助人型读后续写试题专练及范文(共5份)
读后续写模拟专练01
读后续写 阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
Dawn came slowly. A shaft of sunlight reached into the 4-meter-deep crater(弹坑),making the metal of the bomb shine. The boys were numb and tight, and hungry. They tried not to look at the huge shape of the bomb that appeared over them.
Harry suddenly opened his eyes and seized Jack's arm. "Listen!" he whispered. Jack's eye widened instantly, and both boys strained their ears. They could hear a man talking softly. The voice seemed a long way off. Jack went to shout, but Harry clamped his hand over Jack's mouth. "Don't shout/' he hissed(发出嘘声),"We'll be blown into pieces."
The soft voice came nearer and nearer. Suddenly, an army captain appeared at the top of crater. He was talking to a mouthpiece(话筒)around his neck. He stopped talking when he saw the boys. "What the..." he said, “Who are you " Hairy found his voice, "Jack and Harry Brown." "Is that dog dead " asked the captain. “No: he’s sleeping," said Harry.
The captain spoke into the mouthpiece again, “Sergeant(中士)," he said, stopped and took a breath before he went on. “There are two kids and a dog down here." Then the captain crouched down and stared closely at the bomb. “Don't move and don't speak," he said, "or we'll all go up." He began talking quietly to his sergeant.
Jack and Harry were too stiff to move. They held Raf, the dog, tightly and waited. Another man appeared at the top of the crater. "I thought so," he said, "It's them all right "
"It’s Old Tin Hat!" whispered Jack. Old Tin Hat was carrying a ladder. He and the captain lowered the ladder into the loose earth next to the two boys. "Keep still," the captain warned them. As the captain held on at the top. Old Tin Hat started to come down the ladder very slowly, very gently, step by step. At last, he reached the bottom, and with one movement, he lifted Jack on his back. Harry watched as Jack was carried up. It seemed to take an age.
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With a sudden fall of earth, Old Tin Hat froze halfway up.
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Old Tin Hat pulled Harry onto his back, carrying Raf under his arm.
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翻译小练习:
1. 哈利吓得喘不过气来,但幸运的是那家伙很稳定。
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2. Old Tin Hat又起来了。他一到山顶,手就伸出来,杰克就不见了。
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3. Old Tin Hat又从梯子上下来了,温柔而谨慎。
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4. 最终,他加入了哈里和英国皇家空军。
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5. 尽管哈利暗示那只狗是走在最后,但他坚持说他们会在一起。
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6. Old Tin Hat第二次开始爬梯子。
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7. 男孩和狗的重量使他喘不过气来。
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8. 经过巨大的努力,他们到达了火山口的顶部。
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9. 所有人都获救了!远处传来微弱的欢呼声。
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10. 一群人挤在栅栏后面。
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11. 在那儿,“妈妈!”Hurry冲过去,紧紧地抱着妈妈。后来,消息传来,炸弹已安全运走。
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参考答案:
1. 哈利吓得喘不过气来,但幸运的是那家伙很稳定。
Harry gasped with terror but luckily the ladder was steady.
2. Old Tin Hat又起来了。他一到山顶,手就伸出来,杰克就不见了。
Old Tin Hat started up again. No sooner had he got to the top than hands reached out and Jack disappeared.
3. Old Tin Hat又从梯子上下来了,温柔而谨慎。
Again down the ladder came Old Tin Hat, gently and cautiously.
4. 最终,他加入了哈里和英国皇家空军。
Eventually, he joined Harry and Raf.
5. 尽管哈利暗示那只狗是走在最后,但他坚持说他们会在一起。
Though he suggested that dog went last, Harry insisted that they would be together.
6. Old Tin Hat第二次开始爬梯子。
Old Tin Hat started to climb the ladder for the second time.
7. 男孩和狗的重量使他喘不过气来。
The weight of the boy and the dog made him gasp.
8. 经过巨大的努力,他们到达了火山口的顶部。
With great efforts, they came to the top of the crater.
9. 所有人都获救了!远处传来微弱的欢呼声。
Everybody was rescued! A faint cheer rose from a long way off.
10. 一群人挤在栅栏后面。
A group of people crowded behind the barrier.
11. 在那儿,“妈妈!”Hurry冲过去,紧紧地抱着妈妈。后来,消息传来,炸弹已安全运走。
And there was, “Mom!” Hurry rushed over, hugging his mom tightly. Later, news came that the bomb was taken away, safe.
参考范文:
With a sudden fall of earth, Old Tin Hat froze halfway up.
Harry gasped with terror but luckily the ladder was steady. Old Tin Hat started up again. No sooner had he got to the top than hands reached out and Jack disappeared. Again down the ladder came Old Tin Hat, gently and cautiously. Eventually, he joined Harry and Raf. Though he suggested that dog went last, Harry insisted that they would be together.
Old Tin Hat pulled Harry onto his back, carrying Raf under his arm.
Old Tin Hat started to climb the ladder for the second time. The weight of the boy and the dog made him gasp. With great efforts, they came to the top of the crater. Everybody was rescued! A faint cheer rose from a long way off. A group of people crowded behind the barrier. And there was, “Mom! Hurry rushed over, hugging his mom tightly. Later, news came that the bomb was taken away, safe.
读后续写模拟专练02
读后续写 阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
It was a Saturday afternoon. The color of the sky was changing, first light gray, then dark gray, and finally dark and dense. The wind was blowing heavily, and the trees were swaying in the strong wind. It began to rain cats and dogs. Soon, the road was filled with puddles from the rain.
In such a stormy afternoon, My mother took my five-year-old brother, Christopher, and me to a new big toy store she had read about in the newspaper. "So many toys,“ the advertisement had shouted in full and flashy color, “ that we had to get a huge warehouse to fit them all!”
Christopher and I couldn't have been more excited. We ran across the parking lot, through the cold and biting rain, as fast as our little legs could carry us. We left our mother outside to battle with the frustrating umbrella, which never worked when she wanted it to. "Christine! Take care of your young brother!“ Mother shouted at the top of her voice.
“Christine! I'm going to find the Lego section(乐高积木区)!There's a new pirate ship I want, and I have four dollars! Maybe I can buy it!“ Christopher exclaimed and ran off excitedly. I only half heard him. I took a right turn and, to my wide-eyed delight, found myself in the midst of the Barbie(芭比)World.
I was studying a Barbie and doing some simple math in my head when suddenly an earthshaking clap of thunder roared from the storm outside. I jumped at the noise, dropping the doll to the floor. The lights flickered(闪烁)once and died, covering everything in a blanket of blackness. Thunder continued to shake the sky and lightning illuminated the store for seconds, casting frightening shadows on my mind.
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“Oh no,” I thought, “Where’s Christopher ”
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“Christine, I’m here.”
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翻译小练习:
1. 我当场被吓呆了,我觉得有必要看看,拥抱我的弟弟,确保他没事。
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2. 我的胃扭曲了。我在黑暗中在过道上跑来跑去,惊慌失措地填满了我的小胸膛,使我呼吸困难。
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3. 我撞到了糖果,被玩具绊倒了,还疯狂地叫着我弟弟的名字。
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4. 虽然我很着急,但还是找不到他。沮丧和恐惧的泪水从我的脸上滑落,但我继续奔跑。
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5. 激动得我喘不过气来——在乐高过道里,我找到了克里斯托弗。___________________________________________________________________________
6. 他独自站在海盗船旁,一动不动。
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7. 我松了一口气哭了起来,搂着他,紧紧地拥抱着他。
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8. 他拥抱着我说:“我知道如果我在这里等着,克莉丝汀,你会找到我的。”
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9. 然后,我拉着他的手,我们去寻找我们的母亲,她一定在商店里拼命地找我们。
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参考答案:
1. 我当场被吓呆了,我觉得有必要看看,拥抱我的弟弟,确保他没事。
Scared and frozen on the spot, I felt the need to see, hug my brother and make sure he was all right.
2. 我的胃扭曲了。我在黑暗中在过道上跑来跑去,惊慌失措地填满了我的小胸膛,使我呼吸困难。
My stomach twisted. I ran up and down the aisles in the dark, panic filling my small chest and making it difficult to breathe.
3. 我撞到了糖果,被玩具绊倒了,还疯狂地叫着我弟弟的名字。
I knocked into displays of candies and tripped over toys, while calling my brother's name like crazy.
4. 虽然我很着急,但还是找不到他。沮丧和恐惧的泪水从我的脸上滑落,但我继续奔跑。
Anxious as I was, I could not find him. Tears of frustration and fear trickled down my face, but I continued to run.
5. 激动得我喘不过气来——在乐高过道里,我找到了克里斯托弗。Excitement took my breath away — there in the Lego aisle I found Christopher.
6. 他独自站在海盗船旁,一动不动。
He was standing alone, perfectly still, next to the pirate ship set.
7. 我松了一口气哭了起来,搂着他,紧紧地拥抱着他。
I began to cry in relief, throwing my arms around him and hugged him tightly.
8. 他拥抱着我说:“我知道如果我在这里等着,克莉丝汀,你会找到我的。”
He hugged me back, saying, “I knew if I waited here, Christine, you would be able to find me.”
9. 然后,我拉着他的手,我们去寻找我们的母亲,她一定在商店里拼命地找我们。
Then, I took his hand in mine and we went to look for our mother, who must be desperately searching the store for us.
参考范文:
Paragraph 1:“Oh no,” I thought, “Where's Christopher?” Scared and frozen on the spot, I felt the need to see, hug my brother and make sure he was all right. My stomach twisted. I ran up and down the aisles in the dark, panic filling my small chest and making it difficult to breathe. I knocked into displays of candies and tripped over toys, while calling my brother's name like crazy. Anxious as I was, I could not find him. Tears of frustration and fear trickled down my face, but I continued to run.Paragraph 2:“Christine, I'm here.” Excitement took my breath away — there in the Lego aisle I found Christopher. He was standing alone, perfectly still, next to the pirate ship set. I began to cry in relief, throwing my arms around him and hugged him tightly. He hugged me back, saying, “I knew if I waited here, Christine, you would be able to find me.” Then, I took his hand in mine and we went to look for our mother, who must be desperately searching the store for us.
读后续写模拟专练03
读后续写 阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
There was a thick forest on the sides of a mountain. Many kinds of animals lived in the forest. A deer was eating grass and leaves with her two young ones. The young ones wandered happily here and there. The deer followed her fawns (幼鹿)into a cave. The deer was frightened because it was a tiger's cave. There were bones of dead animals all over the cave. Fortunately, the tiger was not inside the cave at the time.
The deer was trying to lead her young ones out of the cave when she heard a loud roar. She saw the tiger at a distance coming towards the cave. It was dangerous to go out of the cave now. She thought of a plan. The deer raised her voice and shouted, "My deer young children do not weep. I shall capture (捕捉)a tiger for you to eat. You can have a good dinner."
The tiger heard these words and became frightened. He thought, "Whose is that strange voice from the cave A dangerous animal is staying inside to capture me. I shall run away to escape death." The tiger began to run away from there as fast as possible.
A jackal (胡狼)saw the running tiger. “Why are you running in great fear " the jackal asked. The tiger said, "My friend, a powerful and fierce animal is in my cave. The young ones are crying for a tiger to eat. The mother is promising to capture a tiger for them. So, I am running away."
The cunning jackal was now sure the tiger was a coward (懦夫).It said, "Don't be afraid. No animal is fiercer or stronger than a tiger Let us go together to find out.”
But the tiger said, "I do not want to take a chance. You may run away. I will be left alone to die. So, I will not come with you."
The jackal said, "Trust me. Let us knot (打结)our tails together. Then I will not be able to leave you." The tiger agreed unwillingly to this proposal. So the jackal tied their tails in a knot. Now they walked towards the cave together.
注意:
所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
应使用至少5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词;
续写部分分为两段,每段的开头已为你写好,不计入总词数;
续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词。
Para. 1
The deer saw the jackal and the tiger coming together.
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The tiger was shocked to hear this and he was sure now the jackal cheated him.
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翻译小练习:
1. 她对着站在山洞里的孩子们喊道。
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2.我亲爱的孩子们。我请求我的朋友。聪明的豺狼,为我们捉到一只老虎。
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3. 看那豺狼为我们捉到了一只老虎。
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4. 他把老虎的尾巴绑在尾巴上。这是为了防止老虎逃跑。你很快就会把老虎当晚餐了。
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5. 所以,老虎决定从站在洞穴里的可怕的动物身上逃脱。
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6. 他开始跑。他忘了那只豺狼。他把豺狼拖过岩石和荆棘。
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7. 在疯狂的逃跑中,豺狼被夹在两块岩石之间。老虎使劲地拉。
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8. 他的尾巴被切断了。豺狼在这次事故中丧生。
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9. 没有尾巴的老虎跑向森林的另一部分。鹿和她的幼鹿离开了老虎洞。
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10. 他们安全地加入了牛群。头脑和智慧的存在可以使人免于危险。
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参考答案:
1. 她对着站在山洞里的孩子们喊道。
She shouted towards her children standing inside the cave.
2.我亲爱的孩子们。我请求我的朋友。聪明的豺狼,为我们捉到一只老虎。
My dear children. I requested my friend. The clever jackal, to capture a tiger for us.
3. 看那豺狼为我们捉到了一只老虎。
Now look the jackal has captured a tiger for us.
4. 他把老虎的尾巴绑在尾巴上。这是为了防止老虎逃跑。你很快就会把老虎当晚餐了。
He has tied the tiger’s tad to his tail. This is to prevent the tiger from escaping. You will soon have the tiger for dinner.
5. 所以,老虎决定从站在洞穴里的可怕的动物身上逃脱。
So, the tiger decided to escape from the terrible animal standing inside his cave.
6. 他开始跑。他忘了那只豺狼。他把豺狼拖过岩石和荆棘。
He started running. He forgot about the jackal. He dragged the jackal over rocks and thorns.
7. 在疯狂的逃跑中,豺狼被夹在两块岩石之间。老虎使劲地拉。
In the mad escape the jackal was caught between two rocks. The tiger pulled with all his might.
8. 他的尾巴被切断了。豺狼在这次事故中丧生。
His tail got cut. The jackal was killed in this accident.
9. 没有尾巴的老虎跑向森林的另一部分。鹿和她的幼鹿离开了老虎洞。
The tail-less tiger ran away to another part of the forest. The deer and her young ones left the tiger’s cave.
10. 他们安全地加入了牛群。头脑和智慧的存在可以使人免于危险。
They joined their herd safely. Presence of mind and intelligence can save one from dangerous situations.
参考范文:
Para.l
The deer saw the jackal and the tiger coming together. She again raised her voice. She shouted towards her children standing inside the cave. “My dear children. I requested my friend. The clever jackal, to capture a tiger for us. Now look the jackal has captured a tiger for us. He has tied the tiger’s tad to his tail. This is to prevent the tiger from escaping. You will soon have the tiger for dinner.
Para.2
The tiger was shocked to hear this and he was sure now the jackal cheated him. So, the tiger decided to escape from the terrible animal standing inside his cave. He started running. He forgot about the jackal. He dragged the jackal over rocks and thorns. In the mad escape the jackal was caught between two rocks. The tiger pulled with all his might. His tail got cut. The jackal was killed in this accident. The tail-less tiger ran away to another part of the forest. The deer and her young ones left the tiger’s cave. They joined their herd safely. Presence of mind and intelligence can save one from dangerous situations.
读后续写模拟专练04---开车半路救人
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文
A young and successful manager had a new Jaguar, whose side* door was dented (凹陷的). The damage was very noticeable, but the manager never bothered to repair it. He kept the dent there to remind him of one afternoon as well as this message:Don't go through life so fast that someone has to throw a brick at you to get your attention!
The manager was traveling down a neighborhood street, going a bit too fast in his new. Jaguar. He was watching for kids rushing out from between parked cars and slowed down when he thought he saw something. As his car passed, no children appeared. Instead, a brick crashed into the Jag's side door! He braked sharply and drove the Jag backward to the spot where the brick had been thrown. The angry driver then jumped out of the car, grabbed the nearest kid and pushed him up against a parked car, shouting, “What was that all about and who are you ”
The young boy apologized. "Please mister ... please, I’m sorry. . . I didn't know what else to do," he begged.
“I threw the brick because no one else would stop. . ." With tears coming down his face, the little boy pointed to a spot just around a parked car.
“My elder brother fell out of his wheelchair and I can't lift him up. he said.
Still crying, the boy asked the astonished manager, "Would you please help me get him back into his wheelchair He's hurt and he's too heavy for me. ”
Moved beyond words, he hurried to the spot with the boy. Another boy was lying on the ground bleeding. He took out his clean handkerchief and touched lightly at the fresh scrapes (擦 伤)and cuts. A quick look told him that the wound was serious, the disabled must be taken to the hospital at once.
注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Luckily, he had a first-aid kit in the car.
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In fifteen minutes, they arrived at the nearest hospital.
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【范文赏析】
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Luckily, he had a first-aid kit in the car. Immediately, he took out a bandage from the kit, and lied it lightly around the wound. Slowly, he got the disabled into the back seat of the car, while the younger brother sating beside to take care of him. Then the manager folded the wheelchair and put it into the trunk. Starting the car quickly again, he rushed toward the nearest hospital. On the way, he handed his smart phone to the younger brother to call their parents, and constantly comforted the two brothers to take it easy.
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In fifteen minute, they arrived at the nearest hospital. The manager got out the wheelchair and lifted the disabled into it and hurriedly pushed him to the emergency center. When giving the injured boy to the medical workers, he got released. At this time, the younger boy and his parents came to him and gave him heartfelt thanks. Finally he drove his car to work, with the side door still dented.
读后续写模拟专练04---马戏团购票
读后续写 阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
Once, when I was a teenager, my father and I were standing in line to buy tickets for the circus. Finally, there was only one family between us and the ticket counter.
This family made a big impression on me. There were eight children, all probably under the age of twelve. You could tell they didn't have a lot of money.
Their clothes were not expensive, but they were clean. The children were well-behaved, all of them standing in line, two-by-two behind their parents, holding hands. They were excitedly talking about the clowns, elephants, and other acts they would see that night with their brothers or sisters in a low voice.
One could sense they had never been to the circus before. It promised to be highlight of their young lives. The father and mother were at the head of the pack, standing proud as could be. The mother was holding her husband’s hand, looking up at him as if to say, “You are my knight in shining armor.”
He was smiling and responding in pride, looking back at her as if to say, “You got that right.” The ticket lady asked the father how many tickets he wanted. He proudly responded, “Please let me buy eight children's tickets and two adult tickets so I can take my family to the circus.”
The ticket lady gave the price. The man's wife let go of his hand, her head dropped, and his lips began to shake. The father leaned a little closer and asked, “How much did you say ”
The ticket lady again quoted the price. The man didn't have enough money.
How was he supposed to turn and tell his eight children that he didn't have enough money to take them to the circus
Actually we were not wealthy in any sense. So I understand how the kids would feel. I felt sorry for them.
注意:
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语己为你写好;
Paragraph 1
Seeing what was going on, my dad put his hand in his pocket, pulled out a $20 bill and dropped it on the ground.
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Paragraph 2
That day my father and I went back to our car and drove home without any tickets.
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参考范文:
Paragraph 1:
Seeing what was going on, my dad put his hand in his pocket, pulled out a $20 bill and dropped it on the ground. Then he picked it up and tapped the man on the shoulder and said, “Excuse me, sir, this fell out of your pocket.’ The man turned around and saw the money. He knew what was going on, he looked straight into my dad’s eyes, took my dad’s hand in both of his, squeezed tightly onto the $20 bill, and with his lip shaking and a tear running down his cheek, he replied, “Thank you, thank you, sir. This really means a lot to me and my family.”
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That day my father and I went back to our car and drove home without any tickets. We didn’t go to the circus that night, when I asked dad why he did so, Dad said, “My child, it was a desperate, heartbreaking and embarrassing situation for a father. Surely he wasn’t begging for a handout, but he reminded me of my father, when I was young.” He paused for a while, as if wandering in his memory. “We should appreciate what we have obtained from life and seize every opportunity to help others. We didn’t go to the circus tonight, but we didn’t go without. Now, who wants an ice cream ”
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