书面表达 专项训练
假定你是李华，你校英语社团计划创建一个英文公众号 (English official account)。请你给社团负责人Ryan写信推荐一个栏目，内容包括：
1. 栏目名称；
2. 栏目内容；
3. 推荐理由。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan,
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Yours,
Li Hua
假定你是李华，你校太极拳俱乐部正在招募新成员。外教Adam对中国传统文化很感兴趣，你想邀请他加入。请你用英语给他写一封邮件，向他发出邀请。内容包括：
1. 写信目的；
2. 简要介绍打太极拳的好处和俱乐部的活动；
3. 请他在本周六前答复。
写作要求：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇： 招募 recruit 太极 tai chi
Dear Adam,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
假定你是李华，你校英语报正在举办“The scientist I admire most”征文活动。请你用英语写一篇文章投稿，内容包括：
1. 概述我最敬佩的科学家；
2. 他/她的杰出事迹；
3. 我敬佩他/她的理由及他/她对我的影响。
注意：
1. 词数不少于 80 字；
2. 可适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯
The scientist I admire most
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假定你是李华, 你的澳大利亚笔友Tom对中国美食很感兴趣, 打算在间隔年（gap year)期间学做中国美食, 他写信向你征询建议。请你给他回信, 内容包括：
1. 推荐美食；
2. 说明理由；
3. 表达祝愿。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
Dear Tom,
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Yours,
Li Hua
假设你是红星中学高二学生李华。你和英国好友Jim原定本周末一起外出，你因故不能赴约。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1. 表达歉意并说明原因；
2. 提出建议并给出理由。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
假定你是李华，你校英语报即将举办题为"Improving Our Handwriting"的征文活动。请 你写一篇短文参赛，内容包括：
1. 好的书写的益处；
2. 改进书写的技巧。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Improving Our Handwriting
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假定你是李华，你校打算邀请外教Ryan在下周五举办的科技节上当评委。请你代表学生会给Ryan写一封邮件。内容如下：
1. 简介科技节；
2. 征求意见并发出邀请。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan,
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Yours,
Li Hua
假定你是李华，在今年的暑假期间，你的好友Tom迷上了网络新闻，请你帮他分析一下网络新闻的利弊，用英文给他一封建议信。
内容包括：
1. 获取最新新闻；减少纸的使用等；
2. 存在虚假信息；易误导大众；
3. 建议。
参考词汇：网络新闻 Internet news
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 注意书写，保持卷面干净整洁。
Dear fellow students,
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“节约”是我们中华民族的传统美德。请根据下列提示，写一篇英语短文，谈谈你身边的 浪费现象，介绍你生活中的节约行为，并号召大家一起传承和发扬这一美德。
提示： food waste, water waste, eat up, ...
要求：
1. 语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范。
2. 根据提示进行写作，并作适当发挥。
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名。
4. 80 词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）
Saving is the traditional virtue of our Chinese nation. However, all kinds of waste in life can be seen at times...
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假定你是某国际学校的学生李华，最近你校举办了一年一度的“英语周”活动，请你给活动负责人Mr. Ryan 写一封邮件，内容包括：
1．评价活动；
2．提出建议。
注意：
1．写作词数应为80个左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. Ryan,
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Yours,
Li Hua
答案以及解析
答案：
Dear Ryan,
I'm really excited to be informed that we are going to start an English official account, which is definitely a wonderful idea. As for proposals, I'd like to recommend "Students' Voice" as a distinctive column.
As studying is always students' top priority, we students are under great pressure and lack opportunities to be listened to. Why not help students express their inner feelings and have a good mood to embrace the tough yet bright future This column, I promise, is bound to be a precious outlet and a stepping stone to communicating fluently in English.
That's all for my advice! Thank you!
Yours,
Li Hua
解析：本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给学校英语社团负责人Ryan写信，为计划创建的英语公众号推荐一个栏目。
1.词汇积累
真正地：really→truly
开始：start→begin
机会：opportunity→chance
建议：advice→suggestion
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：As for proposals, I'd like to recommend "Students' Voice" as a distinctive column.
拓展句：As for proposals, I'd like to recommend “Students' Voice” as a distinctive column, which is beneficial to students.
【高分句型1】I'm really excited to be informed that we are going to start an English official account, which is definitely a wonderful idea. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Why not help students express their inner feelings and have a good mood to embrace the tough yet bright future (运用了why not句型以及非谓语动词不定式作目的状语)
答案：
Dear Adam,
I'm glad to hear that the tai chi club of our school is recruiting new members. Since you're keen on our traditional culture, I'm writing to invite you to join it.
Tai chi has its roots in the ancient Chinese martial arts and it's easy to get started. Not only can it help build up your strength, but it can bring you peace of mind and promote mental well-being. There are various activities in the club, ranging from tai chi classes to some lectures on our traditional culture.
If you're interested, please contact me by this Saturday. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely
Li Hua
解析：本篇书面表达属于邀请信。要求考生以李华的身份，邀请外教Adam加入太极拳俱乐部。
1.词汇积累
招募：recruit→enlist
参加：join→take part in
增强：build up→boost up
课：class→lesson
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Joining the club, you will be given tai chi classes and some lectures on our traditional culture.
拓展句：If you join the club, you will be given tai chi classes and some lectures on our traditional culture.
[高分句型1] Tai chi is a kind of Chinese traditional martial art, which not only helps to build up your body, but also brings you peace of mind.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]If you're interested, please let me know by this Saturday.(运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
答案：
The scientist I admire most
For this topic, different people may have different ideas. Among all the scientists, I admire Yuan Longping most, who is the person with willingness to serve the country.
In my opinion, Yuan Longping is an excellent person. As a top scientist in the world, Mr. Yuan lived a very simple life, but his contributions were invaluable to the field of science and agriculture. Without him and his team, there would still be millions of people having to face the threat of hunger. He devoted his whole life to his country and people, and even to the world.
So we should learn from Mr. Yuan. Love our country and serve our people.
解析：本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写题为“我最敬佩的科学家”的短文投稿, 参加征文活动。
1.词汇积累
想法：idea→view
不同的：different→various
优秀的：excellent→ outstanding
献身于：devote oneself to→be committed to
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：In my opinion, Yuan Longping is an excellent person
拓展句：In my opinion, Yuan Longping is an excellent person that deserves everyone's admiration.
答案：
Dear Tom,
I'm pleased to know you intend to learn to cook Chinese cuisine during your gap year. I think fried rice is your best choice.
Fried rice is eaten as a main dish in China. It is flavorful and easy to learn. Fried rice is made of rice with many other ingredients that you can choose to suit your preferences, such as pork, beef, chicken, eggs and vegetables. It is a fast meal because it not only cooks quickly, but also requires a minimal amount of preparation.
I hope my recommendation will be helpful. May you have a good time learning it.
Yours,
Li Hua
解析：高分句型一
Fried rice is made from rice with many other ingredients that you can choose to suit your preferences，such as pork，beef chicken，egg，or vegetables.
分析：句子里，修饰先行词many other ingredients，关系词that引导定语从句you can choose to suit your preferences，such as pork，beef chicken，egg，or vegetables。
翻译：炒饭是由米饭与许多其他食材做成的，你可以选择适合你的喜好的食材，如猪肉，牛肉，鸡肉，鸡蛋，或蔬菜。
高分句型二
It is a fast meal because it not only cooks quickly, but also requires a minimal amount of preparation.
分析：句子里，because引导原因状语从句it not only cooks quickly, but also requires a minimal amount of preparation。
翻译：这是一种快餐，因为它不仅被烹饪的速度快，而且只需要少量的准备。
答案：
Dear Jim,
I am terribly sorry to inform you that I will fail to go out with you as scheduled this weekend because I sprained my ankle while playing basketball yesterday. The doctor advised me not to walk as much as possible to avoid swelling and pain in my injury. Now I have to attend the class with the help of my father or classmates, and cannot but rest in bed on weekends.
My apologies again, I promise to go outing with you after my recovery, preferably doing something with little physical activity. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
解析：中文翻译：
亲爱的吉姆：
我非常抱歉地告知你，本周末我无法和你一起外出。我在昨天打篮球的时候把脚踝崴到了。医生建议我尽量不要下地行走以免伤口肿痛。现在我要在爸爸或同学的搀扶下去教室上课，周末只能卧床休息。
我真的非常抱歉。我保证在我痊愈之后和你一起去游玩，当然最好是一些运动量不大的活动。期待你的回复。
答案：
Improving Our Handwriting
Good handwriting does bring us lots of benefits. It not only allows us to express ourselves better but also gives pleasure to the readers. What's more, good handwriting contributes to higher scores in the exams.
There are two tips to improve our handwriting. For one thing, we can write Chinese characters well by practising brush calligraphy, which is a traditional and elegant art. It is known that many famous artists in Chinese history have left outstanding calligraphy works. For another thing, we can also follow copybooks in our spare time to improve our English handwriting. Don't forget to ask our teachers for guidance when necessary.
As an old saying goes, “Practice makes perfect.” With effort, we'll definitely improve our handwriting.
解析：题立意：本题要求学生以"Improving Our Handwriting"为题，写一篇英语短文，内容包括： 1. 好的书写的益处；2. 改进书写的技巧。该设题有利于考查学生的英语核心素养，旨在教育学生注意规范书写，同时倡导把英语学习融入中学生的生活。学生可以适当发挥自己的想象力， 用英语思维合理表达，自然过渡到下一表达要点。
答案：Dear Ryan,
I'm writing to inform you of the annual Science and Technology Festival to be held next Friday in our school.
It is a major event for the students. We hope to make this year's festival a success, and your advice would be greatly appreciated. Furthermore, we would be honored if you could consider serving as a judge for the festival. Your expertise and experience would be invaluable in evaluating the presentations of our students.
We are looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours，
Li Hua
解析：高分句型一：I'm writing to inform you of the annual Science and Technology Festival to be held next Friday in our school.
译文：我写信通知你下周五将在我们学校举行一年一度的科技节。
分析：这句话使用了不定式to be held next Friday in our school作定语修饰the annual Science and Technology Festival。
高分句型二：Furthermore, we would be honored if you could consider serving as a judge for the festival.
译文：此外，如果您能考虑担任电影节的评委，我们将不胜荣幸。
分析：这句话使用了if引导的条件状语从句。
答案：
Dear Tom,
I'm writing to tell you that the Internet news has both advantages and disadvantages.
With the help of the Internet, we can use our mobile phones or other devices to get the latest information in a short time. In addition, by reading the Internet news, we can reduce the use of paper, which is beneficial to the environment. However, the Internet news is also flooded with false information, which misleads people easily. With all of that information, the critical-thinking skill is necessary so that you are not tricked.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
解析：高分句型一：In addition，by reading the Internet news，we can reduce the use of paper，which is beneficial to the environment.
翻译：此外，通过阅读网络新闻，我们可以减少纸张的使用，这对环境是有益的。
分析：本句运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：With all of that information, the critical-thinking skill is necessary so that you are not tricked.
翻译：有了这些信息，批判性思维技能是必要的，这样你就不会被欺骗。
分析：本句运用了so that引导的结果状语从句。
答案：
Saving is the traditional virtue of our Chinese nation. However, all kinds of waste in life can be seen at times.
Some students around me don't like saving things. When they eat out, some always order more food than they need. What's worse, they don't take leftovers home. When they go shopping, they always get plastic bags. Others even forget to tum off the lights when they leave.
I'm against wasting I always eat up all the food. I just order the food according to my need. When I go shopping, I always use cloth bags instead of plastic bags and buy what I really need. I always remember to turn off the tap after washing hands. Besides, reusing old things in daily life is also a good idea.
Saving things is necessary and important. I hope there will be more and more people saving from very little things.
解析：高分句型一：When they eat out some always order more food than they need.
译文：当他们在外面吃饭时，有些人总是点比他们需要的更多的食物。
分析：这句话使用了when引导的时间状语从句。
高分句型二：When l go shopping, I always use cloth bags instead of plastic bags and buy what I really need.
译文：当我去购物时，我总是用布袋而不是塑料袋，买我真正需要的东西。
分析：这句话使用了when引导的时间状语从句，what引导的宾语从句。
答案：
Dear Mr. Ryan,
I'm Li Hua. Having experienced the annual "English Week", I'm writing to give my feedback and provide some suggestions.
Admirably, with such a great diversity of activities, ranging from English dubbing competition to talent show, many students extinguished themselves with a high level of English competence. Besides, the carefully selected prizes for the winners literally amazed everyone present. However, I have noticed that there are some students who are unable to participate in any of the activities. Thus, I think it would be better if there could be some activities less competitive or of pure fun, allowing everyone an opportunity to get involved, such as English corner and appreciating English movies.
Your consideration of my suggestions will be highly appreciated. Wish the event a greater success next year.
Yours,
Li Hua
解析：高分句型一：However, I have noticed that there are some students who are unable to participate in any of the activities.
译文：然而，我注意到有些学生无法参加任何活动。
分析：这句话使用了who引导的定语从句。
高分句型二：Thus, I think it would be better if there could be some activities less competitive or of pure fun, allowing everyone an opportunity to get involved, such as English corner and appreciating English movies.
译文：因此，我认为最好能有一些竞争性较小或纯粹有趣的活动，让每个人都有机会参与进来，比如英语角和欣赏英语电影。
分析：这句话使用了if引导的条件状语从句，allowing everyone an opportunity to get involved是现在分词短语作状语。

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