期末专题复习-书面表达 2023-2024学年 外研版 九年级上学期期末真题备考 （含答案解析）
1．“低碳生活”代表一种更自然，更健康的生活方式。如今“低碳生活”理念已经深入人心，在校园里，创建“低碳校园”已经成为了广大师生的共同心愿。请你根据以下提示，写一篇以“Lower Carbon, Happier Life”为主题的英语短文。
提示：
（1）List some environmental problems;
（2）What should you do to deal with these problems
（3）…
要求：
（1）短文须包含所有提示内容，可适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
（3）词数80个左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Lower Carbon, Happier Life
We are facing many environmental problems now.
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Lower carbon, happier life. Let’s take actions.
2．亲爱的同学，初中的英语学习中，英语教材给我们提供了大量寓教于乐、生动活泼的阅读素材，伴随我们成长。请以“English Textbooks are My Good Friends”为题写一篇短文参加学校的英语作文竞赛。
1. 内容要点：
(1)Why do you like reading English textbooks
(2)What have you learned in English textbooks
(3)Who is your favorite person in English textbooks and why do you like him or her
2. 写作要求：
(1)文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。
(2)文章必须包含以上三个内容要点。
(3)词数80词左右。（开头已给出，不计入总词数）
English Textbooks are My Good Friends
English textbooks play an important part in our study of English.
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3．非常时期，免疫力成为人们关注的焦点。请根据以下提示，写一篇我校校医发给同学们的温馨提示。内容包括：
注意休息：不要熬夜，每天保证七个小时以上的睡眠时间；
适当锻炼：进行体育锻炼，每天至少锻炼半个小时；
健康饮食：多吃富含维生素C（Vitamin C）的新鲜蔬菜和水果，不吃垃圾食品。
要求：字迹工整，语法正确，信息齐全，不少于5句话，40词左右。（开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数）
Dear students,
In order to keep us healthy, we propose (提出) the following suggestions.
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In short, let’s pay attention to our health together.
4．为了迎接即将到来的新年，校报决定组织一次以“做新时代好少年”为主题的征文活动。号召大家争做新时代的好少年，塑造健康的心理，打造强健的体魄。请结合本卷中完形填空第一篇的内容和阅读理解D，以及自己的实际情况，说说怎样才能做好一个心理和身体都健康的好少年。
写作要点：
What are we supposed to do
What are we supposed not to do
要求：
1. 短文应包括提示中列有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；
3. 词数不少于80，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
As we all know, to be healthy is important. We should build both healthy mind and strong body. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
5．青少年在成长过程中总会遇到各种各样的问题。假设你是林涛，请你用英语给你校学生成长网站编辑Sam写一封信，告诉他你的遇到过问题以及解决这些问题的途径。
写作要点：
1.你遇到的一种或几种问题(可参看上面图示)；
2.你解决这些问题的途径。
要求：
1.短文应围绕所选的问题进行描述，可适当发挥；
2.80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名等相关信息。
参考词汇：for example used to carefully advice/suggestion
Dear Sam,
As teenagers, we often meet problems in our life. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Lin Tao
6．请根据以下的介绍及提示写一篇英语短文。
Liu Yu is a middle school student and he wants to be a professional runner when he grows up.
Do you think he should be allowed to practice his hobby as much as he wants Why or why not
If you were Liu Yu, what would you do
要求：
1. 语句通顺，条理清晰，恰当使用连词，内容可适当发挥。
2. 不少于80词。
3. 不得透露考生姓名、学校、教师等信息。
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7．一场波及全球的疫情，让人们深深地懂得了生命的价值。作为中学生，我们更应该懂得珍爱我们年轻的生命。请你根据以下信息写一封以“Treasure Our Lives”为题的倡议书。
要点：
1.遵守交通规则，注意食品安全；
2.交友谨慎，不沉迷于手机及游戏；
3.倡议：拥有快乐、健康的生活方式……
要求：字迹工整，语法正确，信息齐全，不少于5句话，不少于40词。
Treasure Our Lives
Dear friends,
Each person only lives once, so we must treasure our lives. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Li Hua
8．假如你的美国朋友John受邀到王平家做客，由于这是他第一次到中国家庭做客，John 来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他写一封回信，内容包括：visiting time；giving presents；greeting people；table manners...
要求： 1.不少于40词；
2.字迹工整，语法正确，信息齐全；
3.可以适当增加细节，使内容充实，行文连贯；
4.建议信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear John,
I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to visit a Chinese family. Here are a few suggestions. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Xiang
9．同学们，你们正处于初三的冲刺阶段，时间对每个人来说都是宝贵的，Jack 最近迷上手机游戏，经常玩到深夜，睡眠不足，不能认真听课，导致成绩下降。他的妈妈很生气，不再让他使用手机。假如你是他的朋友 Tina，请你写一封信给他，建议他要合理使用手机，如查阅资料，记单词等。同时，考试在即，要主动去与父母和老师沟通，得到他们的帮助。
要求：
1、短文中不得出现真实的人名、地名、校名。
2、包含所给要点，语言流畅，意思连贯，适当拓展；词数 80 词左右。（开头已给出，不计入总数）。
Dear Jack,
I am sorry to hear that __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Tina
10．新冠肺炎疫情起伏反复，有时学校不得不采取线上授课的方式。对于学生们来说，学会自我管理尤为重要。为此，学校将在本周举行一次线上学习经验交流活动。你是该校的一名学生，请结合自己的实际情况写一篇发言稿，谈谈线上学习期间，学生们应该如何在学习、保持健康和利用时间等方面管理好自己的生活。
要求：
1. 语言表达准确，语义通顺连贯，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名与校名；
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参考答案：
1．例文
Lower Carbon, Happier Life
We are facing many environmental problems now. The environment is becoming worse and worse. There is a lot of rubbish in the river. There is a lot of dust in the air.
It’s our duty to protect the environment. First, we can walk to school and have short trips by bike. Second, we should save water and electricity by turning off the taps and lights in time when we don’t need them. Third, remember to go shopping with cloth bags rather than plastic bags. I believe life will be better and better if we can do these things.
Lower carbon, happier life. Let’s take actions.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：本文的时态为一般现在时；
③提示：本文要点已给出，注意要点衔接顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍一些环境问题；
第二步，应该做什么来处理这些问题；
第三步，结束语，呼吁一起行动。
[亮点词汇]
①worse and worse越来越差
②by turning off the taps通过关水龙头
[高分句型]
①Second, we should save water and electricity by turning off the taps and lights in time when we don’t need them（时间状语从句）
②I believe life will be better and better if we can do these things.（条件状语从句）
2．例文
English Textbooks are My Good Friends
English textbooks play an important part in our study of English. They are good materials for us to learn English well. They can not only open our minds but also make our school life colourful. We’ve learned many wonderful things in our textbooks, which help us get a better understanding of different cultures around the world and grow into an excellent person. Some people we’ve learned influence us a lot. My favorite one is Abing, a great musician, whose Erquan Yingyue is a piece which all the great masters play and praise. I’ve learned a lot from him.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，为议论文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“内容要点”中给出的关键信息，写短文陈述自己的观点“英语课本是我的好朋友”。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍为什么喜欢英语课本；
第二步，介绍在英语课本中学到了什么；
第三步，介绍自己最喜欢的英语课本中的一个人并解释为何喜欢这个人。
[亮点词汇]
①not only ... but also ... 不仅……而且……
②open one’s mind 开放思想
[高分句型]
①We’ve learned many wonderful things in our textbooks, which help us get a better understanding of different cultures around the world and grow into an excellent person.（which引导非限制性定语从句）
②My favorite one is Abing, a great musician, whose Erquan Yingyueis a piece which all the great masters play and praise.（whose引导非限制性定语从句；which引导限制性定语从句）
3．例文
Dear students,
In order to keep us healthy, we propose the following suggestions.
Don’t stay up late. We should sleep at least seven hours every day so that we can have energy to start the next day. What’s more, we should do some exercise. It is good to exercise for more than half an hour every day. Besides, healthy diet is also important. We should eat fresh vegetables and fruit that are rich in Vitamin C. We shouldn’t eat too much junk food.
In short, let’s pay attention to our health together.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据提示内容介绍如何保持健康，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，从睡眠、锻炼和饮食等方面介绍如何保持健康；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①stay up late 熬夜
②at least 至少
③be rich in 富有
[高分句型]
①We should sleep at least seven hours every day so that we can have energy to start the next day. (so that引导的目的状语从句)
②We should eat fresh vegetables and fruit that are rich in Vitamin C. (that引导的定语从句)
4．范文：
As we all know, to be healthy is important. We should build both healthy mind and strong body.
In my opinion, it is especially important to have a healthy mind. So we should read a lot of books so that we can learn something useful and helpful from them. Some traditional arts are also good choices. For example, we can join a club to learn to play Beijing Opera. Maybe we can make a lot of good friends when we are in the club.
We also need to try our best to build a strong body. Because a healthy life is really necessary. In our daily life, we should keep away from junk food such as hamburgers and cola. We are supposed to eat a lot of healthy food like fruit and vegetables. Sports can keep us healthy, so we need to do some sports every day. Running is the most popular way of all but some boys prefer basketball.
Let’s take actions and try to be a healthy person.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意文章要涉及心理健康和身体健康两方面，适当发挥，使上下文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，由于短文开头已给出，故接下来具体介绍如何保持心理健康和身体健康；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。阐述保持心理健康和身体健康的具体方法；
第三步，书写结语。号召大家采取行动，争做身心健康的好少年。
[亮点词汇]
①in my opinion在我看来
②so that以便
③traditional arts传统艺术
④keep away from远离
⑤take actions采取行动
[高分句型]
①In my opinion, it is especially important to have a healthy mind.（it作形式主语）
②So we should read a lot of books so that we can learn something useful and helpful from them.（so that引导的目的状语从句）
③Running is the most popular way of all but some boys prefer basketball.（动名词作主语）
④Let’s take actions and try to be a healthy person.（祈使句）
5．One possible version:
Dear Sam,
As teenagers, we often meet problems in our life. For example, I used to stay up late to finish all my homework. My teacher told me to plan my day carefully and make a list of all the homework I had. Now I can work out how much time I need to finish it every day. Time has proved that the advice is worth taking. There is another example. I don’t have enough time for my hobbies like basketball and music. My parents told me to choose my hobbies according to the time I had. Therefore, I will play basketball if I have a lot of time, and I will listen to music if I only have a short time.
As long as we try hard, there are more ways than problems.
Yours,
Lin Tao
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，可参看上面图示适当补充内容，添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，表明写作意图；
第二步，具体介绍自己遇到的问题，表达自己解决这些问题的途径；
第三步，书写结语，表达感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①For example例如
②used to do sth.过去常常做某事
③stay up late 熬夜
④tell sb. to do sth.告诉某人做某事
⑤work out 弄清楚，搞明白
⑥need to do sth.需要做某事
⑦according to根据
⑧as long as只要
[高分句型]
①Now I can work out how much time I need to finish it every day. (宾语从句)
②Time has proved that the advice is worth taking. (that引导的宾语从句)
③My parents told me to choose my hobbies according to the time I had. (定语从句)
④Therefore, I will play basketball if I have a lot of time, and I will listen to music if I only have a short time.(if引导的条件状语从句)
⑤As long as we try hard, there are more ways than problems.(As long as引导的条件状语从句和there be句型)
6．例文：
In my opinion, Liu Yu, as a middle school student who has a dream of being a professional runner in the future, should be allowed to practice running as much as he wants. The reasons are as follows.
On one hand, everyone has the right to work hard for what he or she dreams to be. Even though he may fail to become a professional runner, he can still learn a lot meanful things from it. The strong will he learns from running my be helpful for his study. On the other hand, for teenagers, starting practising as early as possible is very important in order to be an expert in running earlier.
If I put myself in Liu Yu’s shoes, I would try to practice running hard as well as doing well in my study. I would let my parents and teachers believe that I can balance these two things well.
These are my ideas. And I believe hobbies can bring one pleasure and success. Through practising running, Liu Yu can grow up as an adult.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇议论文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：本文应该主要用第一人称来写，部分需用第三人称；表明观点时，要有说服力；在完成“如果你是刘宇，你会怎么做？”部分时，要条理清晰，有理有据。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头要表明写作意图和立场。支持或反对都可以接受，只要能自圆其说即可；
第二步，表明原因。从好处或坏处的角度讲明道理；
第三步，阐述“如果你是刘宇，你会怎么做？”，并简单结尾。提及“爱好”对一个人成长的意义。
[亮点词汇]
① In my opinion在我看来
② as follows如下
③ as well as和
[高分句型]
① In my opinion, Liu Yu, as a middle school student who has a dream of being a professional runner in the future, should be allowed to practice running as much as he wants.（who引导的定语从句）
② Even though he may fail to become a professional runner, he can still learn a lot meanful things from it.（even though引导的让步状语从句）
7．例文
Treasure Our Lives
Dear friends,
Each person only lives once, so we must treasure our lives. First, we should eat healthy and safe food. Second, when we go out, we must follow the traffic rules. Besides, we must be careful to choose our friends. We shouldn’t play with phones or computer games for a long time.
We’d better live a happy and healthy life. We should study hard to achieve our dreams.
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇倡议书；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，根据下面的提示，以“Treasure Our Lives”为题，写一封倡议书。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出，点名我们要珍惜我们的生命；
第二步，具体阐述我们应该怎么做；
第三步，总结，表明自己对生命的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①go out出门
②be careful to对……小心
③would better to do sth最好做某事
④come true实现
[高分句型]
Second, when we go out, we must follow the traffic rules.（when引导的时间状语从句）
8．例文
Dear John,
I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to visit a Chinese family. Here are a few suggestions.
Your visit should be made about half an hour earlier because Chinese people don’t like being late. At the same time, you should also give the host some small gifts, such as fruit or flowers. When meeting, you should take the invitation to greet them. When you eat, you cannot hit the bowl with chopsticks.
Yours,
Li Xiang
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文；
②时态：时态是一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，按题目要求进行第二段的叙述。
第二步，根据提示内容叙述拜访时间、送礼物、给人们打招呼、餐桌礼仪等建议。
[亮点词汇]
①at the same time 同时
②such as 例如
[高分句型]
①Your visit should be made about half an hour earlier because Chinese people don’t like being late.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②When meeting, you should take the invitation to greet them.（when引导的时间状语从句和非谓语动词的省略）
③When you eat, you cannot hit the bowl with chopsticks. （when引导的时间状语从句）
9．Dear Jack,
I am sorry to hear that you had a fight with your mother about playing games on the cellphone. You spent so much time playing games that you forgot when to sleep and you felt too sleepy and tired to listen to the teachers in class the next day. Because of these, you became poor in your study. And your mother got angry with you.
Firstly, I think you should stop playing games. You can use mobile phone to search for some information, and look up new words. It is a useful tool in your study. Secondly, you need to communicate with your parents and teachers, and let them know your problems. They will help you. At the same time, they will forgive you for your mistakes.
I hope my suggestions are of great value to you.
Yours,
Tina
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为信件；
②时态：一般现在时和一般过去时；
③提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意结合具体语境使用正确的时态，适当拓展，使上下文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，指出Jack沉迷手机游戏的不良后果；
第二步，具体阐述你的建议；
第三步，书写结语，表达希望你的建议对他的价值。
[亮点词汇]
①spend some time doing sth.花费多长时间做某事
②because of因为
③get angry with sb.生某人的气
④Firstly...Secondly...第一……第二……
⑤stop doing sth.停止做某事
⑥search for搜索
⑦look up查阅
⑧communicate with sb.和某人沟通
[高分句型]
①You spent so much time playing games that you forgot when to sleep and you felt too sleepy and tired to listen to the teachers in class the next day.（so...that引导的结果状语从句）
②Firstly, I think you should stop playing games.（省略that的宾语从句）
③I hope my suggestions are of great value to you.（省略that的宾语从句）
10．例文：
Good morning, everyone!
As we all know, COVID-19 has much influence on our life. Sometimes we have to study online at home. But do you know how to be in control of our own life I’d like to discuss this important topic with you.
To study well, we should listen to the teachers carefully and take notes although there are no teachers beside us. And when having problems, ask teachers for help right away. Also, it’s important to keep healthy. We could take a walk after dinner in the living room or run in the park outside if possible. Last but not least, put our time into good use. We’d better make our own detailed plans to put every minute into use. And as we stay at home, we will have more opportunities to spend time reading more books.
All in all, we should learn to control ourselves. Then we can get good grades by working hard. At the same time we can improve our health, too. Thanks for your listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头引出本文主题；
第二步，就学生们应该如何在学习、保持健康和利用时间等方面管理自己的生活提出自己的想法。
[亮点词汇]
①as we all know众所周知
②have influence on对……有影响
③study online在线学习
④put time into good use好好利用时间
⑤all in all总而言之
[高分句型]
①But do you know how to be in control of our own life （“疑问词+动词不定式”结构）
②To study well, we should listen to the teachers carefully and take notes although there are no teachers beside us.（although引导让步状语从句）

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