征
11.一个快乐的童年
12.在……对面
13.在……中间
14.(时间)逝去
15.在……(两者)之间
二、句式练习(用所给句子结构造句)
1.There is…near my house.

2.Next to the hotel is a…with an interesting garden.

3.My hometown lies in the…of…

4.On the top of the mountain stands a(n)…

5.These years, great changes have taken place in…

6.My hometown is famous for…

三、合扩升技能训练
1.There is a library. I often study here.(用定语从句合句)
合:
2.My hometown is beautiful now and many people come to visit it every day. (用 so…that…合句)
合:
3.Welcome to my hometown. (用 if you want和非限制性定语从句扩句)
扩:
4.My hometown is beautiful and clean now. (添加具体信息扩句)
扩:
5.There are famous hot pots and many other delicious food. (用 It’s famous for升句)
升:
6.It was dirty everywhere. (用 There used to be举例升句)
升:
四、美句储备
1.East or west, home is the best.
2.Chongqing is located in the southwestern part of China.
3.Home is where the heart is.
4.Our city isn’t as/so crowded as before.
5.My hometown is a magic land of beautiful sights, delicious food and kind/friendly people.
实战演练　
家乡是我们每个人出发的地方,不管离开多久,我们始终忘记不了家乡带给我们的感情。请你用英文介绍你家乡的特点以及近年来的变化,表达你对家乡的爱。
要求:词数在80~120,文中不得出现自己的学校和真实姓名。
参考信息:1.介绍家乡的特点;
2.介绍家乡的变化;
3.表达你对家乡的爱;
4.……
【演练技巧】
一、审
审主题
审文体
审人称
审时态
二、列(结构、内容)
Para.1 Beginning 特点 ①There are…in my hometown .
②
Para.2 Body 变化 ①My hometown has changed…
②
③
Para.3 Ending 爱 ①All in all, …
②
③
④
成果精练　
及格篇(三档)
In my heart, my hometown is a beautiful place. It’s Chongqing. There are hot pots and many delicious food. And there are a lot of beautiful parks and mountains.
Things are different nowadays. It was dirty and crowded in the past. People there had a hard life. But now the street is clean and nice. There are many beautiful parks and shops so people can go different places to have fun.
My hometown is the best place in the world. I love my hometown and I want it to become better.
升级篇(四档、五档范例)
Every time when I come across the word “hometown”, a beautiful village appears in front of my eyes. Its name is Chongqing. It’s famous for the hot pot and Chongqing noodles which are welcomed by many people. It’s a city located in the southwestern part of China. There are also many mountains, that’s why it is known as the “Mountain City”.As one of the largest cities with a population of over 30 million people in China, Chongqing has a rich history and culture.
Many changes have taken place here. There used to be much rubbish in the street and in the river, and there was no place to have fun. While nowadays, people in my hometown have become increasingly aware of the importance of environmental protection. It’s clean and more beautiful.
As the saying goes, “East or west, home is the best.” Nothing can be compared with my hometown. If you want to take a trip,Chongqing is a good choice for you.With its rich history, breathtaking scenery, and delicious food, it is a great place to visit and explore.Whether you are a history buff, a nature lover, or a foodie,Chongqing will surely leave you with unforgettable memories.
参考答案
【词句技能磨炼】
一、1.change greatly　2.used to be　3.a good place to study
4.take place　5.in the past few years　6.improve a lot
7.see many changes　8.clean and tidy　9.dirty and crowded
10.a symbol of　11.a happy childhood　12.be across from
13.in the middle of　14.go by　15.between…and…
二、1.There is a park near my house.
2.Next to the hotel is a small house with an interesting garden.
3.My hometown lies in the south of Chongqing.
4.On the top of the mountain stands an old temple.
5.These years, great changes have taken place in my neighborhood.
6.My hometown is famous for Chongqing Hot Pot.
三、1.合:There is a library where I often study.
2.合:My hometown is so beautiful now that many people come to visit it every day.
3.扩:If you want to take a trip, welcome to my hometown, which is a good choice for you.
4.扩:My hometown is beautiful and clean now. You can smell the clean air and see many beautiful parks here.
5.升:It’s famous for the hot pot and many other delicious food which are welcomed by many people.
6.升:There used to be dirty rivers and a lot of rubbish.
【实战演练】
一、环境与变化; 说明文; 第一人称; 一般现在时、一般过去时、现在完成时
二、②There are also many mountains.; ②There used to be much rubbish in the street and in the river, and there was no place to have fun.③Howadays, people in my hometown have become increasingly aware of the importance of environmental protection.; ②As the saying goes, “East or west, home is the best.” ③Nothing can be compared with my hometown. ④If you want to take a trip, Chongqing is a good choice for you.

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